A simply beautiful story. Gosh, it made me tear up. Well done!

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I've been run over by the truck of feels... again. I swear, every time i read a story about the last night i start sobbing. I love James and Lily so much and they were perfect and they had a perfect family and it was all lost and i just CAN'T sometimes, okay?
Beautiful. Heartbreaking and Beautiful.

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Wow i love this so much :) i think your're a brilliant writer! keep writing stories like these because it makes me really happy reading them! xx

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that was so beautiful! I love it :)

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What a wonderful one shot. A very enjoyable and emotional read, well done, cazvalleygirl :)

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wow! So short but it still almost reduced me to tears. I thought I was going to cry and i think I would have done given another paragraph! If you edited this to make it longer, it could be incredible. A little more detail would make this amazing!

well done on writing such a great story! Please feel free to review one of mine (I'd love some advice from such a great author!) Thanks for writing it so well!

Rosmione xx

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THAT'S SO BLOODY FUCKING ADORABLE!

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.That's one of the best ways I could ever put Lily Marie Potter's *Nee Evans* death. James' as well. Thanks for that.

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Amazing- I love the ending. The importance of love really shines through. Excellent piece of writing as well!

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i sobbed. i absolutely sobbed. this was the most emotional hpff i have ever read, and it was beautiful

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wow, very well done. i liked the use of real details we know from Rowling herself. very intruiging

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Very nicely done. Sad, but nice.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Wow!!! Short and sweet, I can definately see Lily thinking those exact things before she dies! So sad, it really angered me when she was talking about Peter knowing their secret, I guess I shouldn't get mad at a fictional character...

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought I got Lily's thoughts right. And I get mad at fictional charcaters all the time too, that's what happens when we get great stories such as Harry Potter. Thanks for reviewing :)

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So, I'm, like, dying here. The chills, the narration ... This is well and truly amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so touched by your comments. It means a lot that you took the time to review!

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That was really great! super sweet and deep! loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot that you liked it and took the time to review!

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Beautiful, simply beautiful :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that you took the time to leave a comment!

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Wow that was truly amazing. This just proves that a story doesnt have to be long to hold so much emotion and power. I really thought this was incredibly well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the kind words. They really do mean a lot. I'm glad you didn't mind that it was short, I thought about trying to make it longer but I thought it was long enough to include everything I wanted to, and I'm glad you agreed!

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OMG I loved your story it was so short and to the point but so meaningful and sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! It is short, but I'm glad you thought it got everything across that I was hoping! I'm so grateful that you took the time to review, it means a lot :)

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defenitely not the average tale, thanks. It was good,reading it, and thinking about all the stuff that happened afterwards made me tear up :(

Author's Response: Thanks so much. It is such a well known story, but I'm glad you thought my version of the events was unique. Thanks so much for taking the time out of your day to review, it really makes my day :)

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awww! it's so sad, but so cute at the same time! you did a really good job at capturing what she must have been feeling.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I agree it is a sad story, I wish it could have had a happier ending but that's the way it was written. But thanks so much for the sweet words and for taking the time to review!

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that was so sadd :'( it made my heart ache so much, i really wish lily and james hadn't been killed now.
well, that was a really nice one-shot, and the emotions were really strong and well-written (i really liked the flashbacks that lily had.) :) i wish it could have had a happier ending, but history is history. :P good job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words, you are so sweet. I wish I could have given you a happier ending too, but alas it was not my choice. But thank you so much for the review, it really does mean a lot :)

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Short, but sweet. I always like to see James and Lily interacting with baby Harry.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I like to think of them interacting with their baby too, because unfortunately we never got to see that in the actual books. Thanks for the review!

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That was fantastic! Beautifully written! I loved it! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! You are so sweet! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review, it makes my day :)

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This is beautiful and heart-breaking.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot. And yes it is a rather heartbreaking story, but I'm glad you thought it was beautiful as well, I tried to add some uplifting elements to balance out the darkness. Thanks again!

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This is brilliant! I LOVE IT! JilyRonks x

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. Your just taking a moment to leave a little comment means so much to me. Thank you, and I'm gald you enjoyed it!

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