i truely enjoyed this chapter i hope you update the rest of this story soon Report Review
this chapter is awesome! u need to write more, u can put this story as A/U (Alternative Universe). i want to know what's going to happen to Ginny and the others. will u update soon please?^_^ 10/10 Harry and Ginny Report Review
this has gotten interesting. i'll have to keep reading more.^_^ 10/10 Harry and Ginny Report Review
another great chapter but u wrote "Disapparted" when it should be "disapparated". i liked when Ginny eavesdropped on the trio.^_^ 10/10 Harry and Ginny Report Review
finally Harry and Ginny worked out their relationship. and i liked to read the part of when Ron kissed Hermione.^_^ 10/10 Harry and Ginny Report Review
great start 4 the 1st chapter.^_^ 10/10 Harry and Ginny Report Review
Please continue to story. It is different from the Deathly hallows. You have a very interesting story. I am waiting for the next chapter. I like a different version. I like your writing Report Review
I'm enjoying your story. I, for one, am not very interested in next-gen stories. I think there is much more to be done with JKR's characters and I am curious where your story will go. Super-Harry paired with Ginny are my favorites. Report Review
Heck yeah keep writing! I just found it today and read it straight through. So far I like it. And, so what if DH is out now. Relabel it as AU and keep writing. As long as the plot is good and you try to do it well people will read it. I've read some AU 7th year fics that are terrific and I'm usually a canon-type person. So keep writing. There, is that enough encouragement? Report Review
i think u should add more to the story of tom duran and his attempt at hatting the weasleys. Report Review
Though it's short, it's a very nice start and I don't think there was anything that you chould have added, anyway! My only issue is that you wrote 'aka'. You don't write shortened words in formal writing, which is what you write when you're not writing dialogue. So that should have been 'also known as.' Report Review
Pretty good so far. You have me interested in finding out more. keep it up. Report Review
Oooh, I'm sensing some foreshadowing in that last line... Report Review
Good chapter, a little short though. Keep the updates coming, really like the story Report Review
omg omg omg omg omg omg! thiss will have to be myy favoritee fanfic ever!= ) pleaseee updateee soon! Report Review
arg! so good! I can't wait to see who duran is! What does manically mean? Report Review
I love how you included actual french in it (when the Delacours were speaking) but...is it just me or does everything that happens in this chapter go by a little too fast (shouldn't have to wait a while and think about it and then figure out where the locket is...) And I was just curious...did you write this chapter before or after the 7th book came out? Report Review
ooo! I love cliffhangers! by the way...just a side note...wasn't gabrielle supposed to be the bridesmaid and not the flower girl? Report Review
can't wait for your update! Report Review
ohh i hope you add soon. makes me wonder where she heard that name. Report Review
NO! it's a cliffy! please put more up soon! I'll give you a cookie! promise! lol, I'm calm-ish now... kisses! Lisa Report Review
wow nice! BUT WAY TO LEAVE A CLIFHANGER! lol keep on writin so i can keep on readin!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I'm proud of that cliffhanger, lol. I think you'll like the next chapter where the cliffhanger is solved. I just might leave another one in this one's place though, hmm... Of course love, I'll keep writing, just for you. ;-) ♥ Report Review
I enjoyed that. It was quite long, much longer than the previous chapter, but it was also well written. I Thought fred and george(ha ha funny) Yay.Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapter! Yes, it was long, I wanted to make up for the delay in updating. I'm glad I wrote it well enough, though. I love Fred and George. I was afraid that I would make their conversation seem forced, but I'm glad it worked out. :-) Thanks for the review! ♥ Report Review
Hey I like it! Update soon, I cant wait to read what happens next! That pesky Ginny=PAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it! I can't wait to read what happens next either. ;-) Ginny just wanted to make sure that Harry wasn't going to go off on a trio leaving her all alone. But yes, she was being pesky. lol Thanks for the review! ♥ Report Review
eh. i liked the first chapter much MUCH more. sorry, the first one should have been an 8... i thought it was on a scale of 1-10. but on a scale of 1-5, it's an 8. sorry about that!Author's Response: umm. yeah. I'm a little confused about this review. So I'll talk to you at the HMM. ~Aly Report Review
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