Okay, I just read and reviewed one of your other stories so I had to come read the rest and can I just say I got chills?Author's Response: Thank you for the review it mean sooo much!! Report Review
Wonderful story. I loved how it had just a litlte bit of Dramione in there, and how the Malfoy name effetivly ruined any chance of happyness they might have had. The converstaions were very realistic and flowed nicely. The concept that Draco could have been a decent guy if it weren't for his family duties... and I could see Draco chosing duty over love because it would be the way he was raised. The ending where he passes it on to young Scorpius was great too. Almost poetic... here is this duty that prevented me from finding out what might have been, now it's your burden to carry... *sigh* poor Malfoy boys (well the last 2 anyway...lol)
I did spot a few errors, but they seemed to be typos that were simply overlooked, nothing major.
Over all wonderful story :)
~Moon~Author's Response: I appreciate the review so much.
I always felt like in the end Draco would choose duty, thats just the way he is.
Thank you for pointing out some of the errors, sometimes I overlook them, but I'll be sure to go back and edit and fix them.
Once more thanks for the review. Report Review
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