I am so mad I didn't read this earlier and when I say earlier I mean years ago! Your writing style is phenomenal. You know it's good writing when you start thinking of a fanfic for a fanfic.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! It has been ages since I started Keep Away, hasn't it? Wowza. I feel old. Thank you SO much for your review! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I really hope you like the rest -- and any of my other stories if you decide to try them out. I'm considering a story that relates to the epilogue of this. Thanks! Report Review
I am so sad the story is over! I loved it! Jane and Oliver were the perfect couple, and it was so much fun reading about them. All of their stupid fights, and George and Katie's stupid fight... about napkins, haha. I will definately read your other stories, because I loved this one. I would love it if you wrote a one shot or something about Jane and Oliver! Keep up the good work, because your stories are great!Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really loved following Jane's journey through Hogwarts and after. She is so dear to my heart. I'm actually planning a story about their daughter, Georgiana, if you're interested. But I'm not going to work on that until after 30 Days has been completed (22 chapters). Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the other stories you sample! Report Review
Mallory Knox - Lighthouse so fits this chapter... also while I remember... What the hell is apple turnover?Author's Response: Google it :) It's delicious. Thanks for the review! Report Review
You write so well! I can't lie, I cried during this chapter during the conversation between Jane and her dad.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. I remember crying when I wrote this chapter. It's a very painful thing to go through so many emotions at once. Thank you for the review and I really hope you like the rest of the story! Report Review
Great story. Interesting characters. Hard to stop reading, because you want to know what happens nextAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the review! :) Report Review
I . . . I just don't know what to DO with my LIFE! Honestly, the only other fanfiction I've felt this passionate about is The Art Of Breathing by AC_Rules. I must of re-read it at least seven times. But somehow, I feel like this will leave an even bigger mark on me. I am so proud of you for all of your accomplishments. I know I don't know you, but I'm still proud. I hope I can write as well as you someday. I would also like you to know that I have spent countless nights (and several hours when I should have been doing homework) reading this amazing story. The only hope I have to restrain myself from falling into a state of depression is to look up your other stories that you mentioned in your (final) author note. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I have a tendancy to carry every story I read with me, and this one will definitely cloud my thoughts on a daily basis. Good luck in the future, and even though you have a fancy journalist job now, please never stop writing fanfiction. (Because if you don't I don't know what I'll do with my life) Again, thank you so much. - Paige, 14Author's Response: Well, AC_Rules is very awesome. And funny. So I definitely get that. I am thrilled you enjoyed both these stories. And following along as you read was my favorite part. And thank you so much. It feels so strange such a big part of my life happened while I was penning Jane and Oliver. well, homework is for nerds. (aka me) Please do give my other stories a chance if you get the time. If you liked this one, you'll probably be fond of 30 Days, because it's in a girl's POV as well. The other two are male protags, but I love them dearly. thank you so much for your kind review. I'll probably be writing fanfiction until people stop reading it, really. So thank you for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts. It really means a lot to me. Thank you so much, Paige :) enjoy the other stories. Report Review
FINALLY. FINALLY, FINALLY JANE!!! YOU GO!Author's Response: YOU GO GLEN COCO. thanks :) Report Review
OH LORD ROGER DAFQ ARE YOU DOINNGG?!?!Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA. Yes. Report Review
Umm well now I'm far more depressed than I was last chapter . . . AND I want unattaibable cake.Author's Response: Ohmygosh i want cake. Thanks! Report Review
Wow. Way to depress me. I ditched studying for french to get in on some Jane/Oliver-snogging-and-possibly-shagging-by-the-pond action, but apparently not. Well then, thanks.Author's Response: SORRY. I'M SORRY, OK? Maybe not. thanks for the review! Report Review
FAVOURITE QUOTES: - “I am here,” Fred Weasley said, stepping into the clearing, “To negotiate the return of—what the (fudge), Lee? How did you get caught?” He had Angelina strung over his shoulder, hitting his ass hard with each step. - “I’m going to find him,” he said, narrowing his eyes and slapping Ang’s ass. “We have twin-connect. It’s like mind power.” He paused dramatically and turned around, peering at the forest. “For twins.”Author's Response: HAHA. Those are some of my favorite quotes too. Can you tell how partial I am toward Fred? I love Oliver and all, but I would fall for Fred in a second. Thank you! Report Review
ahahahah "casualties" We must move on.Author's Response: Hehe I forgot all about that. So funny. Thanks! Report Review
OH MY ROWLING BEST CHAPTER OF LIFFEEE!Author's Response: HAHAHA. It did turn out rather well. Thanks! Report Review
AH AWKWARD CONVERSATION COMING UPPP! HATE AWKWARD CONVERSATIONS! UGH IM SO SCAREEDDD!Author's Response: HAHA. Yeah I love awkward conversations WAY too much. Which I'm also sure is obvious. Thanks! Report Review
AHhHhhhH ADHFAODHAODJCOAWEHFOWEFHAOWEFHQWOKFJCAOEHFOWANCAOIDCNWOEFHOWEIFHAOWEHFQOWIHFCOAWNFQOIWEFHOWACIOWIEFNQWOFHASLDFHAOIFHAOEFHQOWHFOIADHFAOFHAOWFNASDFGHKLASDFGHKL ASDFGHKL ASDFGHKL ASDFGHKLAuthor's Response: HAHA. I think that is an accurate reaction :) Thank you! Report Review
SO MANY SQUEES ITS UNBELIEVABLE AND I JUST WOKE UP MY PARENTS AND MY SISTER BECAUSE GUESS WHAT, MISTRESS? IT'S ONE O'CLOCK IN THE MORNING -- AGAIN. AND I'M ADDICTED TO THIS STORY.Author's Response: Uh oh. I will apologize to your parents though... WHOOPS. Report Review
I'm really supposed to be doing my science homework right now. I was supposed to start at seven. It is now ten twenty-eight. You are doing this to me, mistress. I hope you know that you are ruining my science grade.Author's Response: WHOOPS. Sorry. Tell science I say sorry as well. I was never really fond of science. You know what, SCIENCE? I'M NOT SORRY. NO ONE LIKES YOU. Report Review
She is most definitely not a keeper. She sounds worse than Libby - she sounds so DAFT. And she's so superficial . . . really, who would pass up a QUIDDITCH PRACTICE to go get their HAIR done?!?!?!Author's Response: Yeah she is a real piece of work. You can just imagine how much Jane loathes her. Thanks! Report Review
ERMMMHHAGERD THIS IS CRAZY AND AWKWARD AND FUNNY AND WHAT WHY IS BASTIAN THERE AAAHAuthor's Response: He's just hanging out. nbd. Thanks :) Report Review
Yes!! Itching to here from Gred and Forge!!Author's Response: I do love them. Which is obvious. Thanks! Report Review
THEY'RE SO CUTE. CUE AWW'S AND FLUFF AND MARSHMALLOWS AND CUPID'S ARROWS AND STUFF.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me! Report Review
That was a great chap. By the way, where the heck do you find all those hot men? and can u please humor me and tell me how to make banners as amazing as yours? Thank youAuthor's Response: Ohmy. I love the hot men. I find most (but not all) of my portrayals over on Bellazon. They have a great selection of people to use. And pictures! If you have the patience. Ummm. How to make banners like mine... photoshop? Lots of fonts? Overlay? haha. You give me too much credit. Thank you! Report Review
It's almost 4:30am and my day is going to start at 5:30am. However, I couldn't stop myself from reading until I knew that Jane and Oliver were okay. Discovered that I never actually got to finish this story when I looked back at reviews I'd left previously and then didn't remember anything that was going on. It's still as wonderful as I thought previously and I'm thrilled I'll be able to come home later and finally finish this story! So glad I looked back! =)Author's Response: Whoa. All-nighter on jane and Oliver. You're the best and I really, really hope you weren't too tired during the day. or slap-happy. Thank you again for reading and rereading! I really appreciate it. Enjoy the rest! Report Review
Ahhh they got married!!! Finally! I was a bit sad that alicia and lee didnt get married though. Oliver and jane are the best couple out there though. Absolutely Perfect. What happened to Peter? Well this story is one of my favorites. I love your stories and everything. From the beginning middle and end, everything was really captivating. Keep it up!Author's Response: Nah, why should they have to get married to be happy? Alicia and Lee are together and that's all that matters. They aren't the certificate kind of people anyway. Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
Isn't she like dating liam? Oh love triangle. I like it. make new stories too! I love them!!!Author's Response: Haha, she isn't dating Liam. She went out with Liam dancing and to dinner and a fundraiser, but they aren't actually dating. I have 3 other stories going at the moment -- hope you enjoy them! Thanks for the review! Report Review
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