excellant story, very intense, I hate sad endings, I was really hoping for a last minute surprise that she was alive, but anyway, EXCELLANT story.Author's Response: Sorry I've been yelled at alot for the ending but that's the way the song goes but I'll have some much cheerier stuff up soon. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Why did you have to do this to me? To kill one of the sweetest persons and pain the other one, just like that?
You know, I may have reached forty, but you made me cry. It was so brilliantly written. Every single sentence, every single emotion is just REAL. Their love, their affection, the joy of being together ... and the pain of parting forever.
And then, closing down with this utterly final sentence "It was just the two of them again". You are cruel! But then, fate is always cruel!
And ... I know now for sure I'll be addicted to your Harmony. I've recently started writing Harmony as well and it's always interesting to see what other writers think about this ship.
Very well done and a perfect 10!
ZoltanAuthor's Response: Wow a perfect 10?!?!?! *stares incredulously*
Thank you so much Zoltan. I really enjoyed writing this story even though I knew every single word would drive them further and further towards the inevitable end. Though I was unsure who was actually going to die until right at the end myself.
As for the why, I have always loved this song but I listened to it the other day and it was begging me to do it. I couldn't resist and the only pair that fit properly were Harry/Hermione. No one else could have properly conveyed the love, caring, and despair required (not with me writing anyway).
As for the crying, I did it myself the other day (but don't tell anyone) while reading one of the stories in my favorites. There are so many brilliant writers on here who manage to embed you in the storyline right alongside the characters.
Oh and that final sentence popped into my head as I was posting it and I thought it fit so well and truly portrayed the finallity of the tragic event.
So after all my waffle, thank you so much for reading, and even more for such an amazing review. I am truly glad you enjoy my work.
P.S. See Harmony is just the best. Everyone should write Harmony, face the facts people, they belong together. Report Review
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