Reading Reviews From Member: mchpf4lf8605
  
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Review #1, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: Making Memories

8th August 2006:
YAY!! i'm always so excited when you update, i wait long days for the e-mail that says you have updated 'a dream of hope'. this was a great chappie, i love the twins, they are unbelievable with the pranks they pull. and percy is just a prat, but i love the whole family thing. something i've always wanted but could never quite come to terms with is all the family together. thanks for a great chappie, i can't wait till the next one!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! The Weasley family is so much fun to write. The mixture of personalities makes for some funny scenes, especially ones involving the twins! Thanks for reading and posting your wonderful feedback! I appreciate both! ~Sugar~

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Review #2, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: A Perfect Fit

13th June 2006:
so i finally got a chance to read the new chappie, it only took me a day or 2...great one...a little bit of a tear jerker during the engagement thing!! but i liked it nonetheless.
time for bed,
meredith

Author's Response: Thanks Meredith! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and posting your input. ~Sugar~

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Review #3, by mchpf4lf8605Her Name Is Petunia: Your Mother's Blood Will Keep You

8th June 2006:
hi, you said you're looking for a beta...i can help, i'm generally just grammer, spelling, and cannon, but i can help with other areas if need be, i can be very critical, or not critical at all depending on what you'd like to hear.
i do all ships except H/HR
i'm an english major from wisconsin
turn around time: 7 days or less
e-mail me if you're interested: bushmk28@uwgb.edu


Author's Response: I'll e-mail you as soon as I can... in other words, when the term is up.

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Review #4, by mchpf4lf8605Shattered: The Most Surprising, Calm and Romantic But Somehow Amazingly Hurtful Dinner Party (TMSCARBSAHDP)

29th May 2006:
wow...that was interesting to say the least...just a question, if tonks used a muggle phone to call hermione, how did hermione answer it at hogwarts? and how did dumbledore let them leave when the students were so restricted even inside the castle?

Author's Response: Ooooh, interesting! A muggle phone... Hmmm, I must admit, I am impressed that you caught my mistake! Why did he let them leave? Well, would you say no to a woman who's had her heart broken, comes from a family who could have driven her insane(not to mention evil) and is completely and sincerely and even stubbornly on your side, even if she died? I know I wouldn't. Oh, so do you want the phone bit to stay in, or does your inner magical conscience want me to change it to the magical communicator Tonks used in chapter nine?

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Review #5, by mchpf4lf8605Shattered: Gone, Gone, Lost And Gone

28th May 2006:
well...i still love remus...even tho in your fic you do make him out to be a...how do you say it..."fricking bastard"....i'll never give in to your ways!!

Author's Response: Well, that's okay, because he's actually going to be amazingly sweet in the way he wins her back... The "bastard" phase was only for the whole "split" thing. Please remember that Steph was his childhood sweetheart, so he's not being completely stupid by marrying her so fast.

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Review #6, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: The Tempest Within

28th May 2006:
ha ha...that was sooo funny. *laugh it up giggles*
thanks for the great chappy, and so long too, it was well worth the wait! meredith

Author's Response: Hey Meredith! I'm so glad you enjoyed the infusion of humor! As for the length, I don't know what's wrong with me!! They extended the word count limit and for some reason... I felt the need to use almost all of it! *grins* I'm glad you found the story worth the wait! Thanks for reading and taking the time to post! ~Sugar~

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Review #7, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: Plans Into Motion

10th April 2006:
wow...love the chappie!! what's with the cliffie? oh well, this is well worth the wait. glad to hear your friend is doing better, have a great day, can't wait for the next chappie!
Meredith

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Sorry about the ending. Every once in awhile you need a little cliffhanger to keep things hopping...don't you think? Thanks for your concern for my friend! That is very sweet of you to mention her. Thanks again for the post!! Sugar

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Review #8, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: The Lion and the Serpent

7th March 2006:
wow...well worth the wait...you did a great job on the beginning... thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll do my best to move things along a little faster for the next installment. Thanks for the post!

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Review #9, by mchpf4lf8605Get down boogie nights: Ron Weasley

27th February 2006:
omg...this is one of the funnies fics i've read in a while...thanks for the laugh...you should do some spice girls songs...that'd be hilarious!! <3 meredith

Author's Response: I'm thinking about doing 2 become 1 or a fast beating one. But yer thanks for the idea anyway.

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Review #10, by mchpf4lf8605Where Do I Start?: Jealous (adjective) - Envious or Suspisious of Rivals

27th February 2006:
wow...that was a really short chappie...but i like it still...that's kinda weird...oh well...thanks for the update!! <3 meredith

Author's Response: ohhhh im really sorry! I know it was short, i was hoping people wouldn't nitice, im not really a long chapter sort of person, i get really into it but want to update quickly for people to read. thanks for reading and reviewing!!! xxx

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Review #11, by mchpf4lf8605Dirty Little Secret: Paper plane

13th February 2006:
omg... this is the first time i read your story, i couldn't stop, i wish the chappies were a little bit longer... but hey you're a great writer, keep up the awesomeness!

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Review #12, by mchpf4lf8605Notes, Dances, Kisses, and more.: The End...

9th February 2006:
yes, this story sucked and quit talking about the cubbies like they're something special, i'm from green bay and not saying any team in wisconsin is all that good to begin with... but still neither are the cubbis... so get over them!! ha ha funny stuff... have a good one <3 Meredith

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Review #13, by mchpf4lf8605Close Quarters: Very Very Wrong

9th February 2006:
omg great chappie... keep up the great writing, i can't wait for the next chappie to come!!!!!!

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Review #14, by mchpf4lf8605The Fall of an Angel: A Capture

7th February 2006:
what a cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't believe it... keep on updating, i love your writing!! <3 Meredith

Author's Response: thanks but this story is crap, i cant be bothered with it any more :S i've tried to write the next chapter but i didnt manage to finish it, i will try, just for my fans! thanks xxx

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Review #15, by mchpf4lf8605The Game is on Again: Wedding Dress

2nd February 2006:
wow, ok so i read the prequel to this story. i love how you mad ginny evil, it makes the love story so much more interesting! i enjoy your writing skills very much! keep up the awesomeness!! <3 mchpf4lf8605

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks so much. I'm actually thinking of rewriting One Last Adventure...a complete rewrite actuall. I already wrote the prologue...heh. :-)

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Review #16, by mchpf4lf8605Incomplete: Hiding behind the potted plant

2nd February 2006:
very interesting, i had to go back and reread most of the story because it's been so long since your last update. but still it was an awesome chappie.... keep up the greatness! <3 Meredith

Author's Response: aww i know it always takes me forever to get an update out and i know it must drive people crazy!! schools a major pain but dont worry!! when they start letting us post new chapters im going to put up the next chapter... ive been working pretty hard on it and its not quite finished yet, but i want it to be really good! thanks for all the patience! <3

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Review #17, by mchpf4lf8605Where Do I Start?: Stranger (noun) - Unfamiliar person or newcomer

2nd February 2006:
i love this chappie... please, please update soon!! keep up the awesomeness!!! <3 mchpf4lf8605

Author's Response: well i updated, but it got turned down because i broke a rule :S not sure what i did, so i took a little bit out which i think was why it got turned down and added it again. thanks! xxx

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Review #18, by mchpf4lf8605Where Do I Start?: Love (verb) - To feel tender affection for

2nd February 2006:
wow, that was an intense chappie, but i love your style writing, keep up the greatness

Author's Response: aww thanks!!! xxx

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Review #19, by mchpf4lf8605Where Do I Start?: Beginning (noun) - First Part or Start

2nd February 2006:
wow, this will definitely be an interesting fic... keep up the great writing!!

Author's Response: lol thanks! i will!!!! xxx

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Review #20, by mchpf4lf8605Harry Potter and the Angel of Ravenclaw: The End is Upon Us

2nd February 2006:
wow... is there going to be a sequel??? this is fabulous!

Author's Response: well there is, but its rly crap and i am so bored of it! i was going to delete it, i havent had any new reads in weeks. but thanks anyway! xxx

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Review #21, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: A Question of Trust

31st January 2006:
this was an extremely long chappie, but it was fabulous... i'm actually supposed to be writing a sociology paper for tomorrow morning, but this was a much better way to use my time. thanks for the awesomeness, keep it up!! luvs meredith

Author's Response: Thanks Meredith! I'm sorry to have interrupted your studies, but flattered that you felt it worth your time! Thanks for reading and posting your feedback. I really appreciate it! ~Donna

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Review #22, by mchpf4lf8605When Life Goes On...: 1-in which Harry gets a nasty surprise, Hermione returns, and Ginny redecorates

27th January 2006:
i'm sorry to be so blunt, but i have a few bones to pick with you. first the word 'probly' is actually spelled 'probably', second ginny's full name is 'ginerva', third 'lou' as in the bathroom is actually 'loo'. thank you, mchpf4lf8605

Author's Response: ::shrug:: I probly like to use this word because this is how its said: probly. when its something serious, I use the right word. I am aware of how to spell it, but I chose to spell it probly because its faster and thats what I hear. Since this is MY fan fic, I reserve te right to use whatever name I prefer for Ginny's full one. it did start as ginerva but I have something in mind for the one I am using now and ginerva just doesnt fit the bill. As lou, I will work on that one. I am not brittish. I have never been i britain. So I have no clue an since spellcheck let lou go, thats teh one I used. I am sorry if it upsets the flow, but as I have previously stated, I have a LOT going on in my own life, so I dont treat this like an essay or job. Its my outlet. Ifyou want to volunteer to beta me and fix the crummy mistakes-be my guest!

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Review #23, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: The Cauldron of Fears

26th January 2006:
sry i can't really remember if i commented or not on this chappie... the story's really getting good!! keep up the fabulous writing!! <3 Meredith

Author's Response: Thanks Meredith!! I'm glad you are enjoying it. The next installment is in the hands of my beta. He has said that his goal is to return it to me by the end of the week. Thanks for the post! I appreciate your interest and support. ~Donna

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Review #24, by mchpf4lf8605A Dream of Hope: The Cauldron of Fears

16th January 2006:
great chappie!! i didn't have the net over break, so i had to wait till today to read the updates!! it was awesome!!

Author's Response: I was internet deprived for a few weeks as during our trip. :) Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading and posting your review!

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Review #25, by mchpf4lf8605Harry Potter: Prophesy Rising: Malfoy Manor

13th December 2005:
wow!! what a cliffie!! i don't like the looks of the next chappie... oh well this one was awesome!!

Author's Response: LOL Sunday will tell whether you like the end of the upcoming chapter. Life for Harry, Neville, Ron, and Hermione will be quite different by chapters end.

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