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Awesome! Poor Hermoine! or so my friend Dorothy says 'shame on her life'.Good Fic!.Please Update!. :) x Report Review
Pretty good. I like it. Report Review
well, apparently, you never continued. Report Review
This is good! You said you would continue it, so did you? If not, please do! I really enjoyed reading it!!! Report Review
Nice start!!! The first thing I like about this is her name.really perfect.keep it up Report Review
This was a good start Report Review
Nice Report Review
Great Story Report Review
not too bad at all! I always love OC!! Report Review
YEAH! Go Aderet! Poor Hermione...STUPID AIDAN! Report Review
Good fic! I like her name...Aderet. Mysterious. And I feel bad for poor Hermione...she's always been my favourite. Idiot Aidan. I don't even know who he is and I him.
And your portrayel of Ron is good. :) None of your characters are OOC, though I'd like to point out that Fred and George wouldn't be at Hogwarts during your fic. I have to assume it happens in 5th, 6th or 7th year, and Fred and George were in their 7th during GoF.
That's all though! GOOD FIC!
Starlit Skies and Moonlit Nights,
* Kelly * Report Review
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