i love this chapter! especially the mild corporeal punishment... ;) Report Review
Omgomg i wonder what will happen an having to wrote 20 characters is annoying Report Review
I love this series - this is maybe my 4th time reading it. (I don't think I've reviewed before, though)
You've become one of my favourite authors. Can't wait to reread this series again! Report Review
Loved it, we'll written. Loved the faerie additions. Yes, sequel!Author's Response: There is a sequel posted called Return to Prince Manor if you want to read it! Report Review
I hope the second part to this story is better than this.Author's Response: Well, if you don't like it, then don't bother reading it. Report Review
Still not a fan kids dont change that fast it takes more than a few week or months to decide your going to be a diffrent person thank you were for the last 14 years. I doubt any 14 year old would ever call another man Dad even if they were really their father.Author's Response: Well, that's your opinion. I have a friend who's adopted and she was ten when she was taken in by her foster parents and sh called them Mom and Dad within a few months because she loved and respected them. If you read on, you'll see it's not as easy as you seem to think for Harry to call Sev Dad and so on.
Might I suggest reading all the story before making these snap judgments? Or not reading it at all if you seem to dislike it, as you've made clear from the first chapter? No one's forcing you to read it, and if you're predisposed to hate it, then nothing you read of it will please you. So why are you still reading? Report Review
Harry would never trust snape this fast.Author's Response: If he had nowhere to go and someone who defended him to his rotten relatives AND that someone was his father, for better or worse, why wouldn't he? After all, he trusted a criminal like Black who killed his parents and 13 Muggles almost right after Remus vouched for him and Black didn't do a damn thing otherwise to convince him of his innocence. Sev's done far more for him a week than Black ever did then and Harry was way too trusting of him on hearsay.
Again, don't like, don't read. Report Review
Not so much a fan of this chapter.Author's Response: Okay, whatever. Report Review
I am upset with this chapter, Petunia is too nice with helping snape. The story advanced to quick with her telling snape and harry that snape was his father. If anything harry shouldnt have been there for that she told have told snape first and then later in a diffrent chapter he should have told harry then patunia could confirm. I was very rushed and this chapter came out messy. A sectet as big as that should have not been said so quickly unless it wasnt important but based on the name of this chapter being Petunia's Secret it seemed that you wanted it to be important.
I really want to stop reading the story because I am frusterated but I will continue for now because I do believe it will get better.Author's Response: Sorry you feel that way but sometimes things just come out. Remember, Petunia doesn't want Snape to die, then she can't get Harry out of there and off her hands. She wants Harry to leave and Snape is her best bet. Yes, it's a big secret, but that's the whole point of this story. Why drag it out? The story doesn't need some long drawn out thing, it needs to move quickly to the main event, which isn't Snape is Harry's dad, but the relationship between the two and Draco.
I find it hard to believe someone would stop reading the second chapter of a story simply because it's not written the way YOU think it should be. I usually give even boring stories half a chance and read 100 pages. You're not even doing that. I wrote this with another person too, so its not just my input, and some authors don't do things that way. It took a lot of time and effort to write this, so just give it a chance.
And please try and remember AU--NO books, so the characters will not act like they do in canon. I CANNOT stress that enough. DON'T expect canon characters here, you won't get them. If you do expect them, then maybe stop reading my stories, because hardly any of them are that way.
I write good, redeemable, NICE Snape. If that's not your cup of tea, then please don't read. Some of the other characters, like Draco and Petunia, are also nice.
A lot of people have liked this story, if you don't, then so be it. Report Review
Good start, I know this story is old but i was going to read Return to prince manor then decided it best to read this one first.Author's Response: Yes, that would be best. Otherwise you would get very confused. Report Review
I spend half of my free time taking naps. Report Review
Good ole Sev! Teach those miserable bullies a lesson!(exept Petunia.) Report Review
hey I heard you finished return to prince manor with 79 chapters! I remember reading it with about 50 then it got to 60 and was WIP so I said I would wait till your done to read it. That is great news! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy it!
I also have a few companion pieces to go with it that are also complete. They are Prince Manor: Bubble Bubble & Trick or Treat Slytherin Style (Harry & Draco with their girlfriends' Halloween tale) Wizard's Luck & Unlucky (Harry's St. Paddy's Day tale) and Silver Doe (Sev's tale of his Patronus). There are references through out RPM that mark where you should read those tales, except for Silver Doe, whihc should be read last after finishing RPM. Report Review
I had read this story 2 years ago and thought of it after a while. I love this story! :)Author's Response: Yay and thanks! Report Review
3rd time rereading the story. That's a record for me.
GAAHHH!!! I LOVELOVELOVE HOW YOU ENDED THE CHAPTER!!! Report Review
i love your story only i was kinda hoping to see what it was like at school. :( for the rest it was awsome. i love the bikering and how severus reacted to everything. also the fea were awsomeAuthor's Response: There's a sequel to this story, a very long one, called Return to Prince Manor. That goes into the school year. It also goes into a lot more detail with the fae. Report Review
An amazing Author strikes again!
~CreedAuthor's Response: Glad you're enjoying this and hope you continue to. Report Review
I have absolutely no clue as to what Sev shall do now. I would personally alter their minds, but I do not believe Sev would approve. I must stop reading for now. Thank you, Author, for a wonderful day.
~CreedAuthor's Response: No, he wouldn't. He'd prefer to make them scrub their fingers to the bone, among other things. Report Review
At least Malfoy Jr. and The Former Potter can play Quidditch together. I don't get enough practice, living in a Muggle neighborhood as I do. I hope they will reside well under your care, Author.
~CreedAuthor's Response: Yes, once they decide to stop beating each other up. Report Review
I am very disappointed in you, Sev. The Sev I knew in my younger years, and continue to be in contact with now, would never have done that to Dumbledore. But, I don't particularly care. I do wonder what shall happen when Harry and Draco collide. Must go. A knock at my door.
~CreedAuthor's Response: Oh, there will be sparks and more sparks flying trust me. Report Review
Well. Harry certainly should know how to use a quill. I myself even know how to, even though I have never attended Hogwarts. About Draco, though, he'll certainly be in for a shock, though I doubt he'll recognize him. Good tidings.
~CreedAuthor's Response: he should, but he was never properly taught. And Draco will be shocked all right. Report Review
An essay on alternatives to drinking? Hmm... I don't know, smoking, doing drugs, living live me, murdering people, going into depression... Yes, there are a great many alternatives to drinking, Sev, and not all of them are good. Great work, though, author. Sorry, I've already forgotten your name.
~CreedAuthor's Response: True, but there ARE good alternatives too, like reading, painting, drinking other beverages, listening to music, talking to someone.
It's Snapegirl, by the way. Report Review
Ridiculous. Harry is acting like a crazy person. If I were Sev, I would kill him, but, then again, I do have a crazy passion for killing off characters.
~CreedAuthor's Response: I only kill those that deserve it, like Voldemort and a few others. Poor Harry is very upset and confused. Report Review
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