OH MY GOD I DID NOT SEE THAT ONE COMING. I THOUGHT HE LIKED CLAIRE. This explains so much oh my god. I love you thank you for your amazing story Report Review
That was quite good and I am quite sad to be finished with it Report Review
Aw, so everything's okay between them. I like that!
I like your story! Please, do go on.
Greetings :) Report Review
NO! THAT CAN'T BE IT! CURSES.
that story was great, mate (that rhymed. consider youself honoured)
ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE. L O V E D I T !
:) Report Review
AWMIGOD. that is actually adorable. you, missy, have a great way with words, love this story!
ONTO CHAPTER 6! Report Review
This is too adorable to fathom! You are utter brilliance! Report Review
Just... Just. Just. I WANT A GUY LIKE THAT SO EFFING MUCH.
Great chapter, by the way. Report Review
I haven't reviewed the previous chapters only because I liked the story so much that I didn't want to bother with any breaks... But, here it is: for now, I love your story! It's one of the very rare fanfictions where I can really relate myself to the main character - in most of other stories about Sirius and an OC, heroines either yell at him or run away from him... I like Claire, her attitude is so realistic! And the dirty mind thing is so refreshing. The only thing I'm not so sure about is whether any guy - even if he's as "confident" as Sirius is - would talk to a random girl he's just met like Sirius did in the beginning. But that's not a big issue. Yeah, this is a big review. But I really, really like your story. :) Report Review
AMAZING! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY! I almost gave up hope of finding a good, well-written Sirius/OC story, and you show up! YAY! I love you, ur stories amazing keep writing! Report Review
NO!!! Why?! write more please!!! Such a good story! Just an idea, but the ball could've been a masquerade one,and that they had to choose a partner and at midnight they had to see who the person was, and then claire and sirius would be ok again and they would've all been happy ever after! :)
10/10 Report Review
I love this so far!!
XXXx Report Review
pleaseee! I love this story!! Report Review
oh my god, im in love with your story just by the first chapter.
but, i am also trying to drag this reading out for as long as possible so that hopefully you'll have an update (probably not likely as the last one was 2008) by the time im done.
You've given Sirius such an awesome personality, he's so similar to j.k's Sirius. i think its pretty much impossible for anyone to get him exactly right except j.k.
You've given Claire a strong personality too, very different but i can clearly see them being friends.
Okay, onto the next chapter i go :) 10/10 Report Review
awww, I luff Sirius in this chapter :D
I thought I would just point out (as constructive criticism, you don't really have to take this into view XD) that... those two girls, Samantha and whateverhernameis, would never confront Claire in real life. It's a common author technique I've seen where they take a cliche thing and put into writing. But... that would never happen. Popular girls don't take time to talk to other girls, out of indifference. But whatever, I still love the story. :3 Report Review
O.O You actually made the Ravenclaw password a riddle -- I think I love you.
Claire seems like a lovely OC, btw ^-^ Very realistic, and different. I like it. Report Review
My favorite line was: "Oh, well done. I think I’d have conversations with more intellectual substance with the bloody curtain." I laughed so hard that I snorted. xD Keep up the great work! 20/10 if that was possible.Author's Response: hahaha awwh thankyou! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Huh??? i dont get it. why did he break up with her?? he loves her. Report Review
bahahahahhaha i knew it! i knew he was gay! hahaha Report Review
-coco*grin* Report Review
Why haven't you written any more? Is the story over or something, because its been a really long time. Not trying to bug you, just wondering.Author's Response: Don't worry! I do plan on finishing it :) Report Review
OMG! I am in love with this story! The way you write is simply amazing. You have developed your characters sooo well. And you have just the right amount of drama needed. Keep writing, and please oh please update ASAP!
~hpf14 Report Review
I love this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! You've done a lovely job on it:)
~hpf14 Report Review
Okay, if you're not finished, then why haven't you updated for four months?
Please, please, PLEASE finish it. Report Review
sirius and claire are so cute.
they really need to work this time.
no more problems. Report Review
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