interesting. i like it!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do! I'm a bit writer-blocked right now, but I AM trying to get the third one up. Report Review
Please update! I look forward to the next chapter.Author's Response: Thanks, I am trying to make the next one as good as possible, and longer! Hope you keep checking in :D Report Review
So far I like it. I wish the chapters were longer tough.Author's Response: They will be, I promise! I am trying really hard to make the next one realllly long and realllly good. Thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
I liked this chapter. haha. I thought that it was really well written.
Okay so I have made two banners for you...well two options. I can alter everything except the color...sorry.
Email me at firstname.lastname@example.org and I can send them to you or just PM me on the forums. Either one works.Author's Response: Okay I emailed you.
Now that Ginny has made her indiscretion public, she had better get to Harry before he reads of it in the Daily Prophet. I don't think that Ron will take the news too well either given his contempt and dislike of Draco. (Has Draco just earned a lifetime position as a test subject for WWW's new products?)
You refer in the summary to Harry's sins. I hope that this story doesn't turn into a "balance of error" fic, e.g. "Ginny, I have to confess that I slept with someone after a party to celebrate the end of training and I understand. Please forgive me" "Oh Harry, I love you."
Marriages that start off with both partners cheating shortly before the wedding aren't marriages that last. Reestablishing trust after one strays is hard enough and far more difficult will be doing so where both will have doubts about trusting the other. This plot device is also a cliche of daytime programming. I hope that Harry's sins involve something other than infidelity.
Where's Ron? Why isn't he with Hermione?Author's Response: Well, that is a very informative review, and due to your doubts, I might change the story plot just a bit. I will see what I can do. Ron is around, but he is off doing his own thing at the moment, which you will learn of in the next chapter. He is WITH Hermione, he just isn't able to be around at this time. Thank you much for reviewing. It really does change my point of view. Report Review
finally and poor hermione, i wonder wen will harry enter this story and wat "sins" has he cimmited? update soon!Author's Response: Sorry about the delay. There were some validation problems. Anyhow, I guess you'll just have to wait and see :D Thanks for reading and following and reviewing. I am working on the third chapter now. Happy Holidays. Report Review
update soon can't wait for more chapters in the futureAuthor's Response: Alright, Thank you for reviewing. I will have the next chapter up as soon as possible. Report Review
hey I've already reviewed this story but I wasn't sure if you still wanted me to make you a banner. I never got an email from you so I was just wondering whether or not you still wanted me to make one. I had no other way of checking on the matter so here I am, haha.
So...do you or don't you?!
birdie01Author's Response: I do :) Thank you for getting back to me..again haha. I haven't been on very much lateley. BEen working on other stuff, but I would absolutley love for you to make me a banner. Please please PLEASE? hehe. Thank you! -Me Report Review
It's good so far! This sounds like a great idea and it's good writing, good job!Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you keep reading! Chapter two is validating. Report Review
update soon can't wait for more dramaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. Chapter two is validating. Report Review
Wow, this is pretty good. I like it so far. Update soon. You have a good use of detail, and that's always a good thing.
Oh...and I saw that you are looking for a banner. I can make one for you if you need one still. It probably won't be the most spectacular banner in the world but it can be a temporary until you can find a better one. Email me at robynxx93embarqmail.com if you want me to make you a banner. I'll need to know what you want on it and all that stuff. Author's Response: I am so glad that you like this chapter since I myself don't like it. The second one is way better in my opinion. I will email you soon about that banner! :) Report Review
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