This story is really good. Like really good. I knew the exact place the story was being told from the first line and when she started to talk about white hair I knew who it was and who she was talking about without you explaining a thing! So amazing! Report Review
Oh wow, it's beautiful!Author's Response: Aw, well thank you! I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Oh, I really liked this. I haven't read many stories, or any stories, actually, where Narcissa isn't a complete *colorful word.* I really thought that you wrote her character with a lot of depth and emotion. Even Lucius' character had feelings, which doesn't happen often. I thought this was marvelous, the whole Malfoy family love. I also really like the song choice,. I like how everyone kind of pictures them as like complete evil people, and you wrote this from their point of view, and it kind of showed how they are human, I guess. Kudos to you.Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you did! I was a bit apprehensive about it at first, unsure if I could pull it off or not. I mean, it's like you said - the Malfoys aren't exactly the most cuddly of families, now are they? But like all parents, I imagined that Lucius and Narcissa would go to extreme lengths to protect their son - which is why they were doing Voldie's bidding in the first place by the time of the 7th book. And I love Lucius/Narcissa. They are probably one of my favourite ships aside from James/Lily, Sirius/OC, and Remus/Tonks. I just imagined their loving being, well, simply put, unique if not a little indifferent to the outside observor. I dunno, for some reason, I just see Lucius as the secretly dedicated husband. Perhaps I'm deluded, but I love Lucius - secretly, of course. Lol.
Anyway, thanks for the review! I appreciate it! Report Review
Wow, that was just brilliant. The description and emotion was completely amazing, and all the Malfoys were really in character, as well. Wonderful job 10/10Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm surprised that people don't think that they are out of character - I was really worried about that. Anyway, thank you for your review! It's awesome. Report Review
This was, for lack of a better word, amazing. I love the darker characters when they're given actual depth and meaning - and you did that. I sympathized, teared, smiled (Lucius/Narcissa = swoon), etc. You write very well and I couldn't tear my eyes away.
Awesome job! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was extremely worried that I made the Malfoys act out of character, so your words are very reassuring. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me. Report Review
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