please write more soon! i am loving this story so much!!

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Wow loved it amazingly done good job keep it up!

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Very good job I loved it you did awesome!!

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How beautiful lovely and wonderful keep it up

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loved it I hope to read more of this story good job

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So far I'm really enjoying this story! In my opinion you have succeeded very well in bringing young Voldy to life :). Amanda seems sweet, maybe just a tiny weeny bit mary sueish, but I don't mind. Keep up the good work!

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that was great! just keep writing more or i'll be extremely distressed. keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will hopefully be up soon!

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it seems like tom actually liked her

Author's Response: It's hard to find a balance with him for this story. I was trying to go for the way he acted with Slughorn in the memory Dumbledore showed Harry.

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Love it!! Riddle's how I pictured him to be, except a little bit TOO normal :). at least for him. Otherwise I think it's great UPDATE SOON!!!PLEASE :)!

Author's Response: Yeah it is really hard not to make him too normal for him. Its a fine line with Riddle. Though I am happy that you think I got him right otherwise.

Glad you like the story!

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wow. This is good:) The write well, and the story has really gott to me! I love the way you describe tom riddle:) Hope for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon!

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ah, please write more! lol i'm excited for the rest

Author's Response: Chapter 2 will be up soon if not after the Staff vacation depends on how soon I finish it.

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wow! i love how you captured the fact that voldemort is incapable of really loving another...i never thought of him in a lustful respect, though. that was brilliant! one thing, i think you mean to write "traitor" instead of "trader." i cant wait to read on!

Author's Response: I am glad to hear you like my story! Voldermort may have been cold hearted and without regard for others, but he was still a man. So I thought I would play off that idea and combine it with his ablility to manipulate people. Yeah occasionally I type the wrong word. I try to watch out for it and catch it when I do. More to come soon!

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that's really good, keep writing!

Author's Response: I am currently editing this story so once the edits for the Prologue are approved chapter 1 and 2 will follow. Thank you for your review!


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that's really good, keep writing!

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are you going to continue? This story is nicceee! ^^

Author's Response: Yes I am continuing this story. This one just happens to be a bit of a challange for me so it is going slow.

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are you going to continue? This story is nicceee! ^^

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I like the story so far, and I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Write more!

Author's Response: I am working in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing


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nice! i like it lol write next chapter soon!

Author's Response: More to come soon. Thanks for the review!

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