This is good! I like the character and I love how she's already being introduced into the fold! I can see some friction might emerge what with her dad working in beast division and all! Update soon!Author's Response: thanks so much i will deffinatly start writing more of this Report Review
If this gets any better i wont be able to review ill be so amazed! You have got James and Sirius's characters perfect i love them even in the short time it took to read! ahh this is fantastic please please continue!!! 10/10 kate p.s it was kinda short hope they get longer!Author's Response: Another review from you wow thanks I will work more on this story Report Review
please update soon, good startAuthor's Response: thanks for the great review I'll update as soon as I can Report Review
It is very good, please update soon and make the next chapter longer, You write very well. Report Review
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