Still amazing story so keep it coming im looking forward to read more of it soon :)

Author's Response: sorry for the lack of anything updatewise. i have tried to get back into fanfiction but it's really not working.

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OH MY GOD!!! no way! throught the whole of this story i have been capitived by the ora (sp?) of your writing style! =D i hope you have enjoyed writing all of this!

tashmash xx >=]3

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. (aura, I believe)

I really think that I need to rewrite this, but it's been too long and I've lost interest. lol

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GREAT!!!
LOVING it!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your fun-spirited reviews!

~kbav

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it was good!!!
LOVE the story!!! (as always!!!)
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad!

Thanks again!

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LOVE it!!!
AMAZING(nesss)!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: Thanks so much, love!

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ooh, cest tres gut!!!
LOVE the AMAZING story!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: ^^ thank you dahling!

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really AMAZING!!!
LOVE the story!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having trouble finishing this one, so it's nice to know that someone is reading it as I ponder for 7 months. ^^

~kbav

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really good, but you spelt decisions wrong!!!
LOVE it!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: Crap! Thanks for pointing that out! D=

Thank you!

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love it still keep it coming:)

Author's Response: Tigermusic~

Thanks for the review!

kbav

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Excellent idea and please update soon thanks.

Author's Response: Karkaroff~

Thanks for the review! I'll update as soon as possible

kbav

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that is depressing. just think what Hermione and Drako is feeling and their dead... ish. update soon. 10/10

Author's Response: oni_yakamiza~

thanks for reviewing! i'm try to write it, I promise.

kbav

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This is great, though Hermione isn't exactly as disturbed by her new predicament as I thought she would be. It's all going a little fast. SHe seems to used to it. But still a fantastic story.

Author's Response: dobbysgirl~

the quickness should be explained in the next few chapters. thanks for reviewing!

kbav

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Great job!! I like the slight tinge of suspense it really adds flavor.

Author's Response: dobbysgirl~

aw, thanks so much!!

kbav

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vampires.interesting.

cant wait to see what happens!!!

Author's Response: Harry_Malfoy09~

thanks for the review!

kbav

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i love this story and have been reading it for about three days. please keep it going.

Author's Response: BlackRosesDawning~

thanks so much! i'm flattered!

i'm trying to update, but with school and writer's block, i'm afraid a new chapter may not come for a while.

kbav

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awww amazing really.
update soon please!
this is sooo tense.

gahhh.sooo mysterious.
update damnit.haha.

:]

Author's Response: groteskq fatality~

aw, thanks so much!

^.^

kbav

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Okay, I was going to review every chapter, but I didn't...
So I'll pack it all in right here.
This is the first vampire story I've read on this site, and I think it's pretty cool. And Hermione and Malfoy being vampires together forever is pretty cool too. Malfoy makes a good vampire, and I get the idea that he's kind of, in his own twisted way, helping Hermione get used to the prejudice and the night-life existence and all that.
Dominic Keaston is an interesting character. I'm looking forward to seeing him and Malfoy and Hermione clash.
I think you mentioned that you were almost done with this novel...?
I think you should make a sequel (a third sequel, I suppose, counting your one-shot). This is a good setup for a wonderful mini-series.

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

thanks for reviewing, anyways!

it's always good when someone can't stop reading long enough to review. always uplifting to an author!

^.^

Thanks for all the awesome compliments! I can't wait to write about them but I have no time to at the moment.

I'll take that into consideration, but I'll have to wait for inspiration first. ~.^

thanks again!

kbav

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I love the length. Well done. Something I'm not so sure on (and I'm sorry if you've mentioned this previously) is Harry's occupation. Is he headmaster...? I was just thinking that if he were an Auror, it would kind of be his job to incapacitate vampires; lock them up somewhere or something like that.

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

yes, harry is an Auror, but no, it's not his job. actually, you'll find out later exactly whose job it is...

~.^

kbav

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I thought you did well.
One thing: I'm not sure that vampires die in the sunlight; sure, they prefer darkness, but don't think it's deadly. Just be careful that your vampires are the equivalent of Rowling's idea of them; although there's not much we know about them from the books. Lovely chapter!
*Maggie*

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

i'm not really going off what JKR thinks vampires are, i'm kind of weaving a lot of different vampire ideas into it. just another thing that makes it noncanon

kbav

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I realize now that it doesn't matter how good Hermione is at magic anymore, because she can't use it. And it doesn't matter that Malfoy's Pureblood, and that she's Muggleborn.
They're completely equal now. Hmm.

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

pretty much, except draco's head is still a bit more ego-inflated...LOL

kbav

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The changing POVs were a tiny bit confusing, but I can deal with that. What I liked about it was that it gave a little bit of what everyone was feeling.
Also, remember Harry's reaction when he found out Hagrid was a giant. He didn't really care. I don't think he should be quite as repulsed as you made him out to be. Of course, vampire is something he could probably understand more than giant, but this is Harry. It was no big deal though.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

i wanted to picture harry more repulsed at the idea of draco and hermione together as vampires, not just that hermione was one, so i hope this helps a bit.

thanks for all your tips!

kbav

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Wow, this is really well written. :)
One thing:
'The one who’s dark and curly hair was showing out from their hood was transfixed, a strain on their heart that they had never felt before in their short life.'
You're talking about Hermione in the singular, so you can't really use their, they, or them. Use her instead; although I realize you may have wanted to conceal her identity for a couple of paragraphs.
That's it though, and that is fabulous! This story is really great; looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: xxSorcereSSxx~

i think i'm getting the hang of typing your name now...

ya, i know, my english teacher really rags on me for that, but i can't help it. thanks for pointing it out, i'll try to fix it.

kbav

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goodness he JUST realised!!
what a Gryffindor !!
seriously, no wonder i think Gryffindors are dopey!! this is living proof !!! [no offense to the offended]
i rep Slytherin!!!


ANYWAY nice story =]=]=]

Author's Response: PureSlytherinSpite~

ya, lol. there's a smart cookie for ya!

thanks for reviewing!

kbav

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HAPPY NEW YEAR 2008 !

Author's Response: L.K~

Thanks! Have a good year, everyone!

kbav

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MERRY CHRISTMAS! I HOPE YOU ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME!

Author's Response: L.K~

Happy Boxing Day now, but thanks for the well wishings! ^.^

kbav

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