im slightly confused...you like repeated an entire part in the chaper...like harry asked if they could sit there and neville talked about mimbletonia or whatever then ginny cleaned it up.then it happend again.
idk i'm probably going insane.neville's gran is named agusta i beliveAuthor's Response: Augusta! Right! I totally knew that *shiftyeyes*
But the goal for this story was basically to show Neville and Luna's opinions of one another the first time they met. I might go and add another part to the story, but aside from that, this is plotless as well. I'm sorry if that was unclear. Please don't go mad. I heard that it was... maddening. lol. Report Review
Wait a minute...they didn't hook up yet!! I want to see some more development in this relationship. A kiss or two would be awesome.
Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. I'll see about continuing the story, but for right now, it's a completed one-shot. Thanks for the review though! Report Review
That was so cute! I love how you used the male and female symbols as POV transitions. I always loved this pairing. Are you gonna write another Neville/Luna story? If so, let me know!Author's Response: I thought that the symbols were cute as well. I was actually a little surprised that they went through, actually. But I don't believe that I'll be writing another Neville/Luna story... at least not yet. Thanks for the review! Report Review
great chapter u have here. i can't wait to read more. will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I've been trying to get to another pairing, but I haven't been able to do so yet. I'm feeling a songfic coming soon though, so I'll add that as well. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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