I like this story very much. but u could have brought up more about the grief that fred, lupin and tonks's death has caused them.. nevertheless it's a great story.

Author's Response: Everyone grieves differently. This has also been looked at from Harry's POV. Other people's grief may not be in his "field of vision". They are not totally over it, as each must face their own demons and triggers.

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omg I love this story xxx you did a really good job xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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This story is bloody brilliant :)))
seriously, whenever harry and ginny has problems, i also get a tight feeling in my stomach. the story is captivatingly good.

Author's Response: Thank you! glad you enjoyed it so.

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Just finished the story and FANTASTIC use of cannon with your own twist,LOVED IT!!!great job

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This was an amazing story. I feel like it gave me closure! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story. Its truly a really something i could not put down until i had finished it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this story so much that you called it 'amazing'.

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Hey I love this story- my only thought is how come harry didn't leave anything in his will for Teddy

Author's Response: It has been a long time since I wrote this, but If I remember correctly, Harry had set up a trust fund for Teddy. I guess he should have left some in his will anyway.

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Well...It's been a while since I read a fan fiction. I think the last time I read one was in 2009.
Anyways, there were a few minor typos here and there.
There are too many British slang.
The story line was really good. The amount of action and romance was just the right amount. There are some chapters that was pretty boring but there are some chapters that are so exciting I refused to go to bed. You are quite good at ending a chapter at climax, making me stay up another 30 min to keep reading.
You incorporated most of the main characters. However, you didn't say anything about the Malfoys as they would have been trialed.
You made Harry hold out for sex for so long I was starting to wonder if he was gay. Also, you wrote this story as if everyone was on Ginny side telling Harry not to have sex with her. This is not how men thinks.
Finally, considering how you made me read through 45 chapters to the point where Harry and Ginny have sex, you could have at least described the sex in detail.
Overall, excellent story. I play to read your next book.
8/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
I do want to say that I did touch on the Malfoys. It was slight and in passing. Harry had to write up a deposition on his knowledge of the Malfoy's involvement. They also were a willing family to give up much of its gold to avoid going to Azkaban. (Narcissa's help in the forest was also a factor)
I didn't want to delve to much into Harry and Ginny's first time or even their second time. This fic skirted soft-porn and I didn't want to take it over the edge. Sorry if that disappointed you.

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Thank you, Thank you and thank you again for this wonderful story.I have read quite a versions of Harry Potter's after life.Some of them are as vile and abusive as they indicate the bitterness.
This story so far is the perfect one which catches the moral which lies under the original JKR story. I have been thrilled by reading this story.Its beautiful.Its marvelous. Thank you for writing this story. I have rated it 10/10 but it seems so underrated 20/10 would be good enough for this story line.
Again thank you very much

Author's Response: You are very welcome. I am so glad that I was able to make you so happy with the story.

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The whole story was beautifully written and made me feel like Harry Potter wasn't over. Thanks for spending the hours writing.

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oh wow, that was a great story. I enjoyed it immensely, except for one part but the rest of it makes up for that. i loved the ending and the train station wedding, totally unique. I didnt like the fact that Harry and Ginny slept together before they were married, but i guess nowadays most young people dont care about that. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I had considered having them wait until marriage, but I also wanted to make a point about true commitment. They had it even before they said the vows. That is why they were actually bonded as Ginny walked down the aisle.
(I think the baby boomers from the 60's popularized Free Love)

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Hey, i am amazed at how brilliant this story is. I would actually compare your writing skills to the j.k.Rowling herself. Literally can't stop reading it :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you are enjoying this story.

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Alright so I enjoyed the story, good plot, good ideas. However, the only thing keeping me from loving it were the many grammatical mistakes. A lot of verbs were used in the wrong tense and words were misspelled. My suggestion is, if ever you have time, go back through your story and edit it. Other than that one issue, great story!

Author's Response: Alright duly noted.

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I think this story is bloody good reading!! I think Harry and Ginny make a great couple!! I am glad that no one was killed on the night bus!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Harrys training and life experiences have paid off.

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I am loving this story!! I hope it has a happy ending to it!! But I won't know until I read the whole story!! Poor Harry and Ginny, having to be separated on Valentines Day!!

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are loving it. Hopefully, you will be pleased with the ending. Almost all who have respondded have enjoyed it.

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jeesh, ginny's mental. :D She's also far too emotional for my taste, but I do like this story!

Author's Response: She's wound a bit tight about Harry. She will eventually come out of it. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

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Very good story!! Ginny sure does have a fly away temper! I love Mr. And Mrs. Weasley!

Author's Response: In the books they always hinted at her brothers being afraid of her temper. There must have been a reason, soon Harry will find out.

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This is a great story!! Harry is being sweet to Ginny!! The Weasley family are a great family!! Harry and Ginny are ment for each other!! Ron and Hermione are ment for each other also!! I hope Hermione finds her parents soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

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47th chapter , well done Manwe, well done , i'm impressed

Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.

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So like... Woow !

This story is ah-mazing !! It's sooo good ! I loved it how it would drop off,... And then all of a sudden... BAM!! new complication !! You are such a fabulous writer !!

Author's Response: Thank you, for the enthusiastic review!

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Only one thing wrong with this chapter, killing and murder are 2 differant things. I could see how a 17 or 18 year old might not be able to dicern the differance but the older characters should see it.

Author's Response: Taking of anothers life can be traumitizing to anyone. Thank you for the review.

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Why did you kill them?
Are you crazy!

Author's Response: I regretted doing that, but I needed it for the story.

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Spectacular, just like the first.

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Great chapter, and I love how they honored Fred. (:

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Hey im loveing this story. It is awesome!!! Just one thing though, in Australia we say Koala, not Koala bear. :)
Keep up the good work though!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the info.

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I like this chapter a lot! Lots of sexual activity! ;D But it kinda concerns me how you portray Ginny. I just don't think she would want to get pregnant with harry if she knew he had to go on a secret mission to save the world (which she had figured) I REALLY love this story though! I'm just gonna soak up this story like a mosquito!

Author's Response: Ginny feared that Harry would die. She knew he had to face Voldemort. She was desperate and worried that she would never see him again. She wasn't trying to trap him, but to have his child like she had always wanted, before it was too late.
I realize that I portray Ginny as being a little more emotional and irrational that most fics. But the possibility of losing the love of your life can make a person slightly crazy.

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