Oh my!!! This is just perfect. It's amazing. I L-O-V-E-D it! (There's that simple word again. But yes, it is so powerful.) If I could go higher than 10/10 I would.

Author's Response: well thank you so much!! im glad you liked it !

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honestly different from anything i've ever read before, it was more like a diary entry than anything else, it was very indepth and things that we all probably wonder about sometimes...

anway, I liked it, I'm gonna head on now and read some of your other stories now.

Dark Crys

Author's Response: thanks =] im glad that you think its different, but in a good way lol =]

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This was a very touching, amazing story. I LOVED it. Keep on writing! Now I'm off to read your other story. This is BRILLIANT writing.

Author's Response: thank you very much =]
i like writing so im very glad that you enjoy reading it lol =]

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Sweet. Enjoyable, and just downright lovely.
Felt very Lily-ish, which is good.
Great read =]
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: well thank you lol =]
i was trying to be very in character for how she seems to be in my mind when i wrote that so im glad you think that it worked for her =]

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Mmm this is really good! You have a real knack for turning just this simple idea into a beautifully flowing piece. I enjoyed it a lot! Not much you can improve on. 10/10 =)

Author's Response: well thank you very much =] youre being quite the friend to my ever growing ego lol =]

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That's really sweet. I adore your writing style here. It was really well worded and got down to the point. The way you protray her is really good, like how she's being insightful disecting the words but adds in some humor and all.
So yeah, I liked it, good job!

Author's Response: thank you very much =]

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