WHAT?!?!?!!?? LUCAS SAID ALIX'S NAME? I THOUGHT HE WAS IN LOVE WITH DEVON!!!Author's Response: Plot Twist ! :) Report Review
GREAT! But also, I forgot to say, she couldn't have been hit on by Cedric, CEDRIC'S DEAD! AND HE'S NOT COMING BACK!Author's Response: ? Her Mum was hit on Cedric not Alix, she was in the same year as Cedric & Fred and George Report Review
I really like this chapter.full of emotion.plus I love sea monkeysAuthor's Response: Thank you :) And I know they're awesome ! :D Thanks for the review Report Review
This story so far sounds like a one about Lily/ James, Its actually quite cute really. My favorite character so far has to be James: People with big ego's is just so funny in story'sAuthor's Response: yeah I thought it would be like a curse, your called james you fall hopelessy for a girl lol thank you, he is mine :P Report Review
LOVE IT! When will James propose? Guess I just have to read Reable in Law to find out. Can't wait! :DAuthor's Response: Heehee, yes you will lol thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
Loved it! :D But being a Grammar Nazi I am very sorry to say I only gave you 9/10 ! :)Author's Response: Thanks :D And I'm dyslexic so just be glad its just grammer but thank you so much!! :D Report Review
I cried, my granda has Alzheimers so I know what it's like. Thank for showing how people deal with this, it's quite hard.Author's Response: I'm so sorry :( And your right it is hard, I hope you get through this. And thank you for reviewing :) RsG xo Report Review
Im crying... How could she?!? Stupid Eve Adams ! now i remember who she is ! do me a fauvor and make her die a painfull long death! ( in Rebel in Law ) thats just a request... love da story!! yaaayyy! Author's Response: Aww don't cry :( It's really really tempting too believe me, and thanks for loving the story :D Thanks for reviewing ! RsG xo Report Review
this was really brilliant. I thoroughly enjoyed it and i like the un hogwarts stuff you added like cheerleaders. keep up the good writing.Author's Response: Oh thank you :) And I know, I feel you know what? Its beyond 2000 J.K rowling, add some modern stuff we can relate too. and since she didnt i did :) thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
O.M.G i cannot belive its over ! i started crying a chapter ago!! its such a sweet and sad romantic story ! amazing...really amazing! beautiful...really.wow! Author's Response: Aww I know, but I am writing a sequel :D Aww thank you for the amazing reviews :D Thanks AGain RsG xoxo Report Review
I loved this story!! You did such a great job. I cant wait to read the sequel. :)Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for the review :-) RsG xoxo Report Review
amazing best ever story yet xx :D xAuthor's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D Glad you enjoyed it !! Thanks for reviewing ! RsG xOxO Report Review
its over... i haven't been this sad for a story to end since i read deathly hallowsAuthor's Response: Oh thank you :D That is by far a pretty impressive review to have and I am bouncing that my story got it :D Thank you so much !! RsG xoxo Report Review
Its 2 a.m and I started reading at about 6 p.m ! I loved this story! I would have reviewed some other chapters, but I was to focused on the story! What happened to eve though? and are Lucas and India together? Anyway this was beautifully written, and I am finally off to bed. 10/10Author's Response: Aww thank you so much :D Haha one review means everything, :) Eve's not gone . or is she :P She'll be explained in the sequel :) Thank you so much and sweet dreams! LOL Thanks so much for the review :) RsG xoxo Report Review
Great story! can't wait for the sequel :DAuthor's Response: Aww thank you :D And I'm writing it :) Thanks for the review! :D RsG xoxo Report Review
GREAT story!!! You are an amazing writer!!! I can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Aww thank you :D ! And aww shucks *blush* still a long way to go lol first chapter up soon :) Thanks for the review :) RsG xoxo Report Review
STOP WITH THE 'YOUSE' AND 'OF' INSTEAD OF 'HAVE'! otherwise i like it :)Author's Response: As I've said, I am dyslexic, so they're not deliberate. I am slowly learning :) Thank you for the review RsG xoxo Report Review
aww i loved the ending:) it was amazing! can't wait for the sequel!Author's Response: Aww thank you :D Sequel being written :) Trying not to rush it so it isn't spoiled :) Thanks for the review :) RsG xoxo Report Review
Ummm ... Your story is really good but I just have to point out one thing . James is a year older than Albus and Rose ... Other than that great storyAuthor's Response: Hi :) Not in my story, I've made it so Albus just gets into the same year. Thanks for the review :) RsG xoxo Report Review
I loved the chant, reminded me of a certain football team ;)Author's Response: Heehee ;) Might of took inspiration from said football chant lol Thanks for the review! RsG xoxo Report Review
ahhh! The ending to this story was so beautiful and happy - well done!Author's Response: Aww thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it :D Thanks again for the review ! RsG xoxo Report Review
That was a really sweet ending! I'm kind of confused though because I thought Albus was a year younger than James?? But great ending, and really cute how you thanked everyone who reviewed at the end >.< I'm looking forward to the sequel!Author's Response: Aww thank you :) No, theres like 9 months between them, so he just got in the same year :) Aww well they deserved it :) least I could do. Thanks again for the review :D RsG xoxo Report Review
OH MY GOD! IT WAS AMAZING! I LOVED IT! I LOVED IT! I FREAKIN' LOVED IT! haha this was the perfect ending to your story!!! YA! HAHA! I'm speechless, it was just so good I cannot wait for the sequel. I wish I had more to say, but this was AMAZING! that is all I can really say. You are wonderful, you're a doll, you're writing is a blast to read and it is extremely enjoyable! I'm glad to have finally finished! Amazing work. Really truly amazingly wonderfully brilliantly great work. I loved it, I always love it. 10/10 Pure awesomeness. NatalieAuthor's Response: Hahhaa Oh Im glad you liked it :D !! Oh thank you so much, your a doll for leaving me such an awesome review :) Thanks again for the 10/10 review ! RsG xoxo Report Review
Uhmm. spellcheck, and commas would be AMAZING. :) Good job, though. Keep up the good work. ;)Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry about those but I am dyslexic. So, they're not deliberate :) And thank you for the review :) RsG xoxo Report Review
LOVE IT! Can't wait for the sequel to come out! Amazing story!!!Author's Response: Thank you! :D Should be up soon :) Thanks for reviewing :) RsG xoxo Report Review
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