{reviewid: 2769377, reviewer: 'VioletPotter'}
8th February 2013:
I Beg you to finish this story. I have been checking back here every month since you stopped just in case you have updated it. please finish this story or else i will cry.
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{reviewid: 2759937, reviewer: 'hiddenbyhair'}
25th December 2012:
Please update I'm falling in love with this story, and MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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{reviewid: 2724059, reviewer: 'Lily101'}
24th July 2012:
finish this story please
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{reviewid: 2691713, reviewer: 'ChocolatSugar'}
30th April 2012:
Update soon love the story!!
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{reviewid: 2622221, reviewer: 'harrypottergirl55'}
28th November 2011:
write more soon or i will cry till the end of the world:)
best story ever by the way!
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{reviewid: 2621332, reviewer: 'Mary%20Ann'}
27th November 2011:
great chapter, but didn't the story say that Allie was in her last year? Then towards the end Allie is telling Lily she's a 6th year. It was well-written (though it could have done with out that vivid description of Allie), getting interesting with that Scene with Allie and James. Was he flirting with his girlfriends twin? and the drama begins!!
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{reviewid: 2621327, reviewer: 'Mary%20Ann'}
27th November 2011:
I'm just on the first chapter, story seems pretty good so far except for one thing:
Her hair growing out of it's frizz, eye sight improved, braces removed...all in pretty much one summer? A bit too coincidental.
If only frizz could grow out! And for the eyes it probably would have been better to say she got contacts. Also nice that you didn't go into full details about her appearence, usually when writers detail their characters appearence, the character tends to look to perfect and what not.
Other than that pretty good...on the the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 2617409, reviewer: 'Aleena'}
18th November 2011:
Finally they are starting to get along!! I really love this story so I can't wait to find out what happens so pleeeasseee post the next chapter soon!! Great story!! x
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{reviewid: 2511700, reviewer: 'Violet%2070'}
21st April 2011:
Please finish the story. It's really good
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{reviewid: 2507026, reviewer: 'Kathryn'}
12th April 2011:
what is going oN! HAVE U ABANDONED IT! please sayy no and come back! I am seriously in love with this story!
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{reviewid: 2461002, reviewer: 'cindy'}
7th January 2011:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASEEE
update! this is the best hp story ever!
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{reviewid: 2431350, reviewer: 'The%20Notoriu'}
4th November 2010:
I really like this story and can't wait to keep reading!!!:)
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{reviewid: 2419190, reviewer: 'feefee'}
2nd October 2010:
heyy its been bout 9 months now..have you abandoned thr story? if you havent then please update soon...i've been waiting for a while now :(
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{reviewid: 2386844, reviewer: 'not%20given'}
28th July 2010:
this is awesome. i found this story and loved it instantly. I hope you finish it soon. :)
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{reviewid: 2383192, reviewer: 'ashgal72'}
22nd July 2010:
When life gives you lemons you chuck them back and say "I want the Potterverse!" I swear I didn't copy that eather. I love your story, but is Allie (umm... I'm not good with names, so I hope i'm right) a redhead? And Andrea blonde? Just curious :)
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{reviewid: 2378486, reviewer: 'lunajane'}
14th July 2010:
Ah! i need to know what happens. please continue to write this story. dont abandon it. i will live my whole life not knowing what happened. i think i might just go crazy. okay, maybe im being a bit over dramatic. well, i hope to read a new chapter soon. ill be checking like every day. peace.
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{reviewid: 2377738, reviewer: 'hp_lover'}
13th July 2010:
i love this fanfic! Hope u update soon!
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{reviewid: 2374758, reviewer: 'WhisperInTheRain'}
8th July 2010:
i love the whole idea of the story...the Baby Project!
Please update this story soon?
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{reviewid: 2351581, reviewer: 'ginnywinny'}
24th May 2010:
i love this story!!!
it is so good :D
cant wait for the next chapter
x
10/10 for the whole story so far :D
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{reviewid: 2329407, reviewer: 'LOLIKINS'}
9th April 2010:
Are you continuing this great story?!
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{reviewid: 2311835, reviewer: 'prongslittleflower'}
10th March 2010:
AH! I went to go to the next chapter, and there isn't a nifty little next button! So update soon, okay, because I am loving this!
And the fact that you've chosen Gaspard Ulliel as James (Swoon). Alright, sorry I don't have time for a long review, but I'll do better next time!
10/10 for sure!
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{reviewid: 2306053, reviewer: 'twinkies'}
28th February 2010:
I was going to ask about Twilight but you already answered my question.
I loved the beginning. I think you would work on flowing the sentences a little more but that'll come with time. I used to be horrible at writing and now I'm not too bad. But that's just my opinion.
Anyway, it was really good. I can't wait to see what happens at school!!!
10/10 for the good beginning!!!
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{reviewid: 2287267, reviewer: 'irrelevant'}
20th January 2010:
likey likey :) and Wacker needs to go down... or just change for the better. Can't really see that happening though xd
rock on :p
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Haha, I don't like Wacker either...or the girl who inspired her character. >:/
Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2285892, reviewer: 'Catriona7'}
17th January 2010:
Even If it was a filler chapter I still loved it! XD
Can't wait to see the dimensions between Allie and James as the story goes on! They are very intriging together!
Keep up the good work! X
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
I'm glad the pairing is coming off so well!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2279314, reviewer: 'beautiful_blues'}
5th January 2010:
Dang! Everything would be wonderful if James would stop being stupid and break up with that snot girlfriend. Actually, Allie deserves some one way better than that prat.
Author's Response: Haha, I hate Cassidy too. She's actually inspired by a real person in my life...who is exactly the same. xD
Haha, I think James is going to be perfect for Allie, to be honest. xD Then again, I'm the author and this is my story. I'm SUPPOSED to say that. xD
Thanks for reviewing!
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