PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!
its marvelous in every way. your writing is phenomenal and the plot is incredibly intriguing(:

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When are you going to updaate! This is so interesting. It reminds me of the movie Thirteen :)

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DAW adorable.
HIHI I like this. So cute.

Author's Response: Thanks!! :D

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That was good! One thing about the ear piercing experience, I pierced my own ears, and it's best to ice them first and take an advil or something, because otherwise they swell up and stay red for an hour. So yeah...
XO

Author's Response: yea i know. somehow i forgot to include that. I've pierced my own ears a few times. haha also the whole belly button piercing. it actually does feel like that. when i got mine done i was like, I HAVE TO PUT THAT EXPERIENCE INTO A HPFF! :D haha I'm just lazy and don't like to edit my stories cuz they take forever to be re-validated.

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Oooh, house party! I'm in love with this. Rose and Lucy work so well together(:

Author's Response: not for long ;)

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Hey Bee,
So since you're stalking me, I decided to stalk back. THIS IS REALLY GOOD! XO

Author's Response: Hahaha thanks ^_^

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I WANT MORE! I almost forgot the names of the children. I have never read a fan fiction about them but I liked this one.

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omg i luv this story plz plz update son

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omg this story is so sxy when are u going to update

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plz plz plz update plz

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plz updat plz i luv this story

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hey
the story is really good
first I thought it might be like the movie 13 but now I think there are still some differents
please update soon

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The amazing banner caught my eye and whala! Here I am reading your story. And now im caught! I don't know if I should like Lucy or hate her. Your story reminds me of the movie 13. And in the movie I ended up hating the "lucy". Meh I still love the story! Finally something new other than Head Boy and Head Girl stories...Oh well...can't wait till your next chapter!

Author's Response: O my gosh it reminded you of thirteen!?!?! that's where i've gotten a lot of my inspiration and ideas for the story! of course it will be different but i'm glad someone picked up on that! And i'll tell you now that you might end up hating Lucy in the end but she's really not so bad, just a little off the deep end =) Thanks so much for the review! Hope you keep reading and Reviewing!

-Nat

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luvd ur story...its great!
Ur banner is super cool too, ive been struggling to upload a banner, i really dunno how to!
I luv stories with scorpius and Rose in them

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:] and so the good girl makes the change to BAD girl lol. i see it slowly happening. yay, keep writting :):)

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this seem like a good story.
i like the first chapter. its a great start. i can tell this is gonna be good. also at the start you say scorpius was a mistake. i hope that means DRAMA lol because everyone loves a bit of drama. keep writing :]
xxxEvans

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Is Rose in Slytherin?

Author's Response: Yep. Her and Lucy! They're kind of the black sheep of the family. =)

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I really like this story. Sounds good...though I can't judge yet. But your name is sweetos cheetos cause it's my name too!

Author's Response: Thanks! And That's Cool. I've never really known anyone with the same name as me. Not personally anyway. But i'm glad you like the story so far. i hope to update soon. =)
-Nat

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yay!
please don't give up!
I very intriged and cant wait to see what they do!
10/10

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good start. interested to see where this goes. and you totally need a banner :)

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