Um, her middle name is Jean, NOT Jane. You may wanna change that...

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oh you don't have to choose ;) I believe that you CAN have both :P I give you permission...

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I can't believe you ended it like that. And what was up with so much Blaise, darn I was hoping for a good draco and Hermione story and I didn't get it.

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Oh man, this sucks... no :(

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Great writing! I love this whole Jealous Draco thing!

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NO! WHY!!! WHY MUST GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END?!?! LETTERSTODRACO, I LUV U, BUT I ATE U SOOO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!! WHY!

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this makes me sooo sad!!! im pretty sure i've read this before, al long time ago... and im definitely a draco fan... but i cant help feeling so sad for blaise!!! damnit!!! y cant she have both??!!!

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Great story. I loved it.

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No offense but Draco's name is Draco Lucius Malfoy not Abraxas or whatever...

And, Blaise has brown eyes not blue...

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I think she should just pick one and stop hurting another.

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I've read your story in one sitting and overall it was extremely good. I really got into the character Blaise - something I have never been able to do before. All of your characters were very believable, but Hermione did come across as quite the villian.

At first i though that there might be a twist where in the beginning Blaise had only been with Hermione to distract her from Draco, a plan Ce could have come up with. Over time he could have fallen for her, but she could not forgive him for his initial intentions. Hermione would then end up with Draco.

I loved the story up until the last chapter, not because Hermione was left alone, but because the ending was completely out of the blue. You should have given subtle hints to get the readers mind going and hint at his departure to America. You only mentioned 'America' once in this entire story and it was at the very end. It just seemed random and i'm sure Draco would atleast have the decency to explain WHY he was going so far away.

7/10

Really well done, you have great writing skills. your character development was brilliant, the character's conversations were believable.

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I know this is a Hermione/Draco pairing but i always loved Blaise, especially the way you characterize him in this story. I always love a good Hermione/Blaise story. :)

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Grr. . . . Why is he back?! Things were going smoothly until that dunderhead showed up!

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What part of " It's suppost to be BLAISE AND HERMIONE and not DRACO AND HERMIONe" do you not get?!!??!!??!!??!!For that, you are getting a very low rating! I'm jk, i wouldn't do that because I didn't like that Blaise is suppost to be with Hermione.

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YES!!! Praise the lord by Merlin Hermione isn't a complete idiot!!

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Blaise!! He is the best choice of all! Please!

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Umm Just FYI its Hermione Jean Granger. GREAT STORY SO FAR THO!

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I really liked your story! Also I like the words you chose when you said you knew "exactly who's she'd end up with" You never did say that it was going to be Malfoy or Zabini or anyone for them matter of fact. I thought that after the words you used very cleverly that she wouldn't end up with either Malfoy nor Zabini in this story at least. I'm really glad that you made a sequel 'cause now I won't have to think for hours on end what would happen if she followed Malfoy to America? or If he would be delayed and they were to come together in a one shot... I could go on and on and on but i won't bore you that way. Bye!
-malfoydraco

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shittiest ending ever

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no no no no NO! they're meant to work things out, live happily ever after (cliche, I know. lol) I can't believe she couldn't be with Draco!! Now I must get to reading the sequel. How could you do this!! *sigh*. I think my friends may kill me - I've been so worked up over the drama of this story, it's sort of frustrating. lol.

But lovely work, dear. It was an enjoyingly frustrating read and I will be coming back for more of your work! Well Done =]

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I love, love, love the book!!! It's fantastic! I really think you should try and get something published, You are an amazing writer!
*To the sequeal!*

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So far this is rely good!!
And the part where Harry & Hermione are talking, You have a type-o
“I don’t know what to say. I never suspected you and Malfoy. It’s a little hard to digest Hermione.” Draco replied. She understood that and let him take it all in.

It says Draco Replied, but Isn't that supposed to be Harry?

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Holy crap!
AMERICA!
WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT!
NO!
IT CAN'T BE!
I can't wait to read the sequel!
TEAM DRACO! FOR LIFE!

-Ginnyrocks117

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Good!
They are okay.
And hopefully her and Draco can get together.
I really hope they can.
I want them to SO BAD.
I hope they do, :D
Team Draco
Loved it.

-Ginnyrocks117

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Good.
He knows.
She won. :P
I really hope her and Draco go out.
They just need to
Team Draco ALL the way.
Loved it.

-Ginnyrocks117

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