I am a bit concerned with your description of heather's abuse. You mentioned in an earlier chapter that your parents seperated and you did not like your father much. If you have been abused or seen abuse, please please get counseling.

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Okay i tried this, sounded interesting at first but with all of the massive canon & timeline mistakes and whatnot its a bit hard to follow. And I'm a bit totally lost on the massive amount of added siblings and such and after seamus became african american it all just became a bit too A/U for my tastes. More like a completely different reality using HP names (ps joie is a cute name thought i can't figure out if its joy or joey even though its supposed to be jane or jean)

Author's Response: that's fine. i appreciate you trying. and it is pronounced like 'joey'. it's a friend of mine's name.

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Love this story so much, will you please write a sequal, I really want to read about their Hogwarts years :D xxx

Author's Response: sequel has already been started.

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ME WANT SEQUEL!!! Really ;) I really want to know about the future thing (that dumbledore showed them) PLZ!

You are an amazing writer :) This is really great! I love it! :D ok now i'm going to read your other stories (if u have some others ;) ) 1000/10
THANK U FOR WRITING THIS!
LOVE U
MH

Author's Response: thank you so much! i did start working on the sequel but i have a lot of plans going on so i cannot guarantee that anything will come of it, as depressed as that makes me :(

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NO! NOT LUCIUS! *crying* why?. i know he were a bad guy in the movie but he's a good guy here *sobbing* F*CKING HEATHER!!! 7/10
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: hahaha thank you. i just wanted to make it so that Draco didn't come from a horrible family. i don't like that scenario. i'm a "damsel in distress" person

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VOLDI I WILL KILL YOU!!! 10/10 Haha Heather is sooo stupid
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: yeah, she's not the brightest crayon in the box

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VICTORY! FINALLY! U BITCH NEVER COME BACK!!! IF U WILL... I WILL HUNT U DOWN! (i have a thing for writing in caps lock ^^) 10/10!
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: I LOVE CAPS LOCK AS WELL!

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i know i'm a little bit late but congratz :) and plz stop making me cry from all this abuse *crying* but i can't stop reading anyway, and you are really great :) 9/10
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: thank you :) it is a difficult concept to come to terms with but i like to throw reality into my stories.

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HATE HEATHER! DAMN U SURI! WHY ARE U SUCH A BITCH?! U STARTED THIS SHIT! *crying* i hate child abuse.
5/10 (u got five cuz i don't like child abuse)
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: i appreciate the honesty


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haha suri cruise, that was a good one ;) i have to ask u 1 thing, are u from sweden? 9/10
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: no i am not, but i think that sweden will be a totally awesome place to visit one day

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WTF?!?!?!?!?!!??! 9/10
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: hahahahaha

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WHAAAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? BLAISE IS A GIRL?!?!?!?!?!?! HAHAHAHAHAHA sorry got a picture of Blaise (in the actual movie) with a pink skirt ^^ good writing but i'm getting confused... who is kayila? And 'Miones mum and Finnegan?! And why doesn't 'Mione know about her being a witch? And what is that Jeremy want to tell her? Like I said... I'm confused 7/10
XOXO
MH

Author's Response: seeing as you responded to every other chapter i am safely assuming that you have figured things out for yourself :) thank you so much though!

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Hey I just wanna say that this story is fantastic. Every little part is perfect almost professional. I love the Heather thing, and even though I don't like Hermione being abused, it's a good twist. One thing though, Blaise Zabini is a guy. You characterized him as a girl he's a guy. Just wanted to let you know otherwise 10/10

Author's Response: i know. but there's a lot of factors in the story that are completely different than the books/movies. it is posted as AU in the description. But thank you :)

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This was pretty good.

Author's Response: thank you :)

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are you going to write a sequal?

Author's Response: i plan to write two. i am working on the first chapter of the next story but there's a possibility that I will just end up writing some one-shots to cover their story instead. i really don't want to resort to that, but it is a strong possibility.

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Love your story but I have to correct you on something. The song "Lean on Me" was written and released by Bill Withers while the song "Stand by Me" was released by the fabulous Ben E. King among others.

Author's Response: Damn internet. Can never rely on it. Thank you!

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Awesomeness that was

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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all i can say is what a beautiful ending.
I wish you would had done some more with it, but it is perfect.
Thank you, I truly enjoyed reading this
1 million/10

Author's Response: Thank you :) like i said, I know the ending is weak but the story can't go on forever.

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Okay so theres like a sequal coming out right? Right? Oh i absolutly LOVED this! Love it love it! Hehe, i hope heather never comes back! EVER! But because of their dream adventure with Dumbledore, i know i'm going to cry when everthing happens. Please please please hurry! This story is da bomb! I've spent the past two daysreading it when i should be studing for my driving test, thats how much i love it. alot. please!
Gin-gin

p.s. i'm not as desperate and have no life-ish as i sound

Author's Response: well thank you :). there is supposed to be two sequels that i plan on getting to. i'm probably going to go a different route with them though and it will definitely take longer. thank you for your dedication though, haha

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The story leaves a lot of open endings, but then it would never end. All in all it was great but having that as an ending is a bit weak I agree. You should somehow make a sequel and the gaps were annoying, but then the story would be too long, it was already long. Or could you write about Suri or is Draco telling Suri she can't call him Luke a good enough explanation. Yeah Suri is overdramatic and shouldn't worry about guys, she was like 7 when she started going after Draco. But her personality suits. Megan should be used in the sTory a bit more as well. Yeah but her history kinda predicts what would've being their future. (if in the real thing she didn't marry Ron, why oh why him, alright they were friends or something like that)
PS I was going to put name as "I would tell you my name, but then I'd have to kill you 'jokes'" yeah but I thought it wouldn't be that helpful.

Author's Response: i have a lot going on right now and since the story took me 5 years, with my writing taking longer and longer as time went on, i thought it was a good decision to end it. i did plan on writing two sequels but they are going to take a very long time. but thanks for the review :)

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Celebrate good times, come on it's a celebration" Celebration by Kool & the gang
Draco's idea is excellent if only Hermione could admit. I am assuming Suri is a muggle, Hermione needs more confidence. Suri is annoying, but interesting. And Heather desreves to go to Azkaban... but thats going to happen as much as Voldemort got stopped 8 years ago when being semi-killed by Harry.

Author's Response: hopefully those issues will be addressed in the next one but it will be a while.

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Isn't Blaise a guy? Yeah okay he's a girl in this story now. Yeah I am story if it ha being pointed out. I will feel really stupid if I read it incorrectly

Author's Response: blaise is a girl in the story.

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i was so scared for hermionie oh im so glad heather is gone. she is gone right?? anyway goood love it. awesum amazing. u have a gift, u r an amazing writer. im ot just saying it i mean it.
omg thats the last one.no it cant end yet. i know it hasnt but ugh write more soon please

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really am trying to find time for the next one.

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ok im depressed now. but at least her dad isnt a pushover anymore. and heather oh heather words cannot describe the hate i feel for her everysecond i hear her name

Author's Response: yeah, she sucks big time. but since you reviewed on the last chapter i'm assuming you're ok now. :)

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OH MY GOSH!!
I LOVE YOU!!!
I totally love this story! I also totally forgot about it and had to re-read the entire thing but it was so worth it!!!
Ah, I can't wait to read what happens next! also I hope they get to like the older stage soon, I wanna see them in love!!! XDD

Author's Response: thank you so much! i love all my readers! it's cool. i kinda forgot about it for a while too. there's three more chapters and then they start hogwarts!

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