i love the book so far just hoping that there is more chapters to come Report Review
Hey, yeah, great story but, how can I put this? Us over in England, well we don't have graduation ceremonies! Still great story, good plot, all round loving it! You're a great writer Report Review
Please update soon!! waiting eagerly! Report Review
I hope this doesn't sound like a ending chapter review, but just wanted to share my feelings on it.
So, you might not remember me, as I have just reviewed twice or thrice before only.
Let's see.. I started this reading story when someone had copy - pasted this chapter on Orkut in 2007. Then, I don't know if it was your's or not, but someone with the same a/c name came there and claimed it to be her's and gave the link here.
I started following the series in 2007 only (though I made the a/c in 2008), when I was just 14 and was fresh out of finishing the HP books. But I just didn't want to let go of the HP universe and then I came upon this site, but primarily your story. And I was always a fan of James/Lily pairing, in fact in later years, I gave up on other genres/stories altogether and just kept coming back for this one pairing only. But till now, none of the other James/Lily story had that much of an impact on me, as your story did.
It was 2009, when I was really last active on this site. You got married that year too, if I remember correctly and stopped posting for a while. I guess I kept growing in and out of HP universe as well and I took long gaps in coming back. But whenever I did, your story was the first thing I checked, always.
I guess I am not trying to be sentimental about a story and fan fiction at that too, but I guess I keep failing. But it is hard not to, as this story was also part of my growing up. I started following this story when I was 14 and now I am 20.
I must have read the whole story from start to finish, for maybe 15-20 times by now easily. But it just never gets boring.
I wouldn't tell you to post fast or anything like that, since somewhere deep down, I don't really want it to end. And we all know the ending to this story. I remember asking you in a review if there is any chance of you changing the ending, but you said, you wanted it to be as true as it can be, to the original storyline.
I don't know how many fans are still there, from the time I started, but do remember your story affected all of us. Report Review
Man, you need to update!
I really love this story. And James and Lily's relationship is everything that I have wanted in mine... Please update soon! Report Review
Are you doing the "Thrice defied lord voldemort" thing? I loved how he knew Lily was pregnant before she did. Report Review
This is a great story! Looking forward to the next chapter :) Report Review
Please update, its been six months now! :/ a new chapter would be a great xmas surprise. :) Report Review
Finally finished reading- you did a great job! It's as if mrs rowling had written it hersekf :) Report Review
I want to read more. This story is awesomeness. that is all :) Report Review
hey! please update soon!!! Report Review
Yay! Lily is pregnant with Harry... can't wait for him to make his first appearance! And I enjoyed this chapter, too. Though, a couple critics, when you have a sentence before dialogue you want to end it with a period (not a comma like you did) before the dialogue. It's more grammatically correct. And then I noticed you had two spaces between each sentences (you only need one space between sentences). Then there were some typos, but nothing I was able to glaze over while reading.
I especially loved Sirius's boistous attitude when he started questioning whether he was going to be godfather (should should kept lowercase). And having Voldemort be the one to draw both Lily and James to Lily's pregnancy first was definitely an interesting twist considering where we're all leading (with Voldemort killing James and Lily and failing to kill Harry due to Lily's protection, thus being torn from his body into oblivion to wait for a follower to find him) at the end of James and Lily's story. Anyway, great chapter! :) Report Review
really good chapter !:) but isnt lilys patronus a doe in the original hp series and thats why snapes patronus was a doe ? just curious as to why you changed it ! :) Report Review
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG i just finished the whole story, sorry but i decided not to review after every chapter cos it would mean id have to wait longer before reading the rest! I am loving this story! All the other james/lily stories ive read always take AGES for them to get together and then either end straight away, or break them up in the middle and then end!
Thks one is so good cos you did the hating him bit really well but didnt drag it on for ages and then theyve been amazingly happy since which delights me as im prob one of the biggest mushy romantics out there!
At first i thought this was just gona be a sweet story about how cute a couple they were.. Which i was fine with.. But then after graduating you made it so much more complex with their jobs and the order and everything, its incredible!
Ive been really sick lately so this story has made my days so much more barable! Thank you so much!
Please before the end have things sorted with remus, its so sad to see him this way! And ahh lilies pregnent ek! I cant wait for the rest, oh and i really loved the bit where she talked with james' grandfather about being pregnant, it was really nice!
The goblin village they can access is also really cool, espesh if its your origional take on it, and the rings are amazing.. If there was one thing in the entire story i didnt like it was the message lily wrote on james' ring, i just dont think it fit well.. Personally i think if it had said something along the lines of "i cant believe i finally said yes" it would have been perfect with james' message and just would have been cuter.. But thats just my own oersonal oppinon, not an insult of any kind intended!
You make james and lily as a couple almost unbearable sweet and amazing, why cant he be real?!?! But youre writing is so amazing sometimes it does feel real!:-):-):-)
Please please please please update this story as soon as you can! Since ive read it all in one go, i pm not aware of how long it usually takes you to update but im literally praying tonight that its not long! And about how many more chapters are you going to do?
I presume youre gona write untill theyre death, though it will be a sad ending i think it wiuld be a good one, espesially with lilys dream and everything :-)
I love you and this story! Keep up the good work! Report Review
okay so here is the thing... if you put this on fan fiction. net the entire website would implode. Because this is DAMN good :) I love you and your writing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Seriously i have been reading this for at least three years Report Review
I totally love your story! Ever since I read this fanfic others sirously suck! PLEASE continue updating chapters. I am looking for them nearly everyday. xxx Caro Report Review
Omg, you updated! I was SO EXCITED when i checked(which i do weekly) and saw another chapter! Loved it btw! And please please please dont make us wait this long for the next one! :) Report Review
NOW! Report Review
You are really good at writing may I just say...
Please, please, please update soon!
I love the story and can't wait too see how far along the timeline you will take it :)
Rosa xx Report Review
this story is really very greatly fantastically great, but there is just 1 problem:
u need to please please please write some more! :) Report Review
The wait was long, but it was worth it. So, I'm guessing the events place the time at around Christmas 1979? Because I hear Harry was one when James and Lily died, so that will be Halloween 1981.
This was a wonderful chapter, but I'm guessing this wasn't really the 3rd time they defied Voldemort, or perhaps it was, considering that the prophecy should be made in some time.
I still await the time when Remus gets some sense and asks Lauren out, but I fathom that will also involve a certain vampire.
It's hard to imagine Sirius, of all people settling down, but you've made it absolutely believable. That is amazing work.
Eagerly waiting the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you all for the reviews! I am happy to hear you are all enjoying the story (again or for the first time) and like the latest chapter. Yes, the timing is around xmas 1979, and yes, this was their third time facing voldemort. i am organizing my thoughts for the next chapter so we'll see how things go. as you can tell, my chapters are longer than most since i end up with lots to say...and consequently, lots to edit. i will do my best. :) Report Review
Loved it!! I can't believe they found that way they were pregnant but finally Harry is on his way, hehe. Is this the third time they defied Voldemort? Anyways, I hope you update soon. Keep up the amazing work! Report Review
I can't believe she found out that way. But I mean they're pregnant! Yippee! Update soon please Report Review
I can't believe you finally updated!!! It has been forever!!! I'm so happy now!!! I love the story and it was a great chapter. Please continue to update soon!!! Report Review
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