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Review #1, by wampf Chapter Twenty-Seven

30th July 2015:
gonna be honest... i like the first ending more because hermione honestly shouldn't deserve him after throwing a bunch of vague fits at him. sigh, anyhow goob job

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Review #2, by H&GLover Chapter Twenty-Seven

1st June 2015:
WOW, so far this is my favorite story!! Thank you so much!!

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Review #3, by Sclerena Chapter Twenty-Seven

12th May 2015:
Good story, but it needs serious editing!

Miranda has 3 diferent last names, Draco says he's not even twenty buit in August he will turn 21? Hermione is not even 19, but then just wait a year and she will be 21? And isn't she supposed to be old than Draco, anyway?!
And if Miranda left one year after Hogwarts and has come back after 3 years away, wouldn't it means that it has been 4 years since Hogwarts? So they should already be 21 or 22!
You also make it look like Hermione cooking is exceptional but on her first night at the flat, she was cooking when Draco arrived...

You do realise that Australia is not in Europe, and that the UK IS a part of Europe, right? So if she had been traveling in Europe (her own continent) the departure at the Airport could not have been so dramatic...

Also you should consider a Beta or reread yourself before posting... There were lots of typos, doubled words or paragraphs, choices of words left to the reader, grammatical mistakes.

I think you should be more careful of what you write and maybe read your story from the start when it's been a while between 2 updates or when you have published too many to remember what you wrote exactly...

Sorry if my review seems sharp, I just feel that this story had a great potential...

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Review #4, by Tonks_Ginny_Luna_Neville Chapter Twenty-Six

17th April 2015:

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Review #5, by Tonks_Ginny_Luna_Neville Chapter Twenty Two

17th April 2015:
It's like a cheesy soap opera! i like dat...

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Review #6, by Tonks_Ginny_Luna_Neville Chapter Twenty

17th April 2015:
Bloody hell Stacy! I HATE Miranda and I VERY strongly dislike Wesley. And I mos DEFINATLEY wish that this was written in cannon... Oh well, beggars can't be choosers. I love your story by the way, Although there area few grammar and punctuation issues.

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Review #7, by Tonks_Ginny_Luna_Neville Chapter Sixteen

17th April 2015:
I love your story so much, even though it infuriates me so much, but still... BLOODY HELL YOU ARE SUCH AN ABSOULTE @^&^$%*!!! I mean...squib...yeah...squib.

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Review #8, by Tonks_Ginny_Luna_Neville Chapter Fourteen

17th April 2015:

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Review #9, by Jen Chapter Twenty-Seven

30th March 2015:
You may have to fix miranda's name. She has various surnames. Also why is hermione so irritating. I don't remember it being so annoying

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Review #10, by zaid Chapter Sixteen

18th February 2015:
pretty good till now


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Review #11, by Prerna Prologue

15th February 2015:
It should be an amazing read

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Review #12, by StormAngel_PAC Chapter Twenty-Seven

5th January 2015:
OMG my heart literally stopped with the fake ending! If people weren't sleeping I would've screamed! I'm so glad it ended on a good note though! FANTASTIC story!! I read it once before but it was before you finished it and I must say that I'm incredibly pleased with the way it ended! I absolutely could not stand Wesley or Miranda! I especially hated her. I hope you tried to make them the hated characters because you definitely succeeded for me at least! All in all an excellent story!

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Review #13, by dailyprophet Chapter Twenty-Seven

29th November 2014:
it is now 547am and may i say, i have never been so glued to a story until i ran into this beauty. i gave up sleep simply because i couldn't make myself wait until "later" or "the next day" to continue my reading. i was truly blown away. you are an excellent writer, and i wish stories like this could be made into a book because all i want to do is add it to my shelf collection and never let it go! HAHA! i can't think of any other way to phrase my love for this story other than it being a work of art. that first "the end" was traumatizing though. over all, splendid! i can't wait to read more of your work! take all the time in the world, definitely worth the read!

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Review #14, by Lily:-) Chapter Twenty-Seven

6th November 2014:
Still crying here :( make a 2 please please pretty
please ! I beg you please ?
Love the 1 buy the way

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Review #15, by Lily:-) Chapter Twenty-Seven

6th November 2014:
Still why did you have to end the most awesome
book in the world? Not happy not happy
at all but this book will be in my heart forever
crying that this book is over and I am not kidding
because there are tears all over my face :( this
the book that I will not fogert for the rest of my
life ever when I am 99 I will not foget this
BOOK:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) still crying

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Review #16, by Lily:-) Chapter Twenty-Seven

6th November 2014:
WHY,WHY,WHY why did you have to END the
book?!:( :( :( not happy :[

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Review #17, by Lily:-) Chapter Twenty Two

6th November 2014:
Love this story so far:-) I want to make my tablet
last for hours on end

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Review #18, by Tris  Chapter Twenty-Six

7th October 2014:
Yup. I read this two times and never saw the happy ending until my friend asked me why I hated it is much. Well this was much better and more to my liking. Ok now I like the story overall ;)

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Review #19, by Tris  Chapter Twenty-Seven

1st October 2014:
Ok so I read this story once before, but reread it because my friend was loving it. The ending is the WORST (I'm sorry the first 25 chapters or so are good) but really. It just makes me so angry! And now I have to go to bed feeling all empty inside because of this ending. Would you like to write and alternate ending... Maybe starting at the airport??? Where instead of cowering behind a plant or something Draco decides not to be a weenie and comes and declares his love and makes it all perfect and happy because this seriously upsets me so so much.

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Review #20, by lunede Chapter Twenty-Seven

9th July 2014:
Hi! I really love this fic, it's one of the best ones I've ever read. So I was wondering... I'm from Finland and I would love to translate this fic into finnish. Would that be okay? I would translate it in this forum: And I would obviously make a link to it's original source :) Thank you for the great story!

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Review #21, by papilio Chapter Twenty-Three

4th July 2014:
ive notice about 5 or 6 times that you have written brides mates :s little confused because im not sure if that what you call them from where you are from but I used of them being called brides maids ! im not going to repeat what the people below me are saying because they have written it so many times but( Europe?? and not hating your story I do love it as I have read this far but I think you need to do more research
into certain things so it sound more real xox


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Review #22, by papilio Chapter Thirteen

3rd July 2014:
I really enjoy this story but as being for the uk we don't have wolves here anymore, unless there in the woods hehe!! and some thing are a little silly in this story but I do really enjoy reading it as it funny plot and Dramione are my fav. xox

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Review #23, by Maital Chapter Twenty-Seven

19th June 2014:
I love this story but I hated Wesley so much even though he wasn't that bad I just hated it that Draco loved her and she didn't realize and Wesley barely even knew her and she was wanting to be with him for longer that I could even imagine. I dunno why but I didn't even hate Miranda that much, well I hated her because how can a ministers daughter be so cruel but I hated Wesley so much more than her. Honestly you nearly gave me a heart attack when you said it was finished when it was not and I got so mad that you would leave it on a cliff hanger so I scrolled down to write a comment saying how silly it was of you to leave it there and then I saw it wasn't actually the end, I felt so relieved then! Anyway I really loved this and you should write more story's like this they really at amazing

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Review #24, by maital x Chapter Two

17th June 2014:
'your not wasting a penny Granger' WHAT IS THIS? I thought witches and wizards have knuts, sickles and galleons

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Review #25, by Lo_bo Chapter Twenty-Seven

27th May 2014:
I enjoyed this story very much :)

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