o0o0o0o this is really good. cant wait for more! Report Review
yes, snape's innocent! and not ooc at all, which is perfect - love him just the way he is :D
update soon Report Review
Poor Hermione, it really hurts to lose someone you love...of course i love Ron/Hermoine ships.
I also love cliff hangers...love to write um...love to read um.great job again...cant wait for more!!! Report Review
Proof? ther is proof he didnt killhim!!!?? OK...since this is fan-fiction i wont kill you for that...lol...j/k...great chapter
Poor Hermione. Report Review
Wow...what a first chapter...
As ooc as Hermoine seems to me at some points, she really is in character (if that makes sense). People change when they are faced with different situations and i believe you did an incredible job with Hermoine, which is very hard to do. Report Review
Great story! Very well writen! I give it a 10/10, it's on my faves!Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I will post the second chapter soon. We have through chapter five written. Chapter five is with Beta. :) Report Review
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