“Well, considering there are no oars, that could be a slight problem” I said, sarcasm leaking into my words. He looked at me as if I were an idiot—which I wasn’t—and reached beneath him, unearthing two oars.
Oh". - lol I loved this! Keep up the good work, this is looking goodAuthor's Response: Thanks, it makes me feel special. Also, I got banned from my laptop for a week, so I've literally only just started writing the fourth chapter. Report Review
This has the potential to be an incredibly moving story, and judging by the quality of this first chapter you have all the tools to do it justice! I'm currently writing my first story and couldn't imagine attempting anything like this yet...the summary on it's own made my stomach twist. So take a big pat on the back :) and I look forward to reading more! TGLAuthor's Response: Ahh you're so sweet, thank you! I'm really happy you think I have the tools to make it great, those are just the words I need to push me to get writing some more! I know, isn't it moving? I saw that quote and KNEW it had to be used in this story somehow! :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I love random ones! You definitely made my day! *hugs*
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