{reviewid: 2274008, reviewer: 'Nynfadora'}
26th December 2009:
jus read all the chapters in 1 evening! really gd take on James' P.O.V, nt smethin tets done often an uve done gr8! excellent drama, and incredibly emotional with a gr8 plot :D keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
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{reviewid: 2267802, reviewer: 'marauders%20lover'}
14th December 2009:
yay! i missed this storyvso much! love this please update soon!
Author's Response: :) thanks!
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{reviewid: 2261941, reviewer: 'Tay2014babyy'}
2nd December 2009:
okay...so i retty much love this story so far! I hope you update soon cuz it seems like its takin everyone else FOREVER to update! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2257748, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Oh, I don't want this story to end, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: :D thanks!!
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{reviewid: 2257744, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Yes!! This was the best chapter!
Author's Response: lol thanks muchly!!
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{reviewid: 2257740, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Hmmm this is great but I would like to see more Lily and less sirius lol.
Author's Response: :) thanks !
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{reviewid: 2257736, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
I really like all the backstory in this chaptr, also James' character is really filling out, I feel the story just gets better and better.
Author's Response: ! Thanks !! :D
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{reviewid: 2257543, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
I really like the pads and prongs friendship, but I have to say, in this story pads is not very charismatic so i wasn't all that interested in this chapter. But I get you're petraying a tortured/abused pads which is cool too it's just not character I find likeable I suppose.
Author's Response: yeah i get.
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{reviewid: 2257542, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Padfoot and Chelsea, right? I didn;'t see that coming but now I think about it I probably should have.
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{reviewid: 2257541, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
This is such a brilliant story I'm enjoying reading it so much.
Author's Response: thanks! :D
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{reviewid: 2257540, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Hahaha he's still weirding out about his hair. I love the little touches of comey. LOVE the marauders and the really honest dialogue.
Author's Response: thanks ! :D
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{reviewid: 2257539, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
This is a great chapter but I miss Lily, want to see her again!!
Author's Response: thanks! :)
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{reviewid: 2257536, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
This is brilliant, I hope the bonds are all strong again between them. But I feel like screaming out "James! Look out behind you! Wormtails evil!"
Author's Response: thank you :)
and I know -- it's hard sometimes to make Wormtail awesome.
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{reviewid: 2257535, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Ah the end of this chapter freaks me out!!! Your writing is really good, its so disgusting t makes me squirm!
Author's Response: haha thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2257531, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Wow!!! I'm so glad for the Lily/James lurving!! I think you've got Lily's character totally spot on. Yes, get Dumbledore! NOW! He'll fix it all!
Author's Response: :) thanks muchly!
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{reviewid: 2257528, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
This was so not a filler!! I thought it was really great.
Author's Response: Thanks ! :D
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{reviewid: 2257523, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
MUGLES!
Yay. This is cool actually, I really like it, I hope he gets back to Hogwarts soon.
Author's Response: haha thanks :D
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{reviewid: 2257520, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
I don't understand why Voldemort doesn't see that he is a different person...but whatever, I don't care, it's still awesome!
Author's Response: haha yeah...
he's just that good
lol
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{reviewid: 2257519, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Familiar voice?? I'm guessing its Bellatrix or someone like that, but I'm hoping its chelsea or lils saving him!! I love that James is so brave.
Author's Response: : )
thanks
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{reviewid: 2257513, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Whoa I love the darkness of this hapter, having the characters names obscured and keeping his death a suspensful mystery adds to the darkness shrouding the dungeon, I really like your styling here.
Author's Response: thanks soo much!!! :D
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{reviewid: 2257511, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
23rd November 2009:
Wow that felt like it hurt!! Ew during that fight seriously I felt it and it grossed me out a little!! Hope James is okay...
Author's Response: thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2257328, reviewer: 'kassandra466'}
22nd November 2009:
I liked it, please add in more of Lilly!! i like her!! anyway!! AMAZING chapter as always!!
Author's Response: =)
thanks!
she'll come in pretty soon and get really awesome later on.
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{reviewid: 2257325, reviewer: 'kassandra466'}
22nd November 2009:
woa!! talk about an AMAZING chapter!! i LOVED It!! it was AHMAZING!! and your right!! I am hooked on the story!!
Author's Response: thanks :)
and I did warn you !
lol
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{reviewid: 2257318, reviewer: 'kassandra466'}
22nd November 2009:
1 word for this chapter, AMAZING!! i LOVED IT!! it was AMAZING!!
Author's Response: Thanks =D
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{reviewid: 2257315, reviewer: 'kassandra466'}
22nd November 2009:
WOa!!! AMAZING CHAPTER!! I LOVED IT!! IT WAS INTENSE IN A BOX!! ( and yes all caps are needed to stress how AMAZING it was!!)
Author's Response: haha thanks :D
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