Oh the woes of a pregnant women. This was such a cute Lily/James and you definetly did the couple justice. I really like how James brought her flowers and Lily's little hormone induced rant and the death of the wadrobe were really cute and clever. Great job!

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awww! very cute :) I love how James is such a sweetie :)

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Aawww :] This was so sweet! Poor Lils! *snuggles her* This was adorable, I loved it very, very much. As I read this, I wondered, "Why on earth do so many writers on this site make such a big deal about James and Lily finally falling in love and getting married? They're just like any other couple." This fic proved it. Automatic 10/10!

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I normally don't like fluffy things, cause it makes me gag. But this was so subtle, and so cutishly well written, I'll probably have a smile on my face for the rest of the day =D

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Now I'LL have a smile on my face for the rest of the day! Thanks for the awesome review, and I'm so glad you didn't gag! lol

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amazing.you are just amazing.keep it up.i love how james and lily are potrayed!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you =) And I shall definitely try to keep it up!

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Aww that's so sweet! It's stories like these that make a person realize what exactly Harry missed. It was beautifully done. I couldn't even tell that this was your first L/J fic.

Author's Response: Awww =) Thanks so much! I know eh? I mean, it's not a sad story, but because of what we know it kind of Can be interpreted that way, eh? Thanks!

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Absolutely wonderful. For a first-timer with Lily/James, you've written them very, very well. I loved that in the end she didn't even need to tell him. I loved the entire paragraph about how the baby was a result of their love. I also liked James's cheeky remarks. Can't have James without a bit of cockiness! Anyway, wonderful job! :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I'm glad all those things worked well for you! And I'm glad my debut Lily/James fic didn't seem all that debut-ish! lol. Thank you for the great review!

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That was beautiful. We all have our days where don't feel our best, but James did a great job of making it all better!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And, yes, James sure did a great job...I wish he'd make me feel better when I'm sad. lol

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Ooh, i really liked it. It was sweet, and romantic, and funny. It wasreally good, a lovely fluffy story.

Author's Response: I'm glad the fluff was lovely! I didn't want it TOO fluffy...you know? lol. Thank you!!!

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This was great good job with James/Lily!


Don't change a thing!


10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how good it is to hear that!!

=)

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Aw, very sweet. Nice job at the whole crazy pregnent woman thing. Very Nice.

Author's Response: Hehe! I'm glad the whole 'crazy pregnant woman' thing worked out! lol, thanks alot!

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Aw. So sweet. Really nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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excellent story!!!
i loved it!
i hope i have a husband much like james when i get married!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved it, and I honestly hope I have a jusband like James as well!! hehe, thanks tonnes!

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one word:
AAAW!
that was so sweet!!

Author's Response: =) I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks!

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one word:
AAAW!
that was so sweet!!

Author's Response: That word is definitely a good one!!

hehe, thanks alot!

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superb i liked it very much romantic and caring10\10

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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That was really sweet!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!

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i love the line where she thinks "he only gave 23 chromosomes". I love the story! very cute

Author's Response: Yeah...I probably snickered when I typed out that line. hehe. Glad you love it! Thanks so much!

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That was so cute!!! I loved it!!! I can't wait to see more Lily/James from you! Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Nice plug there to try and get me to write more Lily/James. hehe. I'll see what I can do!

=)

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Very sweet. Good work. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I shall try=)

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I really liked it. It was really sweet! I think you could even take this and make a longer story out of it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you really liked it!

You know, I probably COULD take it and make it longer, but this story was the product of a sudden burst of inspiration, and James and Lily aren't really my strong era people...if you know what I mean. I'd rather leave you wanting more than being a bit disappointed...=)

Thanks!!

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aww so sweet!
nice to have a james/lily fic without all the war and stuff.
i smiled all the way through :)


Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad it made you smile!

And, I know what you mean. It's either War stuff, or School stuff...there aren't many in the middle. Thank you so much!

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