So sad. Beautiful! I don't know, I can't think up a good review, haha. Report Review
this is really sad. and sweet.
and well written.
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WOW! Fantastic one shot!!! Soo soo soo sooo goood! I loved it. I would love a sequel or prequel or maybe just a rose scorp story in general because you are an awesome writer. also ill just take this moment to say that what it is to burn is awesome and Conventional Wisdom is bloody fantastic and is my favourite story at the moment. just thought i would tell you lol.
10/10 for the fantastic one shot! Report Review
I love that song! Well, this was great, I liked Scorpius's point of view. This was a great one-shot, your descriptions were not tedious, it was just perfect. This was a really good idea because you portrayed Rose and Scorpius properly and the whole thing where Scorpius is looking back in those flashbacks really added to the depth of this story. Great job on this!Author's Response: Yeah, I love it too! I'm glad you liked it. It was very difficult to write for many reasons, the main one being that I'm not all that used to writing relatively depressing stories. But I felt that, for once, Rose and Scorpius don't get a happy ending. After all, I think a lot of authors skate over the family issues and stuff, so I figured that I could use that as the reason they were driven apart. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Wow, this is just wonderfully written you have done it again! *hug* I don't know what's missing it was very moving and sad perhaps a bit vague on the details but I don't think you need to delve any more into what happened between Scorpius and Rose its understandable from what you've written.
SandyAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you very much, Sandy. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and yes, I agree with you that it is a bit scant on the details, but sometimes, things just write themselves that way. Anyway, thanks again for reading and reviewing. It's very, very much appreciated! Report Review
Hmmm, I think I liked this! The train of thought seemed a little random, but I think that made it all the more poetic. It seemed the style was looser than most pieces, but I think you handled it well. When you said "it just seems a little off" I think you were referring to this looseness, considering it's not the stereotypical way to write something. But I think it's quite well done, and the flow adds to the tragedy of their lost love.
imagine_the_magicAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate that you read and left a comment about it. Thanks much! Report Review
Sad but an excellent one-shot fic!Author's Response: Thank you! I must say, it's one of the more depressing pieces that I've written, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
it was too amazing for words. very very well written. perfect.
loved the flashbacks and thoughts. very scorpius malfoy.
i just have a question that is troubling me.
"I had no idea she would be taking a piece of me with her when she made the decision to forsake this world and transpire into the next"
from that line. she didn't die, did she? please say no!
nonetheless, a 9/10 for sheer amazingness.Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And I'm sorry to disappoint you, but she did die. It's up to you to decide how, but my mind tells me it was a suicide, which explains why he's lamenting.
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