The ending has gotten me again. You are slowly making Blaise win me over. It's so well put together. Report Review
Perfect, perfect characterization of Blaise and wonderful plot starting from the very beginning. You've made him so real that his character speaks loud and clear. I love the humor part at the end; I want to keep it with me for a long time. Report Review
Draco Malfoy has to be the most hilarious character in this entire fic. Great job, and since I just read this for the first time today, I'll go ahead and give you a thumbs up for the entire fic. Report Review
I really like where this story is going :)
I think what makes it such a believable fanfic is the fact that their are so many unbelievable events (Malfoy&Ron - enough said). I like the way you portray the characters and the way you've written this (:
so please update soon! Report Review
this is a great chapter!!
ps: just wondering, do you have this fic up on ffnet as well? Report Review
Alright, so I was going to leave a review on all of the chapters, but I was so intrigued that I told myself I would go back and do it after I read everything you've got so far, but really..that's too much of a nuissance for me. :P
I'll just review all the chapters in one big review, if you don't mind.
As for spelling and grammar, there were some typos in some of the chapters, including this one, but it was readable and I could easily dismiss them.
As for the plot and idea of the story, it is brilliant. I love how you took Draco and made him gay, as well as Ron. Everyone always does Harry/Draco ships, but Ron/Draco is refreshing to see. It's also refreshing to see Blaise/Hermione, even though I am a huge fan of Draco/Hermione, myself. I do love this story though. I also love how Pansy took offense to being called a death eater, as well as stood up for Hermione in this chapter.
This chapter was well written, especially since you basically winged the animagus/metamorphamagus explanations and such. I actually found myself believing your explanations easily. Excellent job, so far. Really.
Can't wait for an update. Excellent job. (:
10/10 Report Review
:) I had a huge grin on my face while reading this chapter...Great job, I'm looking forward to the next one. Report Review
i love this story... you haven't written a new chapter in ages... why not?!?
you MUST continue, this is one of the best stories i have read =D
pop round and read my new one
grace Report Review
This story is just awesome!
You actually managed to let Hermione stay in character, though the plot is far from the book (and a really good idea ^-^).
And your Blaise's character fits with the 6th book as well. Some people just let him appear a good deal to,o well, unslytherin. From all we know from the books he's more than just a bit arrogant and you put that in -while still managing to make him likeable in some twisted way.
And Draco and Ron... Lol, they're just too good to be true ^-^
Hm, but why is Blaise acting so distant? Maybe he's trying too back out from his confession, because he believes it wasn't such a good idea after all to get too attached with Hermione?
I noticed that you didn't post a new chapter for a good while and I think that's really sad. Your story is brilliant and I'd love to read more of it.
Please continue soon, I'm really looking forward to it,
Amrei Report Review
whered the zabini hermione passion go?
whyd it dissipate after the ball?
huh. well ron and draco... well wow. haha thats different.
and hmm so harry likes both hermione and pansy?
lol well this is certainly an interesting fic!
keep going:) id like to find out waht actually happens :)
and btw. i really like your writing... lol your actual wording. diction if you will.
update quickly! sorry for your loss :/ Report Review
oOooo whats a gonna happen next?
stay tuned? Report Review
This is AWESOME!! Please update soon; Blaise is a GOD! xx Report Review
nice, it's developed really well so far, but it'd be nice to get a little more blaize/hermione in there, cause so far there's only been fights and disagreements, only uccompanied by small amounts of happiness or pleasue. I.E It'd Be NICE/ WONDERFUL To Actually See Them HAPPY Being TOGETHER!
WITH LOVE, HEIDI. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX XX Report Review
This is simply amazing.
I have to say I love this story very much and I think you're a fantastic writer! But, I see you haven't updated in a long time - I hope you haven't abandoned it?
I beg you please, for the love of all things good and holy, update! Report Review
alright, i'm interested.
(: Report Review
This is so original! Please update SOON!! Report Review
great chapter, I really like this story so far. Report Review
oh my freakin god.
best. story. ever.
please,, for the love of all that is harry potter, update! Report Review
You have no idea how happy I am right now for finding your story :D
I was really sad and irritated when I could no longer find your story on ffnet and have been looking for it ever since. When I stumbled over this site and found you story I was so happy I screamed in delight and devoted the rest of my day to read your wonderful words.
The Bargain is one of my favourite fictions ever and I have read quite a lot :P The way you portrait your characters is amazing. The raw emotions presented in some of your scenes and the confusion and lust is so well written and very captivating to read about. Your words influence me to such a degree that I dream about the different scenes for months to come.
I see that you havn't posted all the chapters posted on ffnet here, and that it has been quite some time since you last updated. I just hope this doesn't mean that you are abandoning this fic, as I would see that as a crime :p
Your upcoming Quidditch scene is my all time favourite fanfiction scene and it has haunted me since I first read it. It would truly be a shame if not more people got to read it, as it is addictingly good and the tension is so amazing I had to read it over and over again.
You are a fantastic writer and I hope that I will be reading more of your great story soon.
Please update this story and not let it remain a hiatus ! :D
Your devoted reader
Linn Report Review
Wow! This is so incredible! There really are not enough Blaise/Hermione's on here. I love how enigmatic you've made Blaise. It'll be interesting to see where this goes. Please update soon. Love it! ^_^ Report Review
OMG I am in love with this fanfic, seriously you have to update, I need to read more! Report Review
i liked it much better when there was stuff between her and blaise, what happened!?! is he like shutting down because he thinks that he was too open and mushy and stuff on the night of the ball? cause i could completly see that being the case. but . ugh! :)
and dude, harry was being such a jerk. and pansy was actually nice! and pretty... i just read a fic about her being a bit off her marbles you know and this is a bit of an adjustment ;) lol
all in all i like it alot!!
i really hope you update really soon!!
8.5/10 :P Report Review
i can't believe it's been 6 chapters already and i haven't reviewed!! especially because im in the Review Fest. But it's just been so good that i've just been telling myself 'oh no, i'll do it on the next chapter' lol i just wanted to keep reading! :)
this is really intriguing, i've never read a Hermione/Blaise thing before i don't think. and it's a different idea too, with the contract and everything. I can't believe that all those people are just admitting that they're gay though! and Hermione finding out about 3 people in the same day!? dude, that's funny :D Report Review
Oh god I hate you so much! I NEED to know who the Phantom is. I love the Phantom! He's so misunderstood, emotional. Apologies.
Very good story, some wonderful ideas. Keep up the good work. Report Review
awww blaise was awww this is i really loved this chapter i love this story great job!! :D Report Review
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