That was kind of sweet, really. I always suspected there was something unholy going on there, so it's good to see I'm not the only one to see it.
I'm kind of surprised Rodolphus actually had the guts to to do what he did. He didn't strike me as being particularly brave, especially if he even suspected that Voldemort might side with Bella.
Anyway, 10/10 for the story. Well done.Author's Response: :D Thanks for an awesome review!! I'm glad you liked the story!!
I've always been a little obsessed with the idea that there was SOMEthing between Voldemort and Bella :D Report Review
Well done maisie- look, you got a review- be happyful! Report Review
update woman!! this is bex by the way - my new acount!! Report Review
It was good to see that even Bella had a weakness. And odd to see Voldemort acting...human. lol, because we forget that he is human...or at least, was human.
I liked it, very good job. And for some reason I REALLY liked your opening line. "If you bothered to look at the woman in the alleyway..." just sets the scene so much, for me at least. As if I were there just walking by and hadn't noticed because since the War going on no one trusts anyone and therefore ignores everyone they walk by...if you know what I mean.
hehe. Good work!Author's Response: thanks!!! i love reviews nd yours made me feel reli... happy. thank you sooooo much!!!!! Report Review
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