this is def. angsty and im more into fluff/romance but it was still excellent..i applaud all of your work...

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scary and amazing...so much depth and despriction...u write brilliantly

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That made me cry. I couldn't figure out who in the world you could have been talking about. That was excellent.

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I loved it. You can feel Ron's pain. Never expected it to be Neville, but it makes sense. Good Job.

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whoa!! how did you managed to do that?! incredible! spectacular! spectacular! (moulin rouge?!) =P keep it up!! =)

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This was so bloody good!

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I love the R/Hr-ness of it. But I cannot imagine in a bazillion years Neville betraying Hermione and/or Ron and/or anybody. You do know what happened to his poor parents, right? Good story though :).

Author's Response: Yes, I do know what happened to Neville's parents. I even refer to it in the story. And it's not a betrayal if it's someone you expected to betray you-- the fact that nobody would suspect Neville is what makes it a betrayal. That's why he's a traitor, rather than just a Death Eater. They trusted him. Strider

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this is amazing!

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this is pretty cool, i liked the last line the story keeps the reader captivated until they find who the traitor was

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was hoping for. Strider

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Amazing. Just amazing.

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