it didn't suck, no matter what u say. i mean yes, it was kind of boring but it was necessary to understand everything happening. sometimes authors have to do that. it shows strength and that your not willing to give up the plot of the story for some laughs. i love how you portray thisAuthor's Response: ahhh wow i really did need to hear this. thank you. :) i've been struggling with updating but this fic will always be my first love. the next chapter is almost done. thanks for sticking with me. Report Review
Finally! A good story on here. I read this whole story in one day it was so good. It was really well written with proper grammar and very few spelling mistakes. The story had a really good flow and never got boring at any point. From what you said, it seems like you take a long time to update new chapters. Please don't do that, write quickly!Author's Response: awe wow! thanks! you give me wayyy too much credit. SO MANY spelling mistakes. i really do try to catch them but i'm glad that you like this story so much and WOW in a day?! kudos to you! yeah, unfortunately i'm an adult so i have to do "grown up things" ugh. so i don't have the time to write anymore and usually when i do have time to write i'm not inspired or i'm involved in other fandoms.
but i do have the next chapter in the works! it's just not completed yet! I'll be done soon though
thanks for reading ;) Report Review
But... but... BUT!!! He can't just tell her that and then walk away!!! It's like against the laws of nature or something!!! James fricken Potter can't tell Frank he is IN LOVE with Lily, tell Lily (While in a drugged daze, I'll admit) he's IN LOVE with her, and pretend that it never happened. IT JUST DOESN'T HAPPEN!!!Author's Response: he's a stupid head! Report Review
Merlin, Remus is HOT!!! Sexy too. Anyway, I've never heard most of the songs you put in there, and they're all really good, so thnx for doin that!!! :DAuthor's Response: hahah those pictures are sooo old! i don't have the heart to edit the story and resubmit those chapters though, so i guess they'll have to do lol. looking back, the music choices probably weren't the most professional things to include but i got alot of great feedback so i'm glad my readers liked them! Report Review
Well, you certainly have a way with words... Not to mention a great sense of humour!! I love some of the lines you've got in there, some of them have kept me laughing for ages. Keep writing!!Author's Response: awe hahah thank you =) Report Review
Well, the 'I Love You' may not have persuaded me, but the 'the review box is calling your name' certainly did! Anyway, great story, and what I like about it is that it's realistic. Some ones that I have read seemed to be plucked right out of a fantasy world, or something. Still, love the story, and please finish it! Pleeease?!Author's Response: thanks! i know it's a modern AU but i wouldn't consider it too AU - the magical world is still among us ;P thanks so much! and don't worry i'm not leaving this story, it's just that i have to put a few months in between chapters sometimes because my life is crazy now. Report Review
Thank you!! I have been expecting your update for so long!! I'm looking forward reading the rest of this fanfic soon. It's really good! Thank you for sharing this!Author's Response: thank you so much! i know it's been too long. i'm involved in so many other things now... thanks for reading:) Report Review
UPDATE! This is just too good! :DAuthor's Response: ahhh! i will! the next chapter isn't done yet!!! Report Review
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. I did NOT read 34 chapters in 3 days to have to wait for more! Love the story just hurry it up with Lily and James because Lily is stubborn as fuck and needs to sort out her priorities. I refuse to accept her "Ah no one understands! James needs to apologize to me first even though I know I'm partly responsible and he already apologized" schtick. Unacceptable. So update quick quick quick so that we can get this show on the road!Author's Response: LMAO you're supposed to be frustrated with lily! that's the whole point! it's a very big thing for her, and she's so pissy and yes i know you're mad but don't worry it will get better lolol but basically yes to everything
i'm writing the next chapter still and i'm not done yet!! Report Review
People must think im wierd sitting giggling in front of my ipod... Cant wai for the next chappie! I think theyve also invited James. Whoo hoo!Author's Response: hahaha i'm so glad when people laugh out loud in public places because of me. this has happened many times and every time I GET SO GIDDY ABOUT IT. yes good. laugh and laugh and laugh some more!
currently fixing the next chapter up, should be in the queue sooN! Report Review
This is probably the funniest thing ive ever read.Author's Response: o m g.
i was so young when i wrote it! Report Review
Lovin this story, I can tell its going to be good. If you have a spare minute, would you mind checking out my stories??? Thanks. Still loving this story. Yup.Author's Response: surely! thanks for reviewing Report Review
I think Peter and Remus are so much more good looking than Sirius!Author's Response: don't pay attention to those pictures i was so young when i made those up LOLOL i'll have to redo them as i have an actual fancast for this story. thanks for the review! Report Review
this story just rocks,man!!! hats off 2 u..Author's Response: awe yeah i love hats Report Review
I absolutely love your story!!! But is their anyway you coupd keepbthe updates more consistent? Just a thought ;-)Author's Response: i wish i could, and for a while i did, but i started this story like six years ago lol. it's not my main responsibility but i am writing the next chapter at the moment, so look for an update soon! Report Review
MERRPPP I've missed you so much!! :) I hope you'll update again soon. This chapter was A+ for awesomesauce but I missed your writing so much and so it felt really short. I am pretty darn excited for this little outing. And for that confrontation with James. Mostly for James. ;)
You mentioned that you were busy with other fandoms. Does that mean you write for them? If so, wanna tell me where I can find your work? I don't care what it's about - I think you're a brilliant writer and I'd love to see what you've been working on for so long :)
CatAuthor's Response: Oh! :) you are so cute. YES I DO WRITE FOR OTHER FANDOMS, but it's jumbled and all over the place and not concise T_T they are just one shots that I drabbled into people's message boxes lol
This chapter was SO SHORT I know. So unlike me, but I Will update again so keep a look out :) Report Review
OMG I love this fic :) it's the best one I've ever read!! It would be awesome if you finished it soon, I would really be happy cause then I could finish reading the fic and find out what happens!Author's Response: SIGH I KNOW. IT IS A BIT OF A MESS BUT IT'S ALL PLANNED OUT. SOON, DARLING Report Review
OMG! Josh Hutcherson! :D I love the pic! But I would think that this would be Remus.. not Peter. Oh well! XD Anyways, I like this story a lot... The only thing is that I always thought Lily would sound more... professional I guess. I don't know... I just wanted to put that out there. But ya, aside from that this story is really well written, keep up the good work!!!
~ParvatiAuthor's Response: hahah well the pictures need to be updated but this story has a long way to go before i edit EVERYTHING... and it's not josh haha. his name is toby. thanks for the review Report Review
“I was making a stereotypical judgment on your brown locks of dung.” IS MY FAVORITE LINE IN THIS CHAPTER! IT IS SO FUNNY THAT I ROLLED OFF MY BED LAUGHING!!Author's Response: hahah i'm glad ;D thanks for reviewing Report Review
Ahhh, I freakin love this story. Sooo much it's ridiculous. Haha. I didn't see that many grammar errors so whoop-whoop. I like how you tied the title into the story. Hmm. Are you gonna write until lily and james' death? XxAuthor's Response: oh no, i'm going to write until they're graduation or their "get together" ;P the next chapter is almost done Report Review
Please upload again soon!Author's Response: I KNOW I WANNA CRY. I miss this story. It's not even that I have writer's block. but the upcoming chapters are going to round up and finish this story and i don't have the hours i know it's going to take to finish it right now in my life :/ i will literally go crazy if i don't update by the end of September. Report Review
Amazing story! Can not WAIT to read more!Author's Response: thank you! :) Report Review
Good but you ruined the plot by saying she's 15. If she's in seventh year she would be 17 turning 18, which is why she can do magic outside school as she's turned 17. Just say something about not having the patience for driving as she prefers to fly.Author's Response: Funny thing with fan fiction; it doesn't have to be canon. It isn't THAT au and I said she was going into her 6th year, not seventh? I don't know. This isn't meant to come off as rude, but I've read the books and somewhere down the line the math got hazy and to be honest I don't care because that's not the focal point of the plot and so many people have already told me this. But thanks for reading. Report Review
Hey! I just finished reading your awesome ff! Its probably the best I've ever read!!! Pleasepleaseplease keep on writing you are sooo talented! I hope your going to update this story soon ;) todles from ItalyAuthor's Response: You are too kind :) italian kisses for you :* Report Review
Read your whole story and I LOVE it!!
I hope you update fast ;-;Author's Response: I'M SORRY! It's been so long. A year I think? Since I published it at least; and a few months since this review. I apologize profusely. I am trying as best I can. Report Review
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