This is just not okay! Lawson has to be expelled! He's causing serious bodily harm to students, how is nothing being done about this! If they want to be sure that no one is lying then they should just give everyone Veritaserum, that should clear everything up.
I was so happy when I read expelled before I realised that it was only Albus yelling and he had no real authority. I wish Sinatra was expelling Lawson. Report Review
How does anyone not want to date Albus? Seriously though, now do you not want to date Albus? I want to date Albus, he's just gotten so awesome and I love badarse Albus! I LOVE IT!
I hope to see Albus kick some more butt as the story comes to a close (you better fix James and Avery!) Report Review
Permission to slap Bink and Fred as hard as I possibly can. Is it the thought process of all teenage boys to get laid whenever things go wrong with relationships?
And on my God James, why, why did you have to bring Gaia into this! Why did you have to say all of that stuff! Just leave it at being friends and leave! Now Avery's going to think that she didn't mean anything to him while they were dating and ugh, things are just going wrong! Report Review
Goddamn, Abigail is abusive! Honestly, Freddie seriously needs to rethink his reasons for dating someone (and getting laid is not one of them). I felt like I should've reported Abigail to the police half the time -but then I realised that she was a fictional character and it went away.
I'm so happy that Fred is finally rid of her! VIVA LA FREEDOM! Report Review
I've always imagined old Harry as looking like Robert Downey Jr as well. He just looks like an older version of Harry. Speaking of Harry, I absolutely loved him in this chapter. His advic was pretty funny even though it worked and he just seemed so laid back.
Everyone is friends again . . . Mostly at least. Avery can be scary though, the way that she snapped at Bink and Fred was epic though. Report Review
Is it okay for me to just kill Clint and Emerson? Can I just kill them and hide their corpses. I got so angry with those two. To hate someone so much that you would risk getting expelled just to get even with them or bring them off their high horse. THAT'S INSANE! I mean I've hated people but I'be never been crazy or hateful enough to do something like that! Report Review
Oh no, I just know that things are going to end bad. As badly as I want James ad Avery together I have a feeling that bad things are going to happen and that peopl are not goons to be responding very well at all. Report Review
I used to think that Elizabeth was okay and normal and I still kind of think that but less so. After this she's turning into Nia more and more and those two are becoming class A creepy fangirls (there's a difference between fangirls and creepy fangirls).
I'd keep reading but it's late and because of that I'm a little bit worried about what you mean when you say that James gets Paloma and such. Report Review
I was starting to think that maybe Nia was okay but that went down the toilet when she started calling James "Jamie." I really wish that James would just tell Nia that he's not freaking interested.
I love sassy Avery, she's just a little ball of sass and it's hilarious. I'm loving the fact that she's finally standing up for herself to Emerson and Castaso.
Meta seriously needs to get it together. James may not have handled the situation well at the beginning but he handled it well now and hell he even apologized and Meta can't even acknowledge the fact that she broke the rules and did something wrong. If she didn't want to get punished then she shouldn't have broken the code, simple as that.
James trying to stay anonymous though was pretty hilarious considering that he kept messing up and including personal names. Report Review
I was so happy that they kissed but then Jamea had a panic attack and just ruined it all.
I gotta say, Avery, she's my home girl. FINALLY she told one of her little fans off! I was getting so annoyed with her because she didn't say anything but she really handed it to Castaso. I'm proud of her, you will not believe how proud of her I am! Report Review
I'm so proud of Avery! I was hoping that she would stop goons out on dates with Emerson. I mean, come on, a guy ordering my food for me would be a deal breaker as well.
Now when it comes to Clint Lawson, I think he was accusing James with inaccurate facts. He doesn't just discard women, that would have to imply that he actually dated and slept with them, none of which he did.
If James does date anyone, I hope it's Elizabeth because she's more decent and not creepy and I actually like her! Report Review
Emerson is a sleazebag. Does Sinatra know that he abuses his powers so much. Honestly, Avery should stay away from him. I can't believe some of the things that he says and does.
At first I felt just plain bad for the bloke because James seemed to be picking on him for no apparent reason but now I can see why he does it! I'm hoping that Emerson gets taken down by the end of this. Report Review
YOU GO AVERY! I am so proud of her! I am just so proud that she didn't act scared and sad but handed it to her dad! Go Avery!
And I love how James still hasn't realised that he likes Avery even though it's really obvious. Report Review
What happened to Nia! She was all nice and decent and then all of a sudden the needy and desperate person pops out of her and its like "woah"
I have finally come across a story where James doesn't wound like a complete girl! HALLELUJAH! Report Review
You are a fantastic writer!!! Your story was all smiles and a lovely read! Thank you so much for writing such a marvelous piece of fiction! I read all of it in ONE go..(which didn't go down well with my boss though as i was glued to the pc even at office... but it was all worth it! This is also why i didn't take a break to review all the chapters (Sorry for that though.. i was just greedy for more ;)) Going to check out the sequel now... :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for reading it! And in ONE go!! Seriously. And I completely know what you mean ... I tend to write while at work when no one is watching. I really hope you enjoy the sequel! It's in its baby stages now, but I'm having SO MUCH FUN with it!
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Absolutely, positively AMAZING.Author's Response: Aw, thank you SO MUCH. You're the sweetest. The sequel is up and I hope you like it! Report Review
I love your characters! They're freakin awesome. Can't wait to finish and read the sequel.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I really appreciate that. I love writing them. Most of them (cough - James) write themselves, which makes it easy on me.
I really hope you like the rest of the story and the sequel -- I'm having a blast writing it!
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Thanks for a great story that I stayed up till 6 reading I love itAuthor's Response: Wow, four for you! That's awesome. I hope you enjoy the sequel! Report Review
I personally like Scorpios being a little ferretAuthor's Response: I'm glad :) thank you! Report Review
I'd date bink. He's the nicestAuthor's Response: Haha! I love Bink. He's lovely.
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Oh my god is it weird that I actually ship Healey and James right now?Author's Response: Haley? Nah, not weird. It's easy to ship something as uncomplicated as them. Most people did during this chapter.
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AmazingAuthor's Response: thank you so much! I really hope you enjoy the sequel :) :) Report Review
Great chapter! Pretty funny :)
I have a feeling Al and Paloma are both scared to make the first move (typical :P) and as for the gift, I have no clue whatsoever.
Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me! Report Review
Aw, that's so cute. And yes, quite intense. :P Update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me! Report Review
A cheeseball, haha. That was funny. :P
"Kiss and Tell"? Well, someone's kissed, and someone's going to tell. Or something completely random ;) Great chapter, update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me! Report Review
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