Wow, so cute! I love how brought it all together at the end :) So clever! Love how James and Lily fell in love! Great story.

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I know this is a completed story and all but I still wanted to ask why you keep messing with the timeline, I mean she writes about James being head boy but then is all shocked when he say's he's head boy and she talked about how she can't imagine sharing a dorm with him but then is all surprised she has a heads dorm... I don't get it...

Author's Response: in the beginning two paragraphs, it's written in the present tense. then, after that, it's past tense and everything that happens is unknown to her. get it? (:

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OMG AMAZING! KEEP WRITING ESPECIALLY STORIES LIKE THIS!

Author's Response: xD. thank you so much! (:

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Aw man... kinda depressing. Yes. But I like the Harry Potter thing at the end. :) :( :)

Author's Response: thank you. (: sorry about the depressingness... :hugs:

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Haha, I love Sirius, funny minor(ish) chacter.

Author's Response: sirius is love. (:

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Why must this story be so funny? :) Haha, I love it. Oh...and I love your banner. :)

Author's Response: xD. i'm glad it is! thank you! (:
and that wonderful banner is made by follow_the_butterflies... gorgeous, innit? ^_^

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Ten ton polar bear? What? Haha, that line was awful funny though.

Author's Response: xD. it's an awful chat up line that never works. :P
thanks!

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Omg, funny chapter. I couldn't stop laughing, literally! :) 10/10

Author's Response: thank you! ^_^

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Haha, can't wait to read more. Oh wait yes I can! Because I can go on and on and on...

Author's Response: xD. thank you! (:

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*sings* LOVE IT! but i don't like the last chappie...to depressing!
yes, i did read it all...um...yeah, so...good job!

Author's Response: thank you! ^_^


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WOW! That ending was so sad. The addest bit; POOR BOB!!! That made me laugh so hard tears came to my eyes.

Author's Response: (: thank you!


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the days when lily and james and other marauders where still in school were hilarious. After lily's parents' death, everything began to be so sad that i almost cried. But that Hey. I'm Harry Potter, i swear i laughed. i loved and enjoyed this story.10/10.

Author's Response: they were ): but, they were also quite sad as well.
thank you! xD.


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LOVED THE STORY!!!
IT'S GOING TO MY FAVS!

Author's Response: thank you! ^_^


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have u written any other stories?
nvrmnd, i'll just go 2 yur author's pg.
luv the story!!!

Author's Response: see my authors page. (:
thanks!


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hm.
dont really understand that last line.

but i love the story

Author's Response: harry found the diary :)
thank you!

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The end completely had me sad=[

but the story was so cute, I love it=]

Author's Response: :[
thank you!


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Hahahahahahhahaa.
I was cracking up.
Amazing work, this is so far my fave chapter.
BOB-KILLER!

Author's Response: thank you!
*hugs and laughs*

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“I have to go the Head carriage,� I muttered to Halie Danby, Claire Curling and Jimi Ruby– my four best friends – when we boarded the Hogwarts Express.

anyone notice anything wrong with this sentence? ...

her friends:
1. halie danby
2. claire curling
3.jimi ruby

"my four best friends"

DUDE! you need to go back to primary school and learn how to count!

my respect for your writing was lost in the... TENTH LINE OF YOUR STORY.
(but ill review again after ive read it... sorry, but i just HAD to tell you that)

Author's Response: ever heard of a typo? lmao.


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what?! you can't just end it!!


great story. it was SO cute. =]

Author's Response: :]
thank you!

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WOOT!!! lol... loved it!!! you rock!
hugs and cookies
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Author's Response: thanks so much ^^


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SO SAD. I love the last line. This story was utterly amazing and I loved it.

Author's Response: thanks so much :]



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i did not like the ending other than that it was good!

Author's Response: :] thank you


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i loved this story!! my only concerns were why it's rated mature. there were no scenes of sexual nature; just mild (you know because of the making-out). i would change that if i were you.

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Oh, the Validators told me to rate it Mature [:
If I put it otherwise, the story would probably be taken down or something. [:

Thanks!


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so sad. it brings tears to my eyes. ='( its terrible what happened to lily and james and to all the other people who died at the hands of voldemort. it makes me so sad. yet its strange how all of this can make you feel sad when its only just a book. but then again, its not just a book. its actually become a part of all of our lives. its wierd how one book could change the world.

sorry for the very emotional and deep review. hope it doesn't freak u out 2 much =) 10/10

Author's Response: --gives Kleenex--

It is... was... is?
I know! I frickin' sometimes cry myself to sleep... =|
GO HARRY POTTER!

Naw. Thanks so much!


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so sad. i never really realized how terrible petunia really was =( 10/10

Author's Response: Petunia was extremely upset and just plain confused. Happens to all of us sometimes =\

Thanks!


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