Oh my gosh, I cannot breathe proprely at the moment, this is WAY too hilarious, but she makes everything sound so serious! Pun unintended. Kudos to you, and now I shall continue.

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I. Absolutely. Love. This. Story. Seriously, this has to be one of my favorites!! I love Mellie and Sirius!! :D Gosh, they are so adorable! And James is, true to character, absolutely hilarious! Pleeassee update soon! Can't wait for the next chap! :)

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excellent story!! please keep writing, its been like a year since you put this chapter up...please dont tell me you've abandoned it!?
this story makes me laugh so hard, i definitely love everything about it, and i NEED to know how the rest of it goes! please keep writing!!

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oh goodness. i cant get over how much i absolutely love this story.

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Loved this chapter! I wish you would pick this story back up and continue it!

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love this story so much!!

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i enjoy the camelot theory! and i love this story!!

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not my favorite chapter, but i love love love the story!!

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i know i've said this every chapter, but i cant stop laughing, this story is so funny, i LOVE this POV.

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love this story!!
mellie is so funny.

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i was literally laughing out loud through this entire chapter! great job, please keep writing!

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oh my goodness. this mellie is hilarious. please dont stop writing this, i love this story!!
it was recommended on a forum,and i am SO glad i found that thread!

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oh goodness, this is hilarious! i see its a wip, please write more!!

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This is a very funny story! Please update soon!

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So far, as far as I can tell, Melanie is mental. Love it though, it makes me laugh. :)

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ohgod, this is hilarious.


i love the whole idea, you know? however, you need to update soon. like, mega soon. hehe, 10/10 for the whole thing!

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Just wanted to say that I think your writing is excellent, and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work, You're doing a fab job and I can't wait for the next update. :)

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It's really hard to pull off the quirky girl, but i have to say you did it amazingly! i was giggling madly throughout your fanfic :) good job!

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I read the title and fell in love instantly! I couldn't stop reading after I had read the first couple sentences! Pretty please write another chapter soon! :P :D :) XD

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Another great chapter :] i'm loving this story!
I think it's the only fic i've ever read from a muggle perspective.
I can't wait until she finds out properly!

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It shows that it wasn't easy. This chapter lacks the usual ridiculously funny feeling yours usually have. I mean, it was funny, but not ridiculously so.

I saw that movie! Wasn't it hilarious? It think it shows how fond I am of this story that the moment Annaleigh appeared, I was reminded of your banner.

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hahaha i love this you are such a good writer!

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This Chapter Made Me Laugh So Much :)

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It's kinda weird how although Mellie is a creeper I don't find it weird at all, maybe it's the way you've written it. Hmm... anyway, love the story, it's hilarious !

-Amanda

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Despite you saying it was hard to write, this chapter was really good and I enjoyed reading it! I love your style of writing and I hope you do manage to keep on updating reasonably frequently but I understand if you don't- I barely get enough time to read them because of sixth form let alone finally going and writing one :) Anyway, I really loved the mini scene where James was shrieking a song and playing air guitar- I think it gave us an insight into how he is when he's around his friends with no audience and it was fun to read. I really want to know what's going to happen next and if Mellie's going to realise the dream was real !!! Oh yeah, and well done on coming up with wizard band names and songs, they were really original :)

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