I need more! This was great. Please write more when you have time! Report Review
Luv it need more, when do we get some more chapters Report Review
This is the best story I have read so far! Please continue this some more! Please update soon i dont think i can wait any longer!!!
Iv read all your stories and their all magical, but i really need some more!!
Hope you're doing okay!! Report Review
I love this story. PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE, write some more, the suspense is killing me. Report Review
you have a ton of mistakes in the stories last few chapters , really hommy for hermione and the bad pun and changing the word cape to pink bunnies things and worse changing snapes name to something so stupid really have spell check and proof read your chapters low score is for all the mistakes Report Review
so far all good even the previous stories Report Review
well done! This is an excellent work of literature! Report Review
When are you going to make a new
chapter!?!?!? This story is so good it
cant end there!!! You need to update
soon Report Review
OMG!You Are sooo flustrating !I have never read a story that wasent finshed when I started reading it but yours!!Because your good!!!But dam. 3freaking months and nothing?What's up?Hope you Are well please finish this story PLEASE! Report Review
Have found this story so far to be the best, most compete and engaging I have read
outside the actual books thank u and I hope u will continue Report Review
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed reading resonance, revolution and resolution. You are truly a brilliant writer. Apparently chapter 86 will be your last and I'm wondering what will happen, I can't wait to find out. Report Review
I forgot this story was still developing. Got to the end of this chapter & realized it. Aack! Great job. Keep up the good work! Report Review
Awesome, can't wait to finish. Report Review
great, getting this going again. Report Review
We need more! Keep up the great work! I love it! Report Review
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"He wasn't sure what he was going to do with himself when he finished reading it. He wasn't sure even now."
That is what masturbation is for my dear friend, and sorry but its a bit unbelievable that he wouldn't have discovered masturbation at least at the age of 13/14 which from my point of view is when boys really start talking about there *cough* habits.
I discovered on my own without prompting or knowledge of what masturbation was at the age of 10/11 I think 11, male here btw.
I get that you want to keep your story non-explicate but a nod to that he knew exactly what he could do and felt a little icky for thinking about it would have been more realistic.
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