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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Happily Ever After

7th October 2011:
I think this story is GREAT, and the ending was perfect. I think you should do a sequel, such as Lily starting her first year at Hogwarts. Another 10/10.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 Marauder Stories

7th October 2011:
That's one thing that Harry has missed, and that's the friendly rival banter, must have been bliss to hear it all. 10/10 must move on.

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Meeting the parents

7th October 2011:
An excellent chapter. I think that Lily took the news about being a grandmother really well. 10/10 and must move on.

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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 Finding out

7th October 2011:
Well I never expected the bombshell you just dropped. People Harry really cares about back from the dead. I must move onto the reunion with his parents. 10/10.

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Review #5, by magicmuggle01 Returning to the Burrow

7th October 2011:
I think they'll be a few more good welcomes to be had from the order. Another nice chapter and 9/10. And to move on.

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Review #6, by magicmuggle01 Recieving a letter

7th October 2011:
A nice start to your story. I see you have not followed the traditional part of the story by marrying Harry to Ginny. That might work, a new fresh approach that will give a story a new flavour. 9/10 and moving on.

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Review #7, by whacked Happily Ever After

5th October 2009:
you know, you could end it here. it sounds like and ending, and it feels like an ending.

Author's Response: Um... thats cause it is an ending... *duh* Gosh Nano!!

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Review #8, by whacked Finding out

5th October 2009:
ok, this is a little crazy ...

yes, sonia, i am reading this. and reviewing. and i'm making a banner. so suck it up.

anyway. it is a bit bizzare, especially the part with voldy going to hell, and trading his harsh snetence for a softer one. it's an interesting concept. and i'm going to continue reading

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Review #9, by Angels Tears Happily Ever After

30th September 2009:
oh thats a very happy story...cute!!

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Review #10, by Mud 12 Happily Ever After

4th June 2009:
I'm not going to pretend I don't love your story but I'm a Ginny/harry fan

Author's Response: I like harry/ginny too, but for this story, using ginny didn't work well... thanks for reviewing =)

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Review #11, by Mary Happily Ever After

3rd March 2009:
I really like this story and I REALLY mean it it was very sweet x

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Review #12, by Jessiy Happily Ever After

22nd January 2009:
I loved it! even the ending so dw.GREAT x

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Review #13, by channy Happily Ever After

20th January 2009:
this was excelent. i loved it!!!
the bit about the ice-cream and the cheating was heaps funny!!

Author's Response: glad u liked it, i like to add bits of humour
thanks for reviewing


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Review #14, by Jessiy Marauder Stories

18th January 2009:
Finished? Aww I loved it and what a shocker, excellent writing! x

Author's Response: There is still the last chapter. It's just been validated. Thanks for reviewing

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Review #15, by verbal87 Marauder Stories

17th January 2009:
Aww no. Can't believe i've only just discovered this fantastic story for it to have finished already :( .Anyway, brilliantly written and a great idea for a story as well. Very different to many of the other post-hogwarts stories i've read but brilliant all the same. Anyway, 10/10 for the whole story

James xx

Author's Response: thanks, but there is one more chapter to go. It should be up soon.

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Review #16, by miss hiss Meeting the parents

13th December 2008:
put up ur addy and i'll email that banner to you ;)

Author's Response:
sonia18_billabong@ hotmail. com

Thanks a lot!!


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Review #17, by madmoo Finding out

9th November 2008:
more more more! please update again soon the suspense is killing me! keep writing -madmoo

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Review #18, by madmoo Returning to the Burrow

3rd November 2008:
aw! love it! keep writing -madmoo

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Review #19, by queenflora09 Returning to the Burrow

1st November 2008:
It's great!!I loved!!I can't wait for the rest!

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Review #20, by Amy Returning to the Burrow

1st November 2008:
Good chapter. Lily seems so cute. update soon

Author's Response: thanks, i find lily really adorable too
thanks for reviewing


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Review #21, by Ginny_Lily Recieving a letter

31st October 2008:
love it update soon!!!

Author's Response: will do! =)
thanks for reviewing


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Review #22, by queenflora09 Recieving a letter

29th October 2008:
WOW!It sounds really interesting. i lloved it!

Author's Response: glad u liked it
thanks for reviewing


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Review #23, by madmoo Recieving a letter

27th October 2008:
hey, great start to the story. linking back to then and here to now and giving info that ron etc know he isn't dead without saying it is really effective. keep writing -madmoo

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing,
i wasn't actually thinking about that when i wrote it, but i'm glad that it worked!


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Review #24, by Amy Recieving a letter

27th October 2008:
Good first chapter.Update soon

Author's Response: thanks, this is my first ever review! Thanks a lot!

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