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Review #1, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap King Henrik

7th March 2015:
“The Captain of the Gryffindor Quidditch team, starting in the fall, is my sister, Lily Potter.”

I knew it!




Mistress, I can't wait to read the sequel and leave you reviews and cry at my desk and cheer for James and the rest of the team. This is wonderful. See, Lily was right and so was I. Everything works out in the end. It always does even if you can't see the silver lining.


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Review #2, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap A Complete and Utter Joke

7th March 2015:
She slapped the side of my face. “You found a way around it.”

^ Yes Lily, yes. Avery is going to make her team and Bink is going to make his. I think he will as a reserve though. Is that why he pushed Rose away? Because he knows he's not going to be around and he won't be able to have a real relationship? Oh Bink!

I think James will do it. I mean we have a sequel happening but I think he has too much talent for someone like David Flynn to ruin his life and his career in one shot. By his letter James showed that he has more to offer than just what he does on a broom.

He has heart.

That's what all exceptional players need (and have).

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Review #3, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap You're a Quidditch Player

7th March 2015:
You know all about it, considering our last team meeting was devoted entirely to it. But we have something they don’t.”

“Face symmetry?” Freddie offered.

I know there's a sequel and everything for the most part is going to turn out all right in the end but I'm still going to miss these little parts. There's going to be new characters I'm sure and we won't see these guys just as much. They will be there I know but these moments, these quips from the ones I have become so attached to are everything.

Wow. I didn't think they were going to win. I actually started crying the moment it just...they...I just...I thought they were defeated. What I liked most about this chapter was Lily. She is going to be a great captain one day. She's already a great sister. A great friend and motivational speaker. She's a mini-Ginny but still has her own flair. She's fantastic.

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Review #4, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap She's the Talent

7th March 2015:
I'm thoroughly embarrassed by my last few reviews for this story. Looks like using my phone in the cold and reviewing was not a good idea. They don't make too much sense!

Anyway, what is up with Bink? Is he back with Meta? Or did he get a Quidditch offer with Meta? What's with this Meta business? We haven't heard from her for ages. Of course she's going to pop up in the end.

Maybe it's a good thing! Maybe she can help James get a deal.

How sweet was it when James wrote that letter? She's the talent. Gosh, even though he's an immature boy he has a heart of gold. I think you can see that throughout the entire story. I think that's what makes James such a likable character and brings me back for each chapter. I'm always rooting for him no matter what.

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Review #5, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Best Friends

7th March 2015:
Now I'm on the train and my fingers hurt because it's cold but I made through this lovely chapter. James, you are so transparent and so is Avery. Just snog each other already and Lawson! I thought it as Scorpius to be completely honest with you and I loved the Albus part. I agree! He should be expelled and who know Albus was such a lover and a fighter! Haha.

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Review #6, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Sweet Sixteen

7th March 2015:
I'm at the train station waiting for the train (obviously) with no gloves on so I can read and review this story talk about dedication. Tears in my eyes because it's cold and Bink is a wrong wrong man. He's just trying to provoke James, I think he knows about what Avery said to him. It's really cold I wanted to say things about Freddie. Smart things instead I will say: go Fred!

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Review #7, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Prefect Duty

7th March 2015:
“What?” he said. “I’m half black. That’s my method.” He shrugged.

Giggles. Lots and lots of giggles.

She explained all about elf rights, how insensitive we were, how happy she was Hugo brought it to her attention and about how ashamed she was that two of her nephews had the audacity to shame her work.

Hugo doesn’t know how to have fun. What a wet blanket.

“Look at this,” I said wildly, throwing my hands in the air. “My baby brother is blackmailing me.” I moved my arms around him, pulling him into a too-tight hug. “I’m so proud!”

Oi, what a relationship.

Watch out, men of Hogwarts. He’s going to steal your women.

Not really. Can’t even get one to be his girlfriend.

HAHA. Wait I couldn’t stop laughing. Like an awful cackling laugh when this happened:

Albus chuckled. “Can’t promise you that, baby. I live on the right side of the law.” I didn’t see it, but I knew he straightened his Prefect’s badge.

Al, I love you.

This was a great chapter to read now that I have to go make a trek through the cold and the snow to get to work. Grr! Thanks for entertaining me as always Mistress.

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Review #8, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap The Good-Luck Ducks

4th March 2015:
She gaped at him. “You were serious?”

Oh no. Oh that’s awful. I can’t stop laughing. I’m just as bad as they are.

“Play your cards right and we can go back to my room tonight.” Rose smirked.

WHAT. Rose, you are a hot fox. A hot tamale. You are sinister.

You go girl.

“I want you, James.”

I want them together but then at the same time I don’t. I feel like their relationship turned abusive and just changed who they are completely. They brought out the worse in each other when they used to bring out the best.

Love can make you do crazy things and it can also make you crazy.

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Review #9, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap The Hospital Wing

4th March 2015:
“She’s a fifth year.” He shrugged. “She’s just nice and stuff. She wears sneakers with her robes. She laughs at my jokes. I mean, I want to and all…but I’m kind of just having fun with her.”

Freddie wants a girlfriend. A real one. He wants a relationship with feelings.

Aw, my Freddie is growing up.

“Would it bother you if I took Rose on a date?”

I knew it. That sexual tension.

We're going to beat Slytherin and it's going to be amazing and James and Avery are going to be amazing and they're going to be pro players. And Ginny has pull too! It'll all work out in the end. It always does. have a sequel. Haha. :D

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Review #10, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Explosion

4th March 2015:
The words cut me like icy wind. Never had something that horrible come from such a beautiful mouth.


“That’s easy to say when you’re a self-absorbed girl without a real father who won’t play --- Quidditch anyway!”

Double no.

“Your what?” Paloma choked. Come to think of it, Bink and Fred did too. Wesley just made a noise. Probably at the ‘Jordan’ remark.


But forget about that nonsense. WOAH. James blew up and Avery deserved it. She never listened to him at all. If she did she could have found out the truth and not the half-truth. Let her mull that one around for awhile. I thought he was going to cry. Heck, I thought I was going to cry.

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Review #11, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Back into Ravenclaws

4th March 2015:
Best Lines:

- “Obviously not impressed with your scrawny frame.”
- “I have my own color,” Freddie said happily. “Let’s make a crayon.”
- “Girls are weird. You never do that.”

Bink and Rose have that sexual tension thing down pact.

Haley Star is actually cool. Why must you do this? I would like to see them date but Avery is his girl. Uh, I’m conflicted.



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Review #12, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Like Father (like son)

4th March 2015:
Last night she was nervous, holding herself awkwardly in front of me.

What if her father threatened her? What if she’s really lying and she talked to him and the only way he would let it go is if she got rid of James?

“Oh you mean like her slinky bra?” I said, snorting with disgusted laughter. Ew. My parents. Slinky things. That was disgusting. I could have been created when she was wearing that bra. That was not okay.

I have a request. Write Harry and Ginny. Their story. No? FINE MISTRESS, YOU WIN.

The Harry/James scene, marvelous. Now we’re hunkering down to the last few chapters. I know you said you wanted to do something different so maybe they don’t end up together.

Pooey. Just don’t let Nia get James, okay? I’ll be mortified.

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Review #13, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Getting Mushy

4th March 2015:
“James is getting paid!” Bink squeaked. “Paid. Like…we’re paying him money. To come out here with you two. Paid. Galleons. Right, Fred?”

Real stealth Bink. Honestly.

I loved mommy time and daddy time was okay. It would have been better if James wasn’t in such a mood but Avery time was no good.


Javery, what are you doing to me? She’s clearly jealous. Go for Nia and Avery will probably slap him again.

Rawr. Cat fight.

Mistress, I know you won’t read my reviews because this story is old and finished but I just have to say I’m sick with a cold right now and I’ve dedicated my entire day to reading your stories and I’m not mad about it. You make me feel better. So, thank you.

Author's Response: What?! I love your reviews and read every single one of them. I check reviews multiple times a day. Pshh. I will also respond to each one. Thank you!!!

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Review #14, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Quit Playing Games (with my Heart)

4th March 2015:
“But look, James, she went and took a shower. And then she came back. And then she was in this towel, right? This like, white towel. And it was white. And a towel. Around her. And she was naked under the towel.”

The most amazing part of this story. Hands down.

Drunk Al.


White towel. And a towel. It was white. I cannot stop laughing.

“Said something about muffins and ran for it,” Albus said, wrinkling his nose.


“James is my boyfriend and if you so much as kiss another part of him you won’t live to tell the tale.” Her hand was shaking.

HELLO. Thank goodness. Someone had to do it. Thank Merlin it was Avery. Nia needs to get beat.

What a cop out. She broke up with him because she loves him too and that’s what is too hard. No one is against them and the code doesn’t even exist anymore. I’m disappointed in you Avery Flynn. I really am.

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Review #15, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Negative Seven

4th March 2015:
Lily put her hands on her hips. She was holding my old broom. The Firebolt Seven-Twenty. Good broom, just not as sweet as the Firebolt Chaser model.

Called it. Lily Potter, welcome to the team. She doesn’t need to be briefed on the Code because she knows the Code.

It’s perfect. You’re sneaky. You knew you were going to do this all along, didn’t you?

Well…now she really can’t date Wesley. Not like she would listen to James ever.

“Negative seven is the new seventeen,” she teased and sat with the other people who had caught it thus far.

I love her sass.

This chapter was lovely besides the Avery waiting. I love when we get to hear from Harry and the fact his relationship with James has gotten better. Also, James finally accepting Lily for who she is. I feel light and cheery.

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Review #16, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Yolkified

4th March 2015:
I glanced over, vaguely aware of the fire in my eyes. “Stick to what you know, Al.” I sat up, ruffling my (soft) hair. “By the way, that’s not Quidditch.”


My money is still on Lily but if it’s Albus then the Code can be forgotten once and for all.

I hope James and Avery don’t go back to being just friends. He’s in love with you, girl. Come on! Everyone gets to make one mistake.

James makes several but when it comes to you it was just one.

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Review #17, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Hurting Avery Flynn

4th March 2015:
My Saturday night was spent avoiding Avery again.

I smell doom.

You know, if doom smelled and all.

Uh. I understand why James doesn’t want to tell Avery. On the one hand he has never had that much respect or understanding for Harry so he probably doesn’t realize if he went to his father he could help him again. Second, I guess he thinks Mr. Flynn has power but remember all the info he found out about him? He’s seemingly forgetting about that because it’s obvious he doesn’t. He just knows an in with shady people since he’s shady himself but if everything came to light he would have nothing and Avery and James would be okay and so would their careers. Then there’s the fact Avery wants a father. Yes, I think that’s the biggest issue but Avery trusts James. She just needs to tell her. It’ll hurt but she still has him and everyone else in her life. By not telling Avery he’s killing hurt trust and hurting their friendship AND relationship.

“I got signed by the Arrow’s reserve team,” Meta said simply. “They’ve been calling up players left and right to the Arrows since they’re all injured.



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Review #18, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Dance Dance

4th March 2015:
You have Daddy to run to. Who does she have?

^ EW. DISGUSTING. I'm disgusted beyond belief. I take it back. He's worse than Emerson Edwards. He's despicable. This is all going to come to a head by the last match I bet you. Come on James, Harry could HELP you with this guy and Avery needs to know the truth but the longer you wait to tell her the truth the worse it's going to be for your relationship.

Really despicable. A villain you love to hate.

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Review #19, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Enemies

4th March 2015:
“But it might take some coercing to make me want to snog you again. Considering now you’re damaged goods.” Emerson walked out and slammed the door behind him.

EW. Emerson Edwards is a toad.

With warts.

Giant pus filled warts.

And now I don't want to eat my lunch.



AVERY, SHIELD YOURSELF. James, you have your work cut out for you!

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Review #20, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Abigail is a Finches Fan

4th March 2015:
“How many did we get?” Bink said in a cheerful tone, falling down next to me in the empty seat.


The appropriate response to the above question.

I’ve honestly been laughing out loud really loudly in my room for the past hour reading this story. Time well spent.

Insert: the downfall to Avery and James; her low-life of a father. So James isn’t going to tell Avery. She’s going to bond with her father and then she’s going to find out his true intentions and get into a fight with James and then things will really get dramatic.



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Review #21, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Language of Gentlemen

4th March 2015:
“I enjoy fish. And chips. They’re very fishy. And chippy.”

“Okay, James,” Dad said with a brief sigh. “Tell me what’s going on. What’s this about you being a rubbish captain? There’s no way.”


And now I’m hungry.

“We can talk about Quidditch some other time. Right now it’s important to get your friends back on your side. At least not on the same side as this Twitwards bloke.”

Just imagining Harry say ‘Twitwards’ is giving me a bad case of the giggles.

“Guys, I like her more than you understand,” I said in almost a whimper.

Good heavens they’re worse then little gossiping girls. Haha.

That was the best chapter I’ve read in quite some time. Amazing. I’ve fallen in love with James.

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Review #22, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Laundry Trouble (and Company)

4th March 2015:
I like you.

Those three words make breaking the code worth it.

Haha. Harry’s letter was great at the end. It’s wonderful he’s going to finally open the lines of communication with his father and listen to what he has to say. Me thinks things are going to get better for James here on out.

Or more complicated but let’s try to think positively.

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Review #23, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap The Worst Type of Hypocrite

4th March 2015:
You’ll wear a nice dress—let’s pick something that hugs your curves a little, hmm?”


“That is an extremely reasonable offer.”


Thank goodness for Albus and Lily. His relationship with the two of them has strengthened from chapter one to thirty-two. I feel like Albus and James have a better understanding and James is allowing Lily to grow. I think Bink and Freddie will forgive James. Of course they’re going to put him through the wringer first but this is a legitimate relationship with real feelings.

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Review #24, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Caught

4th March 2015:
“He appreciates me!”

Does he Nia, does Darian Bay really appreciate you?

The answer is no.

How much you want to bet she slaps James when she finds out about Avery?

Seventh Year Skip Day.

Because when do they all go to class anyway? By class and they all I mean: WHEN DOES JAMES GO TO CLASS?

Everyday is skip day.

Albus and Paloma were in a tight embrace, making out in the stairwell. Her hair was all over the place and his glasses were askew.

YES! Three cheers for Albus, hip, hip..HOORAY!

I knew Emerson would find them. Emerson, I take back what I said. YOU DO NOT DESERVE LOVE.

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Review #25, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Kiss and Tell

4th March 2015:
“I’m really excited about it,” Emerson said. “I was thinking a fancy dinner in Hogsmeade. Steak probably. Then a stroll around the grounds. Heating charms provided.” He snickered at himself. I almost threw up in my mouth.

Me too James, me too. I hate Emerson just because he’s a tool but I actually feel sorry for him. He deserves love too. Just not with Avery.

I felt numb. Lily snogged Bink. My best mate. And my baby sister.

NO! I did not see that coming.

Wonderful. No more friends with benefits. They’re dating and it’s nice…so far. I know there’s going to be a big blow out eventually but come on he can’t mess it up THAT fast. That’s what we have sequels for.


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