Hey, I thought this was really good, and your writing style is also brill, but just one thing. I was slightly confused about when this was happening. Was it their 6th year?? And does that mean that it was the dead Dumbledore soeaking to her?Author's Response: Thank you. I actually wrote with them being out of school in mind. Like after the Battle of Hogwarts. Report Review
Very interesting. It was a little difficult to read, since you are just thrust into the scene, without background as to what is going on. Still, it was pretty good. I really liked the ending. Very cute! I guess Ron's issues are even apparent to the dead! Great job, and keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still learning on how to start stories. That has never been a strong suit of mine. Ron's issues are apparent to EVERYONE! Really now, he's Ron Weasley. Report Review
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