This was different for me. Sad. Who likes seeing Harry die? Not me. But well-written.Author's Response: there was a time when i hated harry and wanted to kill him at every opportunity, lol. i don't think that anymore. but for this fic, he had to die.
thank you - im pleased you liked it, even if it made you sad Report Review
This was really very touching. The last chapter was especially beautifully painful. It was written so well with great depth of emotions.
Loved itAuthor's Response: thank you so much! i am very pleased you liked this Report Review
Very nice short story! I always like it when Draco and Hermione both end up alive and together. A baby would have been nice, too, as a sign of hope for the future. :DAuthor's Response: oh no, no baby's; too cliched for me, im sorry!
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Wow amazing =) Good job!Author's Response: thank you hun! Report Review
i like this story.
i don't really like how short it is. ) =
but i am just being greedy.Author's Response: lol
thanks mate- glad you liked it! Report Review
i have read this before, but i just had to read it again. ( =Author's Response: cheers for doing so ^_^ Report Review
WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DIE!?!?!?!? *screams* OMG! MAKE THEM RESURRECT~~~ OR SOMETHING!!!Author's Response: lol sorry. no resurrection.
thank love! Report Review
Wow, that was just, wow. Breath taking plot, exquisite imagery, vivid charactors, that was an excelent peice. You're an exremely talented writer, I loved this story, and i loved some of your other works too. On a scale of one to ten, this is maybe a one hundred, and keep writing, you're one of the best I've read.
~*jenni*~Author's Response: thank you so much jenni. this is actually my fav piece and im so pleased you enjoyed it. i def plan to continue writing - just having a break from fanfic - but not from writing.
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Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I've spent the entire reading your completed works. I think you're a great author and I've really enjoyed everything you've written. I'll definitely be checking for any of your new material.Author's Response: wow you've read everything?? wow. thanks jill and thank you for the compliment! Report Review
Oh my goodness gracious! Gorgeous! Fabulous! Splendid!
*insert here all other adj that sound cool in a British accent*
Very VERY well written. Consistent, never OOC - all things considered. And avoiding OOC is especially hard I think with Dramione fics. Good on you!
And the ending! SO sad, and beautiful. AND realistic. Wowzer, you're quite on a roll here!
So yeah, that's all I've got to say. Marvelous! Hey, that's a good one!
Oh, and very lovely poem as well!Author's Response: thank you Jane, for all of that. Im so pleased you liked it and you appreciated it. thanks for the wonderful comments about my characterisation - it is important in dramione to stay as IC as possible, to make it real.
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I loved this story. Really beautiful written. Amazing.Author's Response: thank you so much Report Review
aw that was sweet.
and yay for the ending.the i love you part at least.
haha.never thought u harry and ron would be killed though.
but twas awesome nonetheless. :]Author's Response: thank you. im pleased you liked it ^_^ Report Review
This is a really excellent story you have to be a pretty good writer to end a great story like this in three chapters I really liked the twist at the end even though I kind of suspected itall along I hope you read wrote more soon pretty please?If not for this story maybe a new one ?Author's Response: thanks hun. i'm glad you liked it. i have heaps more stories if you are interested ^_^ thanks for reading! Report Review
Outstanding! I love it!Author's Response: thank you ^_^ Report Review
This was so good! Great job!Author's Response: thank you Report Review
WOW. this was amazing. i cried.
GREAT JOB!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
i loved it. although, he should have said "I love you" back... other than that... it was really good. Author's Response: he didn't have too - she knew already.
thank you - i'm glad you liked it. Report Review
keep writing!Author's Response: ^_^ thanks hun! Report Review
as always with your writing, Beautiful!Author's Response: *blushes* thank you! Report Review
this was really great, i hope i'm not quoting myself.. :D
so romantic and gentle ending, trully amazing.. :DAuthor's Response: thank you sonie - i'm glad you enjoyed it!! Report Review
this is veeery interesting.. i like it, i like it alot.. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Ah, I liked the story. It was beautifully written. Great job and keep writing!Author's Response: thank you - i'm pleased you liked it. Report Review
A beautiful story. I really like it and I'm glad it's not about 50 chapters long! Superb work and keep up the great work Maji! 10/10Author's Response: thank you. i'm so very pleased you liked this one *hugs* Report Review
“Hmmm,” he replied, his hand reaching up to massage the back of her neck. The cool ocean breeze rushed around their bodies, the sea waiting patiently in the background, waiting to engulf the sadness that drowned her. She shivered, and he instantly pulled her into him again, resting his chin against her head.
“I love you,” she whispered, so soft he barely heard it over the waves and the darkness around them.
What a beautiful piece of imagery there Kate, so gorgeously put, and such a wonderful ending to another masterpiece of yours. You are very, very talented :) I liked the simplicity to the ending of this, and how it didn't leave anything hanging. It was lovely, well done. Another amazing story of yours I can safely say I adored and can cross off my list... until I reread it at a later point in time no doubt lol. Rock on Kate, you're brilliant! *tackle hugs* xoxoAuthor's Response: thank you. i really wanted this chpater to be still, to be peaceful but still torn at the same time. i wanted to show their vulnerability, esp when they were together at the end. simplicity for sure. this, to me, did not need filling with bits and pieces - the message had already been given, and this was simply the follow-up to that.
thank you sweetie!! *hugs back* i really appreciate you reading this! you're awesome. Report Review
“No, Granger, don’t say it. Don’t you dare feel remorse. This is war, and you are fighting for something important. People die in war, that’s just the way it is. It isn’t pretty, it isn’t particularly pleasant, but you have to accept it. It’s kill or be killed, Hermione. You need to stay strong,” - So true. I agree completely.
“Hey you,” he whispered, his fingers following the line of her jaw. “Are you alright?”
She nodded, relief flooding her body. “I’m fine, Draco.”
His eyes twinkled. “Yes, you are, Granger, so very, very fine...” Hahaha...
I would just like to say that I love the message within this story. I always love stories with strong moral messages within them, this is just magnificent. I loved the end of this one, the strong passion behind the words you used, excellent stuff Kate. Your talents as a writer seem to know no bounds, well done! Off to read the epilogue I go! :D *tackle hugs* xoxoAuthor's Response: yay!!! you not only understood but agree with my message!!! not that i think you wouldn't understand, but it means that i conveyed it properly!! Wo0t!!
thank you!!!! Report Review
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