Really really sweet, clever, well written for the most part. Nice job. Report Review
Really good, I think it would have been good if you had Ron tell Hermione about the locket. But it was great! 9/10Author's Response: Thanks! It would've been rather nice if I had Ron tell Hermione about the locket wouldn't it have? Report Review
two words: so cute! (really really good, seriously) Report Review
This is lovely and really true to character -well done!!! Report Review
awww so sad and happy yay!!! Report Review
Pretty good. It could use a little more details, and perhaps you should get a beta to edit your story for you. I noticed alot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Best of luck. Phoenixx Report Review
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