OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I usually can't be bothered to finish reading long fics but this kept me content the whole way through. Its an amazing plot line and OBVIOUSLY well thought out. I love the sassy wit that appears constantly in this book and LOVE the way you use sarcasm, as I too am a firm believer that sarcasm is an ART! Can't wait to read Armilla II. HURRY AND WRITE MORE! I CAN'T WAIT! LITERALLY!

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I love it when Armilla and Snape banter. It's brill.

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good one!

PS- this is the second time I'm readings this :)

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Wow...
What love I see in there relationship...
I really liked it. :)

-Siriuslover177

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Oh my goodness...
He is her sister..
My god!!

-Siriuslover177

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No way...
Oh my god...
This is... my goodness!!

-Siriuslover177

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My goodness.
She gets three days with her only.
That is not enough ):
And Snape apparently knows something about this.
I really enjoyed this chapter. :)

-Siriuslover177

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She found her mother...
My goodness...
Loved it...

-Siriuslover177

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Puddles. :P
I really liked this chapter.
And I am really liking Snape's sarcastic tone. :P

-Siriuslover177

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I wonder what the dream meant..
I mean, who was that woman..
I really liked this chapter.
And I love Snape. :P

-Siriuslover177

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So... she is pureblood..
That is all we know.
Also, we know that Snape knows some things about it...
I really enjoyed this chapter!!

-Siriuslover177

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Awe, I really liked this chapter.
I really hope she gets okay soon. :)
I like how Snape has to take care of her. :P
Really, really good chapter!

-Siriuslover177

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Oh my god...
He is crazy!!
I cannot believe he did that!
I mean, attacking a little girl!!
Wow...

-Siriuslover177

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Oh my god!
I cannot believe she is gone..
Her only family, gone, forever. :(

-Siriuslover177

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I do wonder why that happened...
And why Snape is all the sudden interested in her...
Really good chapter!!

-Siriuslover177

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My goodness!
What happened...
Very, very odd...
Loved it none the less!!

-Siriuslover177

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What luck she has. :/
Umbrige is... uggg!
And Snape, he is just uhhh as well. :P
Loved it!!

-Siriuslover177

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Awe, I feel bad for her.
I mean, not knowing who you are.
I really liked this chapter. :)

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Very interesting.
I wonder who he parents are.
And how her mother died..
I really liked it. :)

-Siriuslover177

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I am simply amazed at how good you write, not only readability wise, but also when it comes to staying true to the original characters. I usually don't Snape stories because people tend to make him a lot friendlier than he is in JK's universe. You, on the other hand, keep Snape the way I love him. A wonderful thing, considering that you have to make him fit the role of a (nice) guardian. I have two half-sisters who are almost twice my age, one of them took care of me for a while, and in my opinion your view of Armilla's and Snape's relation is very realistic. Your story is simply said amazing and without a doubt the best work of fanfiction I have ever read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was very conscious of having Snape stay in character as much as possible, as I had read so many stories where tyhe personality I loved had just disappeared!

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HOW COULD YOU LET MERLE DIE?!Honestly,you are so cruel!I hope this isn't the kind of story where everything goes wrong for the protagonist.Your writing was good but I'm giving you a low rating because the ending was very sad.I recently lost my grandmother and she was as close to me as Merle and Armilla,and I just don't like having to repeat it.

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My parents are going to be relieved that I'm done reading this story. I've spent every possible second on the computer for the past four or five days reading this, and I've lost a few hours of good sleep, also. I was amazed by how well you were able to weave your story into the already existing events without changing them, despite Armilla's role so close to the action. When I first began reading, it bothered me that the story was written in first person, and I think I'd suggest writing in third person omniscient next time, but then, that might just be what I'm used to. Thank you so much for posting this story; it's been a pleasure to read.

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I think that your story is very good so far.It's good you have been able to write so many chapters(unlike OTHER writers who abandon the book halfway through and disappoint their readers). I really hope that Merle doesn't die,or I might just have to do something about it.Thanks.

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I've read this fanfiction on sooo many fanfiction sites, it's unbelievable! I really love this story, as I'm sure you can tell, since I've read it on every site I've come across.

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"That young girl is one of the least benightedly unintelligent organic life forms . . ."

Least unintelligent would mean she's the smartest, and 'least benighted(ly)' means she has good morals. Just figured I'd point that out. Also, all life forms are organic.

Author's Response: I didn\\\'t write the line. It\\\'s quoted from someone else and is found in a book of insults. I\\\'m not about to correct it.

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