I'm coming for you Dumbledore!! Don't be heartbroken! :(
My heart's so heavy!
Your writing talent is GREAT!
You're probably one of the few authors who has made a big impact on me with their story.
Can you write another dumbledore story? There aren't much stories on Dumbledore... (sigh)
It's not like I like him in the gaga way, it's just his intelligence is overwhelming, in the books.
Anyway, keep writing! Report Review
I'M IN LUURRVE WITH ALBUS NOW! I always liked him in the books, but now.
HAHAHAHHAHA! I sound like a lunatic, don't listen to me.
twinnies Report Review
WOW! Probably one of the best Albus stories written in this site.
Now, I want to read as much as stories as possible on Dumbledore. ^-^ Report Review
A very good story. I am sad that it is over. It was wonderful how Asher got an Order of Merlin First Class and Elizabeth got a second one. Report Review
Oh, this made me cry. The story was flawless. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wish I could say I'm sorry I made you cry, but since I made myself cry, too, it's nice not to be crying alone! --Strider Report Review
Great ending, totally great. Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! --Strider Report Review
that was extremely cool. Report Review
good story Report Review
Well, you have an excellent style of writing! I like all of it, but I'm just going to pick at two things. (xD)
First, I know you took into consideration that Phileas was the worst headmaster Hogwarts had ever known, but I don't think he would have made a speech quite as rude as that. Oh, don't get me wrong, they would have been rude, but you might have overstepped the border... still I applaude your thought.
Another is, I don't think Dumbledore would have strutted around the castle! This is a great start of a story, and it would be hard, but the idea of Dumbledore strutting insults his memory! *laughs*
Anyway, you have real talent. It really is excellent.Author's Response: I don't know...he was fifteen, and he was trying to impress a girl. I think he might strut. --Strider Report Review
update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep the updates coming, but sometimes real life gets in the way. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try to be timely! --Strider Report Review
it was hard to picture dumbledore as a young man but its starting to come together
you portray him perfectly
even in the sad ending of this chapter, but i couldn't picture him better myself Report Review
WOW!!WOW!! WOW!! I LOVE THIS! you're such a great writher, and I love seeing that side of Dumbledore that no one ever have seen before!!! thank you SO MUCH!!Author's Response: Thank you so much. We get hints of Dumbledore's past from JKR, and I've always been intrigued by them, so I'm glad there are others who feel the same way! Thank you for reading! --Strider Report Review
I have been wanting to leave a review for this story for some time and have finally found the chance to do so. I have read your story (through the 3 chapters) and found, I believe, that no one else has ever touched upon Dumbledore and his past. It is unique and something that I find very interesting. I like Elizabeth and how strong she is. The woman that has to be linked to Dumbledore must show almost the same traits and qualities as the Headmaster of one of the greatest Wizarding Schools in the world. Someone has to keep up with him. She couldn't lack in intelligence or wit. Elizabeth's strength is unparalleled and is definitely a match for him.
Your story is interesting and engrossing. I couldn't get enough of it and I'm anxiously waiting for the next update. You did a marvelous job with it and hope that you continue with it.Author's Response: Thank you do much for this thoughtful review. I was trying to create somebody real who would not ever stand in Albus' very long shadow. I try, a little bit, to actually put him in her shadow. I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it. --Strider Report Review
This is TERRIFIC!! You are an excellent writer! this chapter is one of the best I have read! Report Review
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