Oh my gosh! This story is not just perfect, it is absolutely and simply breathtaking, beautiful, stunning, fabulous and phenomenal! I completely adore it! It is so emotional and great that I had tears in my eyes as I read it! This is the most sensitive fanfiction/story I have ever read! You wrote it so touchingly that I really felt like I am one of them, because I really felt the emotions they experienced and it was not one of these "they suddenly fall in love" stories, but a story like it really could happen I think. I mean nobody would expect Hermione to just fall in love with Draco! But your story is more likely. And the reactions of Ginny, Harry and Ron were great, too! I mean it was obvious that Ron did not want to accept it and that Harry would try to understand her and it was clear that Ginny was on Hermione's side, but it was the way you described it that made it so special. Draco's feelings and doubts and fears were just perfectly described, I think. After all his family is pretty cruel and probably won't like his new girlfriend. And the scene in the empty classroom was really great too! So romantic and thrilling. All in all the story was funny, sad and also captivating and that made it so engrossing! I don't know if you have written a sequel, but I would LOVE to read it! You are going to read other comments from me sure enough, Greetings Hanna Report Review
Perfect! Ther is no other word for this story! It is absolutely perfect! So sweet and on the other hand sad too! I'll now read the other half and leave a longer review after that! Report Review
damn i was bummed that this was it. I was wanting more out of this story. Well it was FANTASTIC ^^ Report Review
I loveeddd it! It was sweet. I actually liked the length believe it or not, anywho it was great story! Report Review
Aww it made me smile, ear to ear =) Very cute and happy ending! Yay! lol Report Review
I really liked it! Very funny, very cute, very in character! I was cracking up at some of your lines, love it! haha I'll read on! Report Review
love love loved it! so beautiful, and so well written! adding to my favourites! Report Review
That was wonderful. You're a GREAT writer! (:Author's Response: aw thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the great review!!! ~meghan Report Review
YAYness. (: i'm intrested in what's going to happen with Hermione & Draco.Author's Response: we shall see... lol thanks for the review! ~meghan Report Review
Great story I love it! Please do write a sequel! I would love to see how they would fare, being scrutinized by everyone and pressure from Draco's dad. :) Report Review
That was wonderful. I truly enjoyed it, especially because you showed the way that Draco had changed, but you didn't make it all sudden and easy. Being a R/Hr fan first I also liked that Ron wasnt getting the raw end of the deal as he does in so many Dramione's. Great read and great job.Author's Response: thanks! yeah, i really love ron as a character and i hate when he gets ripped apart in some dramiones :) and i love ron and hermione together in the books, but i just really like to read and write dramiones. that's the point of fanfiction, right? to take something that wouldn't happen and make it plausible and enjoyable! i'm really glad that you liked it! thanks for the great review!!! ~meghan Report Review
Wow! That was great! You know what's funny, though? Is in my Dramione story, Draco kisses Hermione in the Great Hall, with every body watching. Anyway, great story and I really liked the ending. (Who doesn't like a happy ending?) ^_^ 10/10, overall.Author's Response: everyone loves happy endings, lol! i'm glad you liked it! thanks for the awesome reveiw!!! ~meghan Report Review
I definitely enjoyed it! And a 16,000 One-Shot is AMAZING! Can't wait to read the next half! 10/10, without a doubt. ^_^Author's Response: aw thanks! i hope you enjoy the second half!!! ~meghan Report Review
Oh my...this is so good. I'm a huge DM/HG fan and have read hundreds of fics on the pair and this has to be among my favorites. Very well done!Author's Response: wow, thanks!!! i'm a huge dramione fan too, lol, and i've read a lot of fics about them as well. i'm sooo happy that you liked it so much. thanks for the awesome review!!! ~meghan Report Review
nice. youve made it flow well so farAuthor's Response: thanks! i hope you like the second half!!! ~meghan Report Review
Just decided to read this one and I think it's really cute! It's definitely a fantasy to fall that head over heels that quickly haha, but I still love it!!! :-DAuthor's Response: yes, well, fantasy is fun, haha! i'm glad you liked it, cuz! ~meghan Report Review
this story rocks! you should definitely write longer stuff next time but still awesome!Author's Response: glad you liked it! i actually set out to write a one-shot, but that didn't happen. if you're looking for something longer, though, i have a draco/hermione novel in progress here, so feel free to check it out. thanks for reviewing! ~meghan Report Review
So sweet!!! =) I loved the part about them kissing in public.Author's Response: thanks! i liked that part too!!! glad you liked it! ~meghan Report Review
That was brilliant! The plot was original and the end really sweet. Well done!Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for taking the time to review!!! Report Review
I think it was all very nice. :) It was really interesting to see Draco as the "coward" instead of the no-strings Slytherin King. Moreover, the story is nicely written, pretty life-like and just a wonder to read! :) Rating 10/10 From light_blueAuthor's Response: i really pleased that you liked it! and it's nice to know that you enjoyed draco's characterization in this story. thank you so much for taking the time to review and rate!!! ~meghan Report Review
I totally loved it! If Hermione and Draco ever actually liked each other, I am sure this is how their story would play out. Even more, Draco and Hermione are more logical than in most DracoHermione fanfics without being too strong. Wonderful job! :) I give it a 9/10~remember not to use "only" too much-otherwise its awesome! :) From light_blueAuthor's Response: thanks, i'm glad you've enjoyed the first half! and i'm very happy to know that the story felt realistic and logical to you - that means a lot!!! i hadn't realized that i used 'only' too much - sorry! thanks again!!! ~meghan Report Review
I have to say I am usually against Hermione/Draco ships, but this one just seemed so believable. It was an all together enjoyable story and I am glad I stumbled upon it. Amazing work.Author's Response: wow, thanks!!! it's always nice to get someone turned on to something they usually don't go for; i have to blame 'quickwit' for turning me on to hermione/draco ships! i'm really glad that you enjoyed it!!! thank you sooo much for the awesome review! ~Meghan Report Review
yay! cool story!! =DAuthor's Response: woohoo!!! Report Review
wow! it was really good! =)Author's Response: glad you like it! enjoy the second half!!! Report Review
Wow. That was so good. I can't say much more about it, except very nice. You are a great writer, I'm going to read your other stories. 10/10Author's Response: i'm so glad that you liked it! and if you do read my other story, i hope you enjoy that as well. thanks soooo much for your review!!! ~meghan Report Review
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