Wow. I'm speechless. I was sent here by a response to a review that I read by singerhotti24 on her story Pirates, and that was only this morning. I've spent my day glued to my IPod screen. I couldn't wait until tomorrow morning to review!
This was beautifully written and I don't think that anybody could complain about how it ended. I hope you still read your reviews, even though it was written a few years ago because you really do deserve the praise you get for it! It wasn't cliche, it wasn't all romance and fluff. It was reality - and I think that it must have been so difficult to write a story the way you've written this because in all honesty it's absolute perfection. Not many stories make me cry, but this one made me burst into tears! You genuinely are a wonderful writer. I could write an entire book about everything that's beautiful in this, but 6000 characters will leave it as a short book! :(
I loved that it wasn't one of those “Draco is destroyed from his past and Hermione's helps him through it” fanfictions. Because as entertaining as they are, there are so many. This was different in every way and you have a brilliant mind and brilliant creativity to have done this. I was so confused when I finished Chapter 24 and saw that Chapter 25 was the last one, because I thought it was far too soon to end it, but every word from this chapter tied the story off beautifully. The fact that you made Hermione the vulnerable one for once grasped my attention immediately. You really should be proud of yourself - I know I would be if I had talent like this!
Maybe I've written far too much, so I'll be quiet now!
Thankyou for taking time out to write this story, I officially love you :) Report Review
your story was so beautifully written! i could stop reading. but why oh why did you have to go ahead and break my heart?!?! Its so sad and yet so beautiful and I am in absolute tears :'( Report Review
Wow!! Just wow! An absolutely amazing story! You are a great writer!! Report Review
This is actually one of my favourite stories and it has the perfect ending. I like the way that it isn't so cliche that they end up living 'happily ever after'. This story made sense and it actually almost made me cry.
It's also very well written. Report Review
Omg i absolutly love this book, but iv got to admit im crying loads at the moment because i cant believe draco died. was arabesque their daughter??! Anyway please write more amazing books. Report Review
Bravo! I loved this, definitely a favorite. I've read a lot of different dramoine stories, but this one is by far unique and attention grabbing. I got bored with other pieces after a few chapters they all are the same, however I was greatly entranced here. Keep up the great work, as for me i'm going to check out your other stories =) Report Review
I don't mean to disparage the author, but, if you are a heterosexual male, DO NOT READ THIS STORY! Seriously, don't do it! This is a story that only a vapid teenage girl could like. If you are a vapid teenage girl, I highly encourage you to read this story. You will love it. Men, you have been warned. Report Review
OMG i just read this entire story in one standing
thiis was amazing! absolutely one of my favourites!
What's the title of ur published novel? (and ur name?)
this was amazing! 10/10
-Shelli Report Review
I seriously cried at the end of this D': Report Review
Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Hats off to you . . Report Review
Your story was excellently written. At times it was beautiful and at other times it was completely horrid. I am not quite sure how I feel about the story line though. It was a bold move having him die in the end but more importantly, how did we get there? At one point everyone is going to a nice little ball at Hogwarts and the next minute half of the characters are dead. I understand the disease part and was completely thrown aback when you killed off Ron instead of Malfoy; but why did he have to die in the end? And even worse is that it is just told in a matter of fact way. I felt a great amount of sorrow after I read this and have been pondering the end of the story for a little while now. I am happy you wrote this but it seemed to go from teenage petty problems to sorrow, anguish, and death very quickly. Your writing is very good though and I know it has been a few years but I would like to see a sequel detailing either the two years they were together, or one about Hermione and the daughter. Thank you for a good story, just try to make the next one a little happier.
P.S. I am trying to see where your website is. Is there anyway you could let me know? Thanks Report Review
That was amazing, literally in tears right now! Report Review
WHY?! Why would ou do this to me?! My heart just broke! But at the same time I loved it. Your story was so perfect, I can't help but love it, even if it did break my heart. You are a rare author. You took a risk and it paid off. Report Review
this story is so amazingly beautiful. My throat closed up and tears came to my eyes as i read this last chapter. You are a great writer Report Review
AMAZING! That was amazing! Your whole story was brilliant and I loved it! The way it all came together at the end was perfect. I really didn't expect the ending at all which is kind of nice because with some stories you totally expect the ending. I was bawling at the end, it was sad and beautiful! Report Review
I cannot even begin to explain how much my heart hurts right now. Report Review
the stroy is good but draco sholdnt have died, i mean u already killed off ron, draco and hermione could have just gone to some far off place to live!! theres just too much depression and sickness. more happy scenes required!!! Report Review
OMG! This story is wonderfully heartfelt, i was like totally absorbed in it. this is awesome! I can't wait to read the forsaken ones. Report Review
Wow... I have to admit I was expecting (or hoping) for a happy ending, that even though Ron had died maybe things would work out for Draco and hermione. That being said, I was almost in tears throughout reading this chapter and I think it was written beautifully and I think it ended the story perfectly. Your story was amazing and really captured moments, metaphors and feelings. Thank you for the story, you really are a brilliant writer. Report Review
I read this whole story in a day and absolutely adored it!~ I couldn't stop reading it and WOW the ending was so unexpected and shocking. Bravo! Report Review
Hey i'm really loving the story but there is one thing on my mind. I'm a dancer and i know you have done some research but i just want to tell you that the people in the class should not be on pointe. It takes years to get the strength to be on pointe and if you do not have the strength, it can ruin your ankles along with the rest of your body and most dance teachers would know this and would not put people who are not ready on pointe. Just wanted you to know. Report Review
That story was simply beautiful but so very tragic, I guess a big part of me was expecting the farytale ending, that Draco teaches Hermione to dance the perfect jury and they both go off and live happily together, but I think this ending worked perfectly with th rest of the story, I was almost in tears reading the last chapter and had to hold them back in case someone walked in and saw me blubbering :D The last line is just amazing 'there really was a perfect Arabesque' tied it all together perfectly! I have really enjoyed this story over the past week and I think the idea was perfect, the way Hermione and Draco are drawn together by dance is so very romantic and the whole thing was beautifully written, It can be very difficult to go for the tragic ending but I think you wrote it perfectly, thankyou so much for writing and I am definately reading more of your stories!! :) Report Review
Really well written,
One note, Hermione would not have been wearing pointe shoes, It takes years and years to develope enough strength to go on pointe. Perhaps she can do the arabesque on Demi-pointe? Report Review
This is one of the best fics I've ever read! I've read it countless times and every time i read the last chapter i have to struggle not to cry from the heartbreak that you just describe so perfectly! Report Review
This was beautiful! Only a few minor suggestions. An explanation of why they were suddenly having dance classes would have been nice earlier on. Also, just watch the writing flow in some places. This is by far one of my favourite stories. They heartbreak in this last chapter was perfect. Thank you for an amazing story that was well worth the time I put into reading it! Report Review
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