wonderful. keep it up.

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Your story is amazing out of all the fanfictions i have ever read, yours is the best!!! (And iv read a ton of them) yours seems to flow best and keep to jks ideas the most while adding your own imaginitve beautiful ideas!! I cant wait for the next chapter! Christmas wad always fun in the past! update as soon as you can!!!

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loved it. keep it up. good luck on your masters.

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SO great :) Can't wait for next chapter

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I love your story but I also agree ferverently with the fact that kids should be safe in schools.
My worst nightmare was one where a man came into my classroom with a gun and shot all my freinds except he didn't kill me so I just had to watch.
Kids SHOULD be safe in there schools!

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I like this story viol you to whoever wrote you did an amazing job keep it up

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I really liked it and whoever wrote this did a good job

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Love it thank you for writing it

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I liked this story i want to continue to read this story :) whoever wrote it you did an amazing job keep up the good work :)

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waiting for the next chapter can't wait

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Oh my goodness!! This is one of the best James/Lily era fanfictions I've ever read!! I found it today, and read all the way through. I love how you've developed all the characters and how many of them will go on to be the parents of Harry's classmates. Great job and please post the next chapter soon!! :)

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I am totally in love with your story x I can't wait for you to do another chapter x

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Found this story last week, and couldn't stop reading. The best story I have read so far. Love the story line, dialogues. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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UGH! I CURSE YOU! No, seriously, I found this story sometime yesterday and have done nothing but read through it. It is so good! I didn't leave reviews on the other chapters because I couldn't help myself from immediately moving onto the next chapter. I've seriously been glued to my computer in an almost sad way. This is the best story I have ever read on this site, and I commend you for writing it through your senior year. I'm also a senior in college (I am actually on spring break, giving me the time to read your amazing story!) so I can imagine how difficult that would be. Anyway, this is an amazing story and I will be sticking with it. Please update soon! On a different note, I loved this chapter because I had been waiting to see when Lily would find out about Remus. Great job!

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Wait why is a pool in the backyard strange for muggles? Tons of muggles have pools. And therefore it wouldnt look abnormal

Author's Response: Just that its uncommon in old mannor houses and was probably put in using magic.


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Another wonderful chapter! You are right about this chapter being dialogue heavy but that is what made it great! I love the idea of splitting it into two volumes! I know that you're busy being a teacher and all but please update as soon as you can! thank you!

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Ahhh I have been refreshing constantly throughout the past month!! I absolutely love the series and i love how detailed everything is! Thank you thank you thank you!

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Wow... This story is brilliant! I just read the entire story in 5 days. Especially with this last update since I plan on being a teacher too. You write beautifully! I love this fic and I am eagerly waiting for your next update.

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hey did you know you are one of the few LILY/JAMES stories that actual includes severous? but how can they not include him? how could someone forget old snivelous? his own story is purely tragic. i mean he has loved lily far longer than James did. He's also a struggling person, i dont think anyone has ever loved him, except maybe lily as a friend. I know im rambling, but i just have always felt very sorry for snape. he lives such a hard life. i dont think he ever meant to call lily a mudblood he was just very very embarrassed. he's never been someone to fit in, and he doesnt want his death eater friends to think less of him, cause then he would have no one! his whole life though was devoted to Lily, even when he was a follower to the Dark Lord. he never stopped loving her, and im sure he emotionally died the day lily died. Can you imagine loving someone your whole life, and then to hold them dead in your arms, never knowing just how much you loved them!

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I was saving my review for the end seeing as I have had a lot of chapters to catch up on, but I thought that this chapter very much deserved one. The writing on this is absolutely superb, the set-up in the previous ones built it all up brilliantly and the action was breathless. Well done!

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Pretty please update soon? I love your story so very very much!! And I agree with you, kids SHOULD be safe. Not just in schools, but everywhere

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WOW! First off I totally understand your reservations about the last line. On a happier not I LOVED this Chapter! You displayed exactly why it is that Lily is the type of woman every man dreams of having with her unwavering love and loyalty! She's the kind of woman you go to war for because you know she wouldn't hesitate to do the same for you! PLEASE update ASAP and thank you!

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This was a really good chapter.
I liked how they wrote to the prophet and got Gentry the recognition she deserved.
And the marauders deliberately getting their map confiscated is completely different to it getting lost or accidently confiscated which usually happens!
Kids should be safe in schools. and it's completely abysmal they aren't always.
K x

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Hi! So I started your story a couple of days ago and I fell in love with it. The story is so brilliantly written, it could definitely be the prologue for the real thing :) This story has made me really feel the same emotions as the characters, and it has been a while since a story has made me feel like that. I really hope you continue writing, because this story is REALLY awesome

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This story is fantastic! Everything that occurs connects very neatly to the information that J.K. Rowling has already provided. I particularly enjoy your character development, because the characters are well rounded. I love exploring the more minor, "evil" characters. JKR never fully developed Wormtail, so it is nice to see this development. It is also fantastic seeing Snape and Lily's relationship grow, or maybe more accurately, see them becoming more distant, because JKR's scene where Snape calls Lily a mudblood was not convincing enough. One incident does not make a person hate another person, it is a series of incidences. This is a concept that I feel you grasp very well. And also, I appreciate how much you acknowledge the grey area's between good and evil, because it makes the story more realistic. It makes readers think and question, which, I believe, are what all good books should do. This is a flaw the Harry Potter series has. The series has a distinct difference between good and evil. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your future chapters.

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