wow what a deep and sensual piece of writing. Great Job.
10/10
Ava
xoxo

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm glad you liked this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

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Oh my god this is so good
10/10

Author's Response: wow I'm amazed you're taking this much time to read almost all my one shots! I'm glad you liked this one. It's really angsty though...

Thanks for reviewing! :)

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As promised, I scurried over here to read your Helena fic!
I must say that it was, indeed, fabulous.
My, Helena does seem to be destined for a broken heart in any fic, huh?
I love how you reenacted the situation as a memory, it makes it very interesting to see it through two points of view by one character (ie. before and after Christopher's death). I think you captured Helena's emotion brilliantly :D
The spacing was a little funny, but hey, I know my formatting isn't ever logical lol. The italics on the memory was a nice touch as well.
I have also decided that we should form an anti-Baron club. We shall call it the G.A.B.K.E. or Girls Against the Baron Killing Everyone. Yes, that has a nice ring. WOO! GO G.A.B.K.E.!
Yet again, fabulous fic ; )

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing my helena fic! Helena does seem destined for a broken heart.sad but it's the way it is sometimes. I know the spacing's funny. formatting never agrees with me.
I agree on the anti-Baron club! Go G.A.B.K.E.!!!

Thanks again for coming and reading my fic! I'm honored! :)

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Me again! I think I said before that I really liked this because the Grey Lady is such an intriguing character and you made her story so believable. I really felt for her so brownie points for the emotion there - you know that's one of the things I look out for! Great ending too.

Alex xx (=

Author's Response: thanks! This one shot I almost forgot about. I wrote it knowing there weren't many fics on the Grey lady (or at least none I've seen) and I am thrilled you liked it! It's a bit darker than anything I've written.

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