great job but just letting you know that James doesnt have green eyes like you said somewhere in this story. in the deathly hallows it says albus was the only potter to inheirent harrys eyes but you did a real nice job writing this story i loved it

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WAIT SCORPIUS AND ROSE DON'T END UP TOGETHER?

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Oh my Merlin. I CAN'T EVEN. I love this story so much, seriously, you are my lady crush, you're among my favourite authors! Can't wait to read Dixies story! :)

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I love this story so much! It's an amazing story and I have read it a million times! Even before I was a member! I love Charisma so much!

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Brilliant! I usually write a big blurb here...but I don't feel the need seeing as I would rant on how amazing your writing is, and let's not forget the amazing story!
Thank you so much, don't stop doing what you love.

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I just started reading this story, but I have a quick comment on logistics of age...u said lily was 15? But if James is in his 6th year, albus is 15, and lily should be 13, cuz according to the epilogue she is 2 years albus' junior.

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Loved this story, I couldn't stop reading it! At times, as with most novels, I got a bit annoyed with some of the characters but that's just natural cos most of the time, they do make some pretty bad decisions. I hung onto every word though. Could do with a clean up on spellings and stuff but the plot was amazing :D

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I loved reading every word of this story. Please keep writing, you have an amazing talent.

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Loved every minute of it. Was superbly written, the words were imaginative and the characters were captivating.

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Oh gosh, tears in eyes. That is all.

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My hearts racing so bad! I'm so tempted to skip till the end just so I know it will all end up alright, but I'll be good and continue reading :)

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I've just started reading this but I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read the rest! :)

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Besets most favouritest story of all time. I love you loopyluna. Thank you for the amazing story. I love chic and James I love Dixie and Ellie and scorp androse and lily and ginny.you get the picture. Thank you so much for this amazing story, I am going to favourite it RIGHT NOW!!! Bye x

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I found this sadder than when her parents were killed

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Oh my goodness! That is an amazing story, I loved every second i was pretty much addicted to it.

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Personally I'm quite the fan of 'not' nice Charisma.

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This chapter is hysterical.
Best quote ever was w/ Lily "yeah yeah dad we don't wanna hear about the good old days" or maybe it was the bit about stroking the tv. what a great sense of humour.

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This is great. I can't help loving this story, honestly, it's probably my favorite of all time. I really love how well you develop each of the characters. the story flows really smoothly and makes me laugh. if it werent so great i would be able to stop re-reading it!!

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LOVED the story it was fun and so cute
please write more stories like it
love it

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This is my fourth time reading this and it never fails to make me cry, which is incredible because the only book I've cried while reading was Deathly Hallows. Amazing!

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Love this! James is already making me swoon and giggle obnoxiously. Also, did you get the guys' greeting from Mortal Instruments or is it just a weird coincidence?
Keep Writing!
~LillyFaye

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I love Charisma as much as you and it's a great first fanfic! I couldn't write one half has well as you!
My fav line- If I nod to James, its me saying, I am a man, and I am saying hello, and I acknowledge that you, too, are a man, and are greeting me in the same way.
It's just an awesome line, I don't have to have a reason for loving it!

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You. Rock. Come on, write more stuff?!

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I've been waiting 4 them 2 kiss since I read Chapter 4 and I'm ask half it's finally happened! I love this story so much! ^.^

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What's tokky mean? I don't get the reference, but other than that I love the story!

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