LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT! I have one Idea for you, Ginny talks with Luna about her and Neville! Your a good writer. I have Ideas but I can't ever put them into use so YOU USE THIS ONE PLEASE!Author's Response: Thank you :) and I'll try the idea, i'm not sure how it'll work, but i'll try it. Thanks for the feedback! :D Report Review
Oh, that is so cute! No criticism!Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
AW! That is so cute! MY FAV COUPLE!Author's Response: hehehe, They're in my top 5 at least. James and Lily are my fave.. lol. Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
It's such a good story!! Please continue it!! I love Harry and Ginny! And the protective brothers! HahaAuthor's Response: thank you so much! :) I'll try to update asap. Thanks again for reviewing :D Report Review
I didn't understood why Ginny cried after reading the article but this chapter is awesome.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: k, let's see . . . I think I wrote that Ginny was crying because she was really upset that Rita wrote that about her (well, her man). And then the guys started laughing so it didn't help.
And thanks for still thinking that it's awesome :D Report Review
Another awesome chapter. Harry and Ginny are my favourite pair as they are my penname. lol.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: So true, and thanks for the comment ;) Report Review
Awesome chapter 4 the 1st chapter.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks!!! I can't believe you're reviewing my other story (the H/G one) too! You're awesome :) Report Review
What would a fanfic without that nosy Rita be haha, please keep 'em coming I really like your story so far!!Author's Response: I know, right?
And I had to rewrite that thing like 3 times to get it where it is today. I had to think "What would Rita say?" As easy as it would seem to answer that question, it's actually really hard. And even harder to write.
And I will keep them coming as fast as I can. Now that I have some reveiws to motivate me!!! Report Review
I really like it :) I think that a little more detail will help us understand situations better like when harry and ginny woke up, but keep going, I look forward to seeing your story progress yay!Author's Response: thanks!
And detail, I can do. My friends say I sometimes write a little too much detail, but whatever.
And Yay! I look forward to you reading my story as it moves forward too =D Report Review
i dont care about mushyness, in fact i love mushyness!MORE MUSHYNESS!also, more chapters plzAuthor's Response: Okay I can do that. Actually I love WRITING mushyness, horror and drama just aren't my thing. Plus it makes me feel all good inside! I will keep that in mind while writing. I will type and update the next chapter as soon as I get my notebook back. I have my friends hooked on HPFF and they stole it. Anyway, Thanks for the reveiw! Report Review
your story is good so far. i have little advice on what you might change, or how to make it better. it was a good first chapter, in my opinion.Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
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