NO! she has to pick up the letter! she has to know! this is not fair! she deserves to be happy... and Ron btw is a dick...

sorry if that was slightly flamey... twas not meant to be :D

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NO!!! no!! i wanted them together!!! this is sooo sad.

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This story is so heartbreaking! Excellently written though! Great story! Hey if you have anytume in your schedual would you consider making a banner for my Rose/Scorpius story?

Thanks a bunch and AMAZING story,
`Fred_is_Cuter

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oh em gee, this is sooo sad!!!
ron is a prat!
lovely written, even if its sad.

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aw i really liked it but its so sad! poor rose! poor scorp! but very good one-shot, even if the outcome is sad. 10/10

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AH ron how could u *sob*

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that totally sucked! but in a good way! lol i really enjoyed it!! and it was brilliantly written, i thought Ron's letter was a bit out of character but overall a good story! :-)

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Aw:( this actually made me get tears in my eyes. Great Job on the story.

Author's Response: oh wow, thankyou alot!
Zoe x

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oh wow, as good as this story is i hate it, it's really wonderful but so unfair! great read though :) well done

Author's Response: hahaha yes that seems to be the general consensus of this story! thankyou so much for reviewing, i love hearing what others think of my work!
Zoe x

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This was such a good story!!! It was amazing! I found myself tearing up when they started crying! It was amazing and I wish I knew how this all would turn out.

Author's Response: wow thankyou so much! i really appreciate it!
i think the conclusion is best left for individual interpretation, but once again thankyou so much for your praise and review!
Zoe x

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hey, i tried to e-mail you about the banner, but it wouldn't work so I'll just post the infor here.
1. Title: There Was Only You
2. Penname: Funleybubbles
3. Characters on banner: Remus, Sirius and Jazz
4. Specifics on banner: I trust your judgement to design it perfectly. :)
5. Scenery: No specifics
6. Color for banner: hmmm, blues and white
7. Quotes: "If you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, just more love."
8. I would like Rachael Leigh Cook as Jazz, William Moseley as Remus and Teddy Geiger as Sirius.

Thank you so much!

Author's Response: oh really... odd okay um well let me see my email is sweet_bitter_love62 and its at hotmail so what usually goes after that. Any way i will make the banner asap for you! =]



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nononono no the writtings good but...

Author's Response: thankyou! and i know its a sucky situation. but it was good to write! thankyou for the review.

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That is so sad ... but i love it anyway! Great Job!

Author's Response: thankyou! im really glad you loved it!
thankyou for reviewing! it means alot.
Zoe x

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AHH! I hate Ron, he's so evil!

"Rose apparated home to the loving arms of her father."

ARGH!


The fic, writing, characters, and everything are spectacular, BTW. Just purely superb. Except for Ron. Who was awful. Well, is character was, but he was written well, just in a way to make us hate him. Oh, poor Scorpius. I almost cried when he did.

Oh, and WHY couldn't Rose have noticed the letter??? It was actually lying there. *Tear* I wish she had. But this ending was powerful.

Excellent job!

Author's Response: i also hate ron. which is why i wrote this i guess lol.
thankyou so much for your wondeful review and compliments i do say my ego inflated a fair bit then ...lol

i know why couldnt have rose noticed the letter...oh yes because i made sure she did...

im pretty sure the ending line was just an after thought...i thought it would be the cherry on top of the cake. im glad you liked it

=]
x

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Ahh! it's so sad and lovely at the same time! it's a great piece of writing:)

Author's Response: oh thankyou so much. i really appreciate you saying that. thankyou for the review!
x

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aww...i liked it yet i hated it...i love the way it was written but i hated it that he had to break his own heart

Author's Response: i know right . When i read some stories i really love how they are written but hate what happens, a tad bitter sweet? and my characters...or the way i like to portray jk's characters, seem to like to break there hearts one way or the other. but thanks heaps for the review! its trully appreciated.
xx

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That was so. heart-breaking. I loved it.

The way you used the words to describe Ron's hatred for Scorp, was really good.

Personally I think you shouldn't make a sequel. This story is better left alone.

-R

Author's Response: yes i agree aswell...i think it would be better left alone...i think a sequel would ruin it.
thankyou for the compliments =]
and of course for the review.
xx

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oh my god. that was sad. wow. it was written really well. is it to much to hope for a happy sequel?

Author's Response: oh wow thankyou do much =]
and a happy sequel... hmmm thats funny...if u have read any of my other stories you would know that happy is far from what i write. but you never know im in an exceptionally good mood these days!
hehe
thanks for reviewing =]
x

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This is really good...
you should write a sequel.
... please?
xx

Author's Response: aww thankyou.
im glad you enjoyed it!
and a sequel...im contemplating it...
depends if im inspired.
no doubt i will eventually..lol
thank you for the review!
xx

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o my god that is sad
i almost cried
beautiful

Author's Response: oh wow thankyou so much for your kind words =]
x

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I'm not talking too you anymore!Of course *scratching head* I've never talked too you before,but still I'm not going to start now! Sorry great job and all but I'm one of those people who has such a sucky life in real world that I look to fanfiction for the happy endings.And by the way I loathe Ron in this story and I say there needs to be a sequel where Rose some how finds the letter! I'd demand one actually but that would be a tad too pushy LOL.

Author's Response: oh ha ha you sound like me in reviews he he he
i like it , upfront and forward is a win with me.
hmm i see your dilema, i think its best that you didn't read any of my stories...i have this uncanny ability to not write happy endings at all...except maybe the "i hate valentines day" story i wrote...i cant remember lol.
and i COULD write a sequel although i have no inspiration at the moment.
but maybe i iwll sometime during the holidays.

but thankyou so much for reading and complimenting my writing skills. it is very much appreciated and i am sorry about the bad ending =|

smile =]
he he
x


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it´s great - really!!
sad of course, but very authentic and well written. well, and there can´t be a happy end every time ;) ...
so: very, very well done!
favorite :)

Author's Response: oh wow thankyou so much
that was really nice of you to say.
thankyou =]
and thankyou for the fav =]
xx

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Aw, that was so sad. Would it be wrong for me to say it was sweet, too? I couldn't tell where this was going at the beginning, which is a good thing, and even though it was obvious what was going to happen when I read the letter, I was still intrigued so I had to keep reading. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story, but I have to say my favourite part was where you repeated the paragraph about the ignored park bench, and then when Rose didn't notice the letter. It was a very sweet, heartbreaking touch to the one-shot.

I just want to give you some constructive criticsm, too, because this story has so much potential. I think you need to get a beta reader, or perhaps just proof read your work several times before you publish it. There are quite a few spelling mistakes in there that tarnish the mood of the story. If you got rid of those, it would be perfect. =)

Anyway, great job, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: wow thankyou so much for the review.

it really helps when someone tells you about the things you can improve on with your writing to make your story better.

my favorite part of it is the repeatition of the ignored park bench aswell.
i havent really written something in that way and initally it was rose sitting on the park bench...and it wasnt going to have a letter in it at all, so when i came up with the letter and albus seeing them, i decided to make scorpius the one sitting on the park bench. kind of a contradiction to his high class family.

but i dod believe i should have someone else proof read my stories for me to check for errors i miss, although it is hard to find someone like that...but i will re-read my story again and see if i can pick up then =]

once again thankyou so much for this review , i really do appreciate it
x

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*screams* I'm not normally one to rant at an author for an ending I don't like, 'cause it's your choice, but why why why? It's not fair, I say!

On a more rational note, I love how Rose got her hopes up for a moment and then Scorp had to roughly push her off. It was completely heartbreaking. And then, in the end, Rose never sees the letter and she goes back to her father for comfort. It's awful for her, considering that her father was the one who started her 'hurting' in the first place.

I would love another story that maybe showed Rose with her family right after that. I really wish I could see how her father would react to seeing her like that. Would he feel guilty for sending the letter or would he hate Scorp all the more? Another little one shot to break my heart all over again, maybe?

Amazing, fantastic, unbelievable job.

Author's Response: hmmm a sequel im not sure... i like how people have to think what would happen after she goes back home. but you never know one day i could get bored or inspired... lol

but i agree oyu should scream. im completely unfair in my fanfiction. i always break everyone's heart lol.

oh and thankyou so much for the compliments, thats absolutely lovely of you! =]
xx

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That was wonderful! It was so sad and sweet. I just wish she would have looked down in the snow and found the letter. Ron is awful! I can't believe he did that, but then again it is fanfiction. haha. Anyways, good job.
:)Baletgir

Author's Response: I know, if only she looked down into the snow...
but i apparently do not have the capability to write a story that has a happy ending... lol read my other stories and youll understand.

but thankyou for the compliments and review. i appreciate it.
x

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